Haikus of Hell
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest Description
Let's twist things up a bit
write me a six part haiku on demons, hell, or the big red man himself (not Santa Claus).
ONE ENTRY PER POET
TWO WEEKS
LET THE SUFFERING BE LEGENDARY
...EVEN IN HELL
ONE ENTRY PER POET
TWO WEEKS
LET THE SUFFERING BE LEGENDARY
...EVEN IN HELL
gardenlover
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 19th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 625
By six parts
Do you mean six lines ie 2 normal length haikus or do you mean s normal length haikus?
Do you mean six lines ie 2 normal length haikus or do you mean s normal length haikus?
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1625
6 normal length haikus. Sorry bout the confusion
gardenlover
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 19th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 625
It is hot down here
With so many people
What are we to do
What are we to do
How can we absolve our sins
Must we sit and burn
Must we sit and burn
Did my sins justify this
There seems no escape
There seems no escape
Can't beat them so let's join them
Can we see the boss
Can we see the boss
Old Nick can we assist you
Cut wood stoke the fire
Cut wood stoke the fire
A job for life and for death
It is hot down here
With so many people
What are we to do
What are we to do
How can we absolve our sins
Must we sit and burn
Must we sit and burn
Did my sins justify this
There seems no escape
There seems no escape
Can't beat them so let's join them
Can we see the boss
Can we see the boss
Old Nick can we assist you
Cut wood stoke the fire
Cut wood stoke the fire
A job for life and for death
It is hot down here
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1625
Thanks for kicking it off
Anonymous
THE SOLAR ANGEL
From the branches
Grows the twelve folded leaf
Journey of the Solar Angel
Vaporizing thoughts
Cling to paragraph lines
Vocalizing initiations
The serpent`s egg glows of depth
From it`s eyes, I seek
The staff of Hermes
My soles upon the soil
Healed, by the washing waters
Sighing, I am sightless, blind
To the credo of echoing stars
Traveling, in tenfold sensation
Arrived at the end
Thus begins the invocation
Fire for the flakes
Lucifer awakes....
Its not haikus but its based on a poem I recently wrote
My inspiration for this poem is
"A treatise on White Magic" By Alice A. Bailey
Ive changed the end (last stanza)into something related to Dark magic
From the branches
Grows the twelve folded leaf
Journey of the Solar Angel
Vaporizing thoughts
Cling to paragraph lines
Vocalizing initiations
The serpent`s egg glows of depth
From it`s eyes, I seek
The staff of Hermes
My soles upon the soil
Healed, by the washing waters
Sighing, I am sightless, blind
To the credo of echoing stars
Traveling, in tenfold sensation
Arrived at the end
Thus begins the invocation
Fire for the flakes
Lucifer awakes....
Its not haikus but its based on a poem I recently wrote
My inspiration for this poem is
"A treatise on White Magic" By Alice A. Bailey
Ive changed the end (last stanza)into something related to Dark magic
Anonymous
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HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1625
awesome ML
Satyr
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Twisted Dreamer
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i will return later for this one
exe
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Lost Thinker
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f. skinhusk men
follow the dead women's scent
elusive
u.asbestos
she breathes with her eyes and ears
(she still died)
þ.tradition
demands she wake at moondawn
sleep never
a.handheld knives
she is not very trusting.
do not trust.
r.she is hell
and you are in her now
cockburnt son
k.heed hearsay
next time; now find a thing to
sacrifice
follow the dead women's scent
elusive
u.
she breathes with her eyes and ears
(she still died)
þ.
demands she wake at moondawn
sleep never
a.
she is not very trusting.
do not trust.
r.
and you are in her now
cockburnt son
k.
next time; now find a thing to
sacrifice
3ampoems
Celine Belli
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Celine Belli
Fire of Insight
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Joined 12th Nov 2009Forum Posts: 67
i don't think my poem is eligible because it's a different take on Hell... no demons, no satan or lucifer... but i'll post it anyway!
we do not choose life
and there is no wonder why
the strong newborns cry
past life Karma reigns
over the choices you make
in your present state
there is no purpose
if we back-track constantly
no purpose at all
Hell does not greet death
it feeds on your darkest fears
while you are alive
Hell’s reality
it is shaped from what you do
it resides in you
Hell is not a place
Hell is a collective of
what you will die for
we do not choose life
and there is no wonder why
the strong newborns cry
past life Karma reigns
over the choices you make
in your present state
there is no purpose
if we back-track constantly
no purpose at all
Hell does not greet death
it feeds on your darkest fears
while you are alive
Hell’s reality
it is shaped from what you do
it resides in you
Hell is not a place
Hell is a collective of
what you will die for
Anonymous
death dealer demon
child born a hostage
the death dealer demon counts
its days, dark tunnel awaits
traipse unrighteous path
days weeks months roll into years,
dark end tunnel lights
severed maggot skins
brethren him into the realm
that hears no evil
but surrenders to
abolish pure codex stained
holy by design
we have blessed St.
Lucifer, brought St. Michael
to his unsaint knees
and bore him serpents
from demon-goddess-bitches;
a child born hostage
child born a hostage
the death dealer demon counts
its days, dark tunnel awaits
traipse unrighteous path
days weeks months roll into years,
dark end tunnel lights
severed maggot skins
brethren him into the realm
that hears no evil
but surrenders to
abolish pure codex stained
holy by design
we have blessed St.
Lucifer, brought St. Michael
to his unsaint knees
and bore him serpents
from demon-goddess-bitches;
a child born hostage
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
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D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
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WOULD KILL FOR TASTE OF SULFUR
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-163srolcIDI/Ul18XBmbTlI/AAAAAAAAPpo/cBzTjzUyrsk/s1600/The-lake-of-Fire-Hell-Horrific-Hell-Explained-Revealed-Exposed-Torment-Reason-for-Hell-Atheism-Atheists-Unbelievers-Damnation-Damned-Souls-Why-Does-It-Exist-Evil-Darkness-Judgment-Nature-Realm-Dimension.jpg
Lucifer awakes
Rising up with fiery eyes
His kingdom reborn
The devils rejoice
Dancing with the raging fires
Licking Lucifer
Dante’s inferno
May pale in comparison
Feast to the blind eyes
Blazing inferno
Tortured souls writhing in pain
From flesh, scalding
Scalding flesh hangs
From skeletal remains
The taste of sulfur
Suffocating smell
Fills the air in which they dwell
Some people would kill...
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-163srolcIDI/Ul18XBmbTlI/AAAAAAAAPpo/cBzTjzUyrsk/s1600/The-lake-of-Fire-Hell-Horrific-Hell-Explained-Revealed-Exposed-Torment-Reason-for-Hell-Atheism-Atheists-Unbelievers-Damnation-Damned-Souls-Why-Does-It-Exist-Evil-Darkness-Judgment-Nature-Realm-Dimension.jpg
Lucifer awakes
Rising up with fiery eyes
His kingdom reborn
The devils rejoice
Dancing with the raging fires
Licking Lucifer
Dante’s inferno
May pale in comparison
Feast to the blind eyes
Blazing inferno
Tortured souls writhing in pain
From flesh, scalding
Scalding flesh hangs
From skeletal remains
The taste of sulfur
Suffocating smell
Fills the air in which they dwell
Some people would kill...
Anonymous
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Krosgood
Violence
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Violence
Thought Provoker
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Joined 21st Mar 2014Forum Posts: 166
Suicidal Reasoning
Endless rows of brick
Screams echoing down the halls
Laughter from the throne
Pain is exquisite
Asking it for more lashes
Just to feel something
living once again
When the flesh begins to weep
Addicted to hurt
Calling for more blood
Torture killing the numbness
Puddles at the feet
Skin is leather bound
Scars covering every inch
More force is applied
Masochist grinning
Suicide was the gateway
To an endless pain
Endless rows of brick
Screams echoing down the halls
Laughter from the throne
Pain is exquisite
Asking it for more lashes
Just to feel something
living once again
When the flesh begins to weep
Addicted to hurt
Calling for more blood
Torture killing the numbness
Puddles at the feet
Skin is leather bound
Scars covering every inch
More force is applied
Masochist grinning
Suicide was the gateway
To an endless pain