Sordid Summer Challenge '11!!!
Anonymous
Poetry Contest Description
Calling all dark poets!!! Write the most sinister, vile, or sickening poem you can in just 6,9,or 13 lines (no more and no less than the max in each case!)
Have fun, and they can be about anything! As long as they're about the macabre of course!!! Good Luck!!! I'll judge them and pick a winner/runner up on June 30th!
Gg78
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Tyrant of Words
26
Joined 5th Mar 2011Forum Posts: 9051
Cannibalism
Under the moonsong be creeps and vines,
Home of needle fingers and black thornbush,
A rolling of a name atop a tongue,
He chews and spits, and chews, And spits it out.
See the pale shadows of skyships of night, they dance along god's great lanternshine!
See a grim task of bones and marrows for a dine, a sweet suckling of pleasure
Unchaste, unholy, and perfectly…
Heavenly.
Silent, they stand, giant guardians of vigil, spreading their cloak of darkened wings..
Under the black carpet the creature hides,
Unseen by hunters, and prey alike.
And as tufts of hair scatter the ground,
A hollow vessel lies unwhole , and a faceless stare of a faceless eye,
And a digit cold as a deadened worm.
Under the moonsong be creeps and vines,
Home of needle fingers and black thornbush,
A rolling of a name atop a tongue,
He chews and spits, and chews, And spits it out.
See the pale shadows of skyships of night, they dance along god's great lanternshine!
See a grim task of bones and marrows for a dine, a sweet suckling of pleasure
Unchaste, unholy, and perfectly…
Heavenly.
Silent, they stand, giant guardians of vigil, spreading their cloak of darkened wings..
Under the black carpet the creature hides,
Unseen by hunters, and prey alike.
And as tufts of hair scatter the ground,
A hollow vessel lies unwhole , and a faceless stare of a faceless eye,
And a digit cold as a deadened worm.
666gothchick
Paulina Dionne
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Paulina Dionne
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 9th Apr 2011Forum Posts: 1141
a prayer for torture
Take your scalpel in hand, cut in and slice down,
peel back the skin and snap the ribs,
push them back,
reach in,
dig in,
pull out the heart,
take it,
squeeze it,
pull out the veins,
butcher the body,
leave no remains,
as what is broken,
can feel no more.
Take your scalpel in hand, cut in and slice down,
peel back the skin and snap the ribs,
push them back,
reach in,
dig in,
pull out the heart,
take it,
squeeze it,
pull out the veins,
butcher the body,
leave no remains,
as what is broken,
can feel no more.
CruelHandedWriter
Jamie Rhodes
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Jamie Rhodes
Dangerous Mind
8
Joined 20th Sep 2009Forum Posts: 1426
"I told you, 'no...
You can't keep doing this.
I am your grand daughter'"
With that the back of his hand
conquered a few of her teeth;
without consciousness she was all his.
You can't keep doing this.
I am your grand daughter'"
With that the back of his hand
conquered a few of her teeth;
without consciousness she was all his.
rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
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Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 4th Dec 2009 Forum Posts: 4409
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plump, freshly-pulled, Tampax
for
breakfast
moist, glistening, dog turds
for
lunch
plump, freshly-pulled, Tampax
for
breakfast
moist, glistening, dog turds
for
lunch
SychophanticSlag
Forum Posts: 1958
Dangerous Mind
5
Joined 24th May 2011Forum Posts: 1958
Placing the blade against your forehead, watching as your eyes swell with tears.
Gliding the knife straight down your face, crimson water appears.
With one swift cut across your throat I stick my hand in deep,
You're nearly unconcious and can no longer weep.
I clench my fist and the blood squishes between my fingers,
Grinning at your sliced up face, and no trace of remorse lingers.
Gliding the knife straight down your face, crimson water appears.
With one swift cut across your throat I stick my hand in deep,
You're nearly unconcious and can no longer weep.
I clench my fist and the blood squishes between my fingers,
Grinning at your sliced up face, and no trace of remorse lingers.
LunaObscura
Utmakalitho Petragammata
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Utmakalitho Petragammata
Fire of Insight
5
Joined 2nd June 2011Forum Posts: 655
I've been the victim of my own wrath, who else?
Now I do unto others as I mutilate myself
Shot through the wrist, gunpowder stigmata
I made my bed and now lay in lava
Scary and daring, but sure as hell fun
A gift of grim to be shared with everyone
Now I do unto others as I mutilate myself
Shot through the wrist, gunpowder stigmata
I made my bed and now lay in lava
Scary and daring, but sure as hell fun
A gift of grim to be shared with everyone
lashawnscott92
Visual Lyricist
Joined 7th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 77
Visual Lyricist
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 77
Uncle Uncle said not to tell
Uncle Uncle put me through hell
When no one was around he had his way with me
It hurt, he was so big, now no man will taste this pussy
Uncle Uncle said if I told, he would kill them all
Uncle Uncle used his power to stand over me tall
I was scared to death of him, so I let him touch
After a while it didn't bother me that much
I grew numb and cold more and more after each of his bust
I never had the strength to tell anyone, I had no one to trust
Now I'm older and he's just old
Time to rape him with a special sized dildo
I won't stop even when he says Uncle...Uncle
Uncle Uncle put me through hell
When no one was around he had his way with me
It hurt, he was so big, now no man will taste this pussy
Uncle Uncle said if I told, he would kill them all
Uncle Uncle used his power to stand over me tall
I was scared to death of him, so I let him touch
After a while it didn't bother me that much
I grew numb and cold more and more after each of his bust
I never had the strength to tell anyone, I had no one to trust
Now I'm older and he's just old
Time to rape him with a special sized dildo
I won't stop even when he says Uncle...Uncle
Anonymous
Gross entries peeps! Keep it up! There is still plenty of time left for new participants! Two and 1/2 weeks left before I pick winners! Post more than one entry if you want/can!!! Good Luck!!!
blackdahlia__
belladonna
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belladonna
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 6th Mar 2011Forum Posts: 43
On and On
Love me like a serial killer hunting for the next whore to torture & kill or like a pyromaniac
compulsively twitching to the smell of spilled kerosene reeking
at the back of his trunk. Love me
as psychosis distorts your thinking process when tourette is making you swear & curse like a drugged,
drunk skunk or when paranoia is at its worse & everyone seems to be after to get you--
Shhh... listen baby, don't be scared I'm here for you. Here, take this gun then shove it
deep inside my mouth while I drag the knife down my stomach to my thigh, to where your tongue
obsessively crept on late last night, then yank my hair out of frustration of losing grip
of what's real and what's not but I want you to carry on, in fact I want you to make every movement hurt
just a bit more until I can't stand up anymore to the thought of loving you on & on & on, just like that.
Love me like a serial killer hunting for the next whore to torture & kill or like a pyromaniac
compulsively twitching to the smell of spilled kerosene reeking
at the back of his trunk. Love me
as psychosis distorts your thinking process when tourette is making you swear & curse like a drugged,
drunk skunk or when paranoia is at its worse & everyone seems to be after to get you--
Shhh... listen baby, don't be scared I'm here for you. Here, take this gun then shove it
deep inside my mouth while I drag the knife down my stomach to my thigh, to where your tongue
obsessively crept on late last night, then yank my hair out of frustration of losing grip
of what's real and what's not but I want you to carry on, in fact I want you to make every movement hurt
just a bit more until I can't stand up anymore to the thought of loving you on & on & on, just like that.
Anonymous
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lashawnscott92
Visual Lyricist
Joined 7th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 77
Visual Lyricist
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 77
Why is everyones poems so long only 6,9 or 13 lines. just sayin......
baptizedbydafire
Odyne
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Odyne
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 16th June 2010Forum Posts: 210
Let me unravel your skin revealing my substance of pleasure
But your agonizing moans is high on my arousal measure
Making me plunge my hand into your belly you began to sing
I dig deeper to your melodies
Prancing, dancing off every organ in your body
My clitoris plays along to your hymns
Your soul submits to the choir
Cause even afterlife you still sing
Gratifying me
But your agonizing moans is high on my arousal measure
Making me plunge my hand into your belly you began to sing
I dig deeper to your melodies
Prancing, dancing off every organ in your body
My clitoris plays along to your hymns
Your soul submits to the choir
Cause even afterlife you still sing
Gratifying me
blackdahlia__
belladonna
Forum Posts: 43
belladonna
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 6th Mar 2011Forum Posts: 43
[quote]Visual Lyricist said:
Why is everyones poems so long only 6,9 or 13 lines. just sayin......
I got a bit carried away didn't noticed the instruction... thanks for the reminder.
Why is everyones poems so long only 6,9 or 13 lines. just sayin......
I got a bit carried away didn't noticed the instruction... thanks for the reminder.
LunaObscura
Utmakalitho Petragammata
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Utmakalitho Petragammata
Fire of Insight
5
Joined 2nd June 2011Forum Posts: 655
In the pitch black twilight of sad sickness, where enemies are the closest to your heart
For there’s no friends to play the part, you’d think you’d seen the lowest you could go
But once you’re in these dark lands queer and all that you fear is all you hold dear
Regretfully there is no end near because it’s all downhill from here
No matter what, trust god, ha! Beautiful words, rotting and decrepit under scrutiny
I’m too young for this shit, to pine for a bullet where my brain sits
Mourning, I awake at the feet of brimstone gates, dusk has just died yet no sunrise
Another night, I cry. Born to inspire, determined to die
Only begotten son of a righteous man, walking under water to bury his heart in the sand
For there’s no friends to play the part, you’d think you’d seen the lowest you could go
But once you’re in these dark lands queer and all that you fear is all you hold dear
Regretfully there is no end near because it’s all downhill from here
No matter what, trust god, ha! Beautiful words, rotting and decrepit under scrutiny
I’m too young for this shit, to pine for a bullet where my brain sits
Mourning, I awake at the feet of brimstone gates, dusk has just died yet no sunrise
Another night, I cry. Born to inspire, determined to die
Only begotten son of a righteous man, walking under water to bury his heart in the sand