Poetry competition CLOSED 28th August 2014 7:36pm
WINNER
RalfTheNose
RalfTheNose
I Sicken Me
I'm out of liquor.
I've never felt sicker.
My friend better get here quick,
or I might do something savage.
The nasty remedy, I've got to have it.
Just a force of habit.
Out of money, I grab it.
I'm an addict, who drinks until I'm sick.
Spirit broken, but I still can't quit.
I need my fix, I'm about to flip.
Being sober, has me looking over my shoulder.
Uncomfortable with thoughts of comfort.
Deserted thoughts of concern,
to be a sovereign beast.
A lonely one at that, who needs a drink.
Need out of my confining box, to freely think.
I've never felt sicker.
My friend better get here quick,
or I might do something savage.
The nasty remedy, I've got to have it.
Just a force of habit.
Out of money, I grab it.
I'm an addict, who drinks until I'm sick.
Spirit broken, but I still can't quit.
I need my fix, I'm about to flip.
Being sober, has me looking over my shoulder.
Uncomfortable with thoughts of comfort.
Deserted thoughts of concern,
to be a sovereign beast.
A lonely one at that, who needs a drink.
Need out of my confining box, to freely think.
Anonymous
Congrats on your first win, Ralf!
Thank you, HowlingHeart, for this honor, and my first WIN, to boot:D There was a passel of beautifully saddened words in the group...I especially thought Ennui's was perfectly said, and thought I'd be handing out congratulation, instead of thank you's.
Thanks to you, as well, dear Madame. Your a shining star among many a blinking lights.
Thanks to you, as well, dear Madame. Your a shining star among many a blinking lights.
