Poetry competition CLOSED 15th February 2016 4:45am
WINNER
Beautiful_Enigma
Beautiful_Enigma
RUNNER-UP:
TinaLouise
Bipolar Roller Coaster
SatansSperm said:angel feces
Ahh...i feel fucking great...i can taste life....electric...the air kisses each nerve...like orgasmic fireworks...my mind cumms over and over washing me in a sea salt spray and seagulls sing a symphonic love song...just for me...and flutterbys land on my body...covering my naked flesh.....
narcissus incognito/ nigel finley....my alter ego superhero.....
....soul shattering pain like acupunture from the inside out....trying to tear the flesh from my bones...in an attempt to free myself this earthy coil...as if climbing out of an ashtray overflowing in cancer ash and vomit....death would be too sweet for me...so i suffer
can't even fully express how much i'm diggin this!! ha
damn you laced this!!1
Ahh...i feel fucking great...i can taste life....electric...the air kisses each nerve...like orgasmic fireworks...my mind cumms over and over washing me in a sea salt spray and seagulls sing a symphonic love song...just for me...and flutterbys land on my body...covering my naked flesh.....
narcissus incognito/ nigel finley....my alter ego superhero.....
....soul shattering pain like acupunture from the inside out....trying to tear the flesh from my bones...in an attempt to free myself this earthy coil...as if climbing out of an ashtray overflowing in cancer ash and vomit....death would be too sweet for me...so i suffer
can't even fully express how much i'm diggin this!! ha
damn you laced this!!1
Naajir said:You Don't Want My Love { Contaminated Penmanship}
Inconsistent incoherent
..narcissistic..nah..
You don't want this
Unless of course you have
A penchant for emotional
Purgatory..
I do believe in Love
And it's many manifestations.
But I..have a..conglomerate
Of issues..
No..not like baggage
Not talking about skeletons
Bangin in my closet..
More like those..
Dusty old demons
Wandering..aimlessly
Inside my attic..
Each waiting his..or her turn
To have at you..
To fuck the shit outta you
Lick you
Slurp you..senseless..
Leave you sprawling...
Defenseless...
Ready to twist your haughty morals
Inside out..
No..wait..wait
Pardon I..
This was not my intent..
{Somebody} just hijacked
My pen..
Just for a second..
I'm back..
In control..
Now where was I..
Yeah..
You see..
My issues don't involve hate
Or regret..
Don't know
Maybe they're the precursors
To my..contempt..
And it is this contempt
That's been brewing
Burgeoning..
Deep inside my belly
I've been pregnant with this thing
For 20 some odd years
Like a stone baby
I refuse to give birth to
But if you want
I can smother you with
Its afterbirth
Like crimson quicksand
Asphyxiating you..
Siphoning you..
Nahhh baby..
You don't want my love..
Cuz beneath this..calm
Misleading demeanor
Lurks something a lot meaner
That hates your hypocrisy..
Wait..hold up..
Hold the fuck up!!!
That was NOT me!!!
Who the fuck is playin
Games with my pen?!!
Fuckin asshole!!
Look baby..
I would like to finish this poem
And tell you of my
Deepest emotions..
But every time I try to dig deep
I lose myself..
Whenever I try to express
My darkest emotions
Something else latches on to them
Distorting thoughts
And my pen regurgitates
This..this...
Maaaan..
I don't know what this is!
But hey..
At least I tried...
I get some credit for that
At least ..
Yeah??
Holy quicksand Batman!
This is Deep!
And it is this contempt
That's been brewing
Burgeoning..
Deep inside my belly
I've been pregnant with this thing <<<< INSANE IMAGERY !
For 20 some odd years <<<<< CRAZY !
Like a stone baby
I refuse to give birth to
But if you want
I can smother you with
Its afterbirth <<<< <<<<<<<<< WOW!!!
Like crimson quicksand
Asphyxiating you..
Siphoning you..
Nahhh baby..
You don't want my love..
Cuz beneath this..calm
Misleading demeanor
Lurks something a lot meaner
That hates your hypocrisy...
I loved this entire poem Naajir but this part really hit me hardbody
I'm still tink*ing!
If ur weren't the co~host I would have to say u win with this INSANE
Poem!
But alas you are so you win prestige and my vote lol!
Weeee!!!!!!
Zazzles X
Inconsistent incoherent
..narcissistic..nah..
You don't want this
Unless of course you have
A penchant for emotional
Purgatory..
I do believe in Love
And it's many manifestations.
But I..have a..conglomerate
Of issues..
No..not like baggage
Not talking about skeletons
Bangin in my closet..
More like those..
Dusty old demons
Wandering..aimlessly
Inside my attic..
Each waiting his..or her turn
To have at you..
To fuck the shit outta you
Lick you
Slurp you..senseless..
Leave you sprawling...
Defenseless...
Ready to twist your haughty morals
Inside out..
No..wait..wait
Pardon I..
This was not my intent..
{Somebody} just hijacked
My pen..
Just for a second..
I'm back..
In control..
Now where was I..
Yeah..
You see..
My issues don't involve hate
Or regret..
Don't know
Maybe they're the precursors
To my..contempt..
And it is this contempt
That's been brewing
Burgeoning..
Deep inside my belly
I've been pregnant with this thing
For 20 some odd years
Like a stone baby
I refuse to give birth to
But if you want
I can smother you with
Its afterbirth
Like crimson quicksand
Asphyxiating you..
Siphoning you..
Nahhh baby..
You don't want my love..
Cuz beneath this..calm
Misleading demeanor
Lurks something a lot meaner
That hates your hypocrisy..
Wait..hold up..
Hold the fuck up!!!
That was NOT me!!!
Who the fuck is playin
Games with my pen?!!
Fuckin asshole!!
Look baby..
I would like to finish this poem
And tell you of my
Deepest emotions..
But every time I try to dig deep
I lose myself..
Whenever I try to express
My darkest emotions
Something else latches on to them
Distorting thoughts
And my pen regurgitates
This..this...
Maaaan..
I don't know what this is!
But hey..
At least I tried...
I get some credit for that
At least ..
Yeah??
Holy quicksand Batman!
This is Deep!
And it is this contempt
That's been brewing
Burgeoning..
Deep inside my belly
I've been pregnant with this thing <<<< INSANE IMAGERY !
For 20 some odd years <<<<< CRAZY !
Like a stone baby
I refuse to give birth to
But if you want
I can smother you with
Its afterbirth <<<< <<<<<<<<< WOW!!!
Like crimson quicksand
Asphyxiating you..
Siphoning you..
Nahhh baby..
You don't want my love..
Cuz beneath this..calm
Misleading demeanor
Lurks something a lot meaner
That hates your hypocrisy...
I loved this entire poem Naajir but this part really hit me hardbody
I'm still tink*ing!
If ur weren't the co~host I would have to say u win with this INSANE
Poem!
But alas you are so you win prestige and my vote lol!
Weeee!!!!!!
Zazzles X
Anonymous
<< post removed >>
Zazzles said:
Holy quicksand Batman!
This is Deep!
And it is this contempt
That's been brewing
Burgeoning..
Deep inside my belly
I've been pregnant with this thing <<<< INSANE IMAGERY !
For 20 some odd years <<<<< CRAZY !
Like a stone baby
I refuse to give birth to
But if you want
I can smother you with
Its afterbirth <<<< <<<<<<<<< WOW!!!
Like crimson quicksand
Asphyxiating you..
Siphoning you..
Nahhh baby..
You don't want my love..
Cuz beneath this..calm
Misleading demeanor
Lurks something a lot meaner
That hates your hypocrisy...
I loved this entire poem Naajir but this part really hit me hardbody
I'm still tink*ing!
If ur weren't the co~host I would have to say u win with this INSANE
Poem!
But alas you are so you win prestige and my vote lol!
Weeee!!!!!!
Zazzles X
ya got me all smiles over here Z
Holy quicksand Batman!
This is Deep!
And it is this contempt
That's been brewing
Burgeoning..
Deep inside my belly
I've been pregnant with this thing <<<< INSANE IMAGERY !
For 20 some odd years <<<<< CRAZY !
Like a stone baby
I refuse to give birth to
But if you want
I can smother you with
Its afterbirth <<<< <<<<<<<<< WOW!!!
Like crimson quicksand
Asphyxiating you..
Siphoning you..
Nahhh baby..
You don't want my love..
Cuz beneath this..calm
Misleading demeanor
Lurks something a lot meaner
That hates your hypocrisy...
I loved this entire poem Naajir but this part really hit me hardbody
I'm still tink*ing!
If ur weren't the co~host I would have to say u win with this INSANE
Poem!
But alas you are so you win prestige and my vote lol!
Weeee!!!!!!
Zazzles X
ya got me all smiles over here Z
Anonymous
<< post removed >>
Bipolar ? Me ? LoL Don't be silly!
Trapped on this ride of total malfunction
apparently I'm society's idea of
social dysfunction, Bipolar you say,
You reckon I'm bat shit crazy
Cray Cray ?
Have you no idea of my fame
I'm so talented beautiful and sexy
go on shout my name!
I'll take over the universe
I'm invincible
One thousand times replayed in my mind
follow me, no need to rehearse
I will lead mankind...
Oh that was yesterday, holy shit!
am I really crazy, No I don't believe it
I know they whisper and talk about me
You know what they say
She's bat shit crazy that one
Crackers, Cray Cray
They all hate me, I can't hide
I have to run away, I can't stay
on their ride of malfunction
not for one more empty day
I'll start to believe their lies of
my social dysfunction ha!
There's nothing wrong with me
that's why I'm un-medicated
you see, if I cry non-stop for a month
than large as life for the next three
Well Trendsetters,
that's just me being me!
No Tests, Yeah/No The rapists
I'm no sillybilly,
Bipolar ??
that doesn't sound like me
I'm moving to another town
Where no-one knows I'm crazy!
Denial: It ain't only a river in Africa!
Trapped on this ride of total malfunction
apparently I'm society's idea of
social dysfunction, Bipolar you say,
You reckon I'm bat shit crazy
Cray Cray ?
Have you no idea of my fame
I'm so talented beautiful and sexy
go on shout my name!
I'll take over the universe
I'm invincible
One thousand times replayed in my mind
follow me, no need to rehearse
I will lead mankind...
Oh that was yesterday, holy shit!
am I really crazy, No I don't believe it
I know they whisper and talk about me
You know what they say
She's bat shit crazy that one
Crackers, Cray Cray
They all hate me, I can't hide
I have to run away, I can't stay
on their ride of malfunction
not for one more empty day
I'll start to believe their lies of
my social dysfunction ha!
There's nothing wrong with me
that's why I'm un-medicated
you see, if I cry non-stop for a month
than large as life for the next three
Well Trendsetters,
that's just me being me!
No Tests, Yeah/No The rapists
I'm no sillybilly,
Bipolar ??
that doesn't sound like me
I'm moving to another town
Where no-one knows I'm crazy!
Denial: It ain't only a river in Africa!
TINALOUISE NO BITCH IT'S GEORGE
(Written for Bipolar competition)
In my mates club dancing like a queen
rum chasing shots, E's, yeah I'm in the scene
music is my life, dance is my release
bitch starts glaring disturbing my inner peace
next thing I know it I'm on the floor
she'd run at me that bitch from before
then I was bounced right out the door
I stood outside waiting anticipating more
I was too drunk to stop George
with this biker whore
George stood in between both pubs
the cop shop on the corner Cooly central hub
On the pedestrian crossing she came toward me
her hand out to shake I took it to precipitate
George snarled and the bitch swung
She was thrown to the ground with 6 knees to her head
George screaming "Don't fuck with me bitch, You're dead"
top ripped open my breast out for all to see
George didn't care about my privacy
she punched and kicked that biker whore
until the bouncers were screaming NO MORE!
Written by TinaLouise
Published 4th January 2016
(Written for Bipolar competition)
In my mates club dancing like a queen
rum chasing shots, E's, yeah I'm in the scene
music is my life, dance is my release
bitch starts glaring disturbing my inner peace
next thing I know it I'm on the floor
she'd run at me that bitch from before
then I was bounced right out the door
I stood outside waiting anticipating more
I was too drunk to stop George
with this biker whore
George stood in between both pubs
the cop shop on the corner Cooly central hub
On the pedestrian crossing she came toward me
her hand out to shake I took it to precipitate
George snarled and the bitch swung
She was thrown to the ground with 6 knees to her head
George screaming "Don't fuck with me bitch, You're dead"
top ripped open my breast out for all to see
George didn't care about my privacy
she punched and kicked that biker whore
until the bouncers were screaming NO MORE!
Written by TinaLouise
Published 4th January 2016
