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Poetry competition CLOSED 5th July 2014 5:19am
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Blood, guts and gore!!!

Demonseyesofblood
Ravens Blood
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 11th Oct 2011
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Poetry Contest

Anything goes speak those horrific words
 Take the flesh.  Watch the blood flow.  That smell of blood upon my hands.  Soothe the pain burning deep with in my tainted soul.  Popping of the eyeballs, the crunching of the skull, beneath my foot.

Krosgood
Violence
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Can we use old poems or does it have to be new? And do we have to use " Take the flesh.  Watch the blood flow.  That smell of blood upon my hands.  Soothe the pain burning deep with in my tainted soul.  Popping of the eyeballs, the crunching of the skull, beneath my foot." in our poem?

poet Anonymous

There Gores Another One...





The bloody eyed demon of Four Horsemen’s screamin
for whores, guts, gore, filth, sex and more.
Guess he hasn’t heard that the pale zombie targets
were all stolen from the Bloodbath and Beyond store.
Now the skinned ones who are left with no Nazi to blast
boot scramble in dumpsters for new skulls to crush.
So march the headless who’ll shoot his dead horse.
O come all ye taints. Beat the hard rush.


Don’t you know ---yeh, now you know---
when you call for blood flow
you design your own damned death, you fool.
You smell blood? It’s your own
and no one gives a fuckin' groan
when your eyeballs pop out at the minions
who take apart your own flesh and drool.

Demonseyesofblood
Ravens Blood
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 11th Oct 2011
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Violence old or new speak your mind use any words you want.

Demonseyesofblood
Ravens Blood
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 11th Oct 2011
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Thanks!  AH2.  Great use of words.

poet Anonymous

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Krosgood
Violence
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Dead Meat
Six foot six and six hundred sixty six pounds
He swings a massive blade to the chopping block down
Grunting and growling as he cleaves the meat
Crunching through bone not leaving it neat

Blood stains the walls been splattered galore
Still can't amount to the pools on the floor
His cloven hooves trudge through the puddles
Toward the next victim people scream as they struggle

Like deer they are skinned peeled and still conscious
Torn from the scalp down to the haunches
Rolled in salt to flavor the savagery
Then thrown on a hook to savor the agony

Slow dying eyes helplessly watch
As the demonic butcher readies the pot
Licking his lips with a blistered forked tongue
He chews on the skin from a body been hung

Slurping down the last bit of a face
He reaches for the hilt of a scab covered blade
Above head and horn the swing comes down
Dismembers the body with a thumping sound

Tearing through the abdomen reaching inside
Gutted like a fish the body now dies

The entrails are then hand selected
Then fed to the next to be dissected
And boiled for a month until the bones are the softest
Then fed to the monsters who hide in your closets

JohnFeddeler
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born to kill


he never was  a scholar, quit school at seventeen.
he heard about the war, and that became his dream.

he joined the Airborne Rangers, and trained like one possessed.
as fighting skills emerged, humanity regressed.

when he was home on leave, he wasn’t out there scoring,
or drinking with his buddies; peace was too damn boring.

he fought like warriors fight, and medals filled his chest.
but when the war was done, it wasn’t laid to rest.

blood-lust was his hunger, delivering death a thrill.
a soldier once, but now: a demon born to kill.

he’s lost and loose and stalks the silent street.
so if you’re out at night, and you and he should meet,

keep a gun at hand.
                   if bravery you lack,
just hide behind your woman,
                   and shoot him in the back.




poet Anonymous

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This is all over the internet... google up the lines and you will see it. prove it's yours. We have too many plagiarists popping up here.


http://quintensangel.deviantart.com/art/Cutters-Lullaby-48926956

This above shows an author but even she was accused of plagiarism in her comments. Many have copied this poem:

http://hellopoetry.com/collection/1623/cutters-lullaby/

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Forum Posts: 3273

Sacramental



It is time to lower our heads and prey
on thick tendons, blood-worn thin.
The grey ones stumble and shriek,
necks outstretched past the eucharist.


We bound and leap for tender young,
fresh meat scurrying to futility.
Savage rhythms bless torn verdure —
anointed bones on which we feed.






poet Anonymous

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Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Oh, man, sandwiched between 2! Holy hells...

poet Anonymous

LMAO!!!  

poet Anonymous

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