Poetry competition CLOSED 16th June 2014 00:59am
WINNER
rachelmae
rachelmae
RUNNERS-UP:
Ghoulie
and the_lone_knight
The butterfly project (revised)
Kill me please, I beg of you,
come and take me from this place.
take away all of my pain,
please put a smile on my face.
lift me higher then the rest,
hold me right up to the sky.
let me look down at my world,
laugh and sing my goodbye.
whisper your words of comfort,
and peel away my pain.
please help me to be happy,
make me smile again.
embrace me warmly in your arms,
wash me of my dirty sins.
take my life onto yourself,
and let the sadness win.
so kill me now, I ask of you,
and I will not ask again.
for your the one I turn to,
your the angel of my pain
come and take me from this place.
take away all of my pain,
please put a smile on my face.
lift me higher then the rest,
hold me right up to the sky.
let me look down at my world,
laugh and sing my goodbye.
whisper your words of comfort,
and peel away my pain.
please help me to be happy,
make me smile again.
embrace me warmly in your arms,
wash me of my dirty sins.
take my life onto yourself,
and let the sadness win.
so kill me now, I ask of you,
and I will not ask again.
for your the one I turn to,
your the angel of my pain
"Breathe Me"
Help, I have done it again
I have been here many times before
Hurt myself again today
And the worst part is there's no one else to blame
Be my friend
Hold me, wrap me up
Unfold me
I am small and needy
Warm me up
And breathe me
Ouch I have lost myself again
Lost myself and I am nowhere to be found,
Yeah I think that I might break
I've lost myself again and I feel unsafe
Be my friend
Hold me, wrap me up
Unfold me
I am small and needy
Warm me up
And breathe me
Be my friend
Hold me, wrap me up
Unfold me
I am small and needy
Warm me up
And breathe me-- Sia (Breathe Me)
This is one of my favorite songs i thought i should share
rachelmae said:Though the heartache is calling
and the silver is shining
in the glimmer of tears that cascade
no scarlet is spilt from the wings of the butterfly
surviving yet another tortured day
a comment that pushes me a little too far
now pushed to the back of my mind
a hint of a smile and whisper of a laugh
keeps that butterfly alive
This is soooo far the most relatable and touching and deep and inspirational poem i have ever read
and the silver is shining
in the glimmer of tears that cascade
no scarlet is spilt from the wings of the butterfly
surviving yet another tortured day
a comment that pushes me a little too far
now pushed to the back of my mind
a hint of a smile and whisper of a laugh
keeps that butterfly alive
This is soooo far the most relatable and touching and deep and inspirational poem i have ever read
