new rap battle

gazellemon said:[quote-258874-DystopianMelody]Shits so bad it's actually offensive. I guess nobody knows the difference between rap and nursery rhymes.

If any of us were good enough at writing hiphop lyrics to be an actual MC, would we be posting shit here?  Speaking for myself, I like to write sometimes, but I listen and read all the time.  Tell YOU about HIPHOP.
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well said man. i guess were all suppose to be friggin professionals

anonymouslyhere said:[quote-258878-gazellemon][quote-258874-DystopianMelody]Shits so bad it's actually offensive. I guess nobody knows the difference between rap and nursery rhymes.

If any of us were good enough at writing hiphop lyrics to be an actual MC, would we be posting shit here?  Speaking for myself, I like to write sometimes, but I listen and read all the time.  Tell YOU about HIPHOP.
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well said man. i guess were all suppose to be friggin professionals [/quote]
Lyricism in hip hop is poetry meant to spoken over a beat. No professional mc or lyricist was amazing on their first try, didn't stop them trying again and trying harder. You can be more than good enough to be a professional and still post here. Shit, half the people on here ARE more than good enough.

DystopianMelody said:[quote-258879-anonymouslyhere][quote-258878-gazellemon][quote-258874-DystopianMelody]Shits so bad it's actually offensive. I guess nobody knows the difference between rap and nursery rhymes.

If any of us were good enough at writing hiphop lyrics to be an actual MC, would we be posting shit here?  Speaking for myself, I like to write sometimes, but I listen and read all the time.  Tell YOU about HIPHOP.
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well said man. i guess were all suppose to be friggin professionals [/quote]
Lyricism in hip hop is poetry meant to spoken over a beat. No professional mc or lyricist was amazing on their first try, didn't stop them trying again and trying harder. You can be more than good enough to be a professional and still post here. Shit, half the people on here ARE more than good enough. [/quote]
that totally goes against what you said before.

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I really hope that that 3 crows is defeated
By 3 seaguls! Lol.... I mean it

Why three crows, and not just two?
when I see flows, that are by u?....

I think of bird shit
(damn rites its hard w no beat)

U stink at word wit

You write the deleted?
This turd has not competed
Although he thinks he can lead it
=it stinks when u read it
hip hop can beat it
Practice? U need it
Too concieded
Few will feed it
Im new. Ill weed it....out
take your best shot
I never rest thought
"u r the best..." not!

Bring it on lmao
Hi

you need help spelling
cause man you just failing
spelling like shit
when you read this you'll pitch a fit
cause your a little bitch
some are born to follow
some are born to lead
and some just fall behind
cause they have no clue in there mind
madintellect i'm talkin to you
and yo name don't fit you
cause you ain't gotta clue what to do
friends with few
what else is new
just another boaster
well imam pro roaster
and i'll toast ya
chew you up
spit you out
cause every line you say
just brings doubt

Madintellect said:I really hope that that 3 crows is defeated
By 3 seaguls! Lol.... I mean it

Why three crows, and not just two?
when I see flows, that are by u?....

I think of bird shit
(damn rites its hard w no beat)

U stink at word wit


i'm three crows
I hang wit da pros
I'll shit on yo head
and peck ya till your dead

Three.crows you.suck... Spelling? Ha ha ha thats all u got. your the bitch. Id fucking smash you out and leave u for the crows.. Nice name

Honastly is that all u got?
Your dilustional pal.  Wow

Yaaaawn cheers bud

Im inspired
But if rhyme is work?
Then your fired
Your
Not admired
Your spot expired
Your not desired
Yyyaaaaaawn

Three crows
fuck your flea flowz
Your stuck w these hoes
You stink so bad.. You can-
Be smelled w no nose

It smells bad
And the tale it  tells?
Is sad

At present
What u think is working..
Just doesn't

go pound sand
Flow sound grand?

Nope
but thats a.tripple rhyme
Thats not in-
Your scope

If im alone? I.still cheer
Words are thrown-
Like 10 spear

That can steer
The end near

As far as this goes...

I leave scars with flows

And oppose wars, and crows
With force, who knows
Who will be choose....

I willing to bet its not you
You must be hufin hot glue

Lets make it clear, quit stirring the pot
Because this stew is boiling hot
To spoil your plot

Your a royal snot

Turmoils got..


By the balls
your on the side-
That falls

Ill stop you like walls
And lure you-
With  my crow calls hahaha

Crows are annoying
These flows-
Im enjoying

What Impose
Is destroying u

Deleted?
why cant it be u!

Your rants are staight poo

checkmate Is overdue
Ill affect fate
Tommorow too..

Youll feel defeat, cause your scum

YOU WILL BE
BEAT LIKE A DRUM

yaaaaaawn hahahaha

You loose! The end;)

Im cheering for me

Back up? Not needed
Now shut up
And just stay seated

Your poems? You'd have...
Lol to pay, to be readed

Ok.your defeated
never challange or
Its repeated

I silence those who competed

Fucking three crows?!  Bwah ah ahah
your a joke

Youve been burned,
now except that u smoke

Do not provoke

Yaaaaaawn.....

Your gone
Whore spawn

This wars done.

Madintellect still reading Dr. Seuss
Can't understand all this verbal abuse
I'll lay it down straight to see what you produce
Lemme go now, I'm bouta break loose

From this game so soft
From a mind unwashed
Playing double rhymes
To try and win at any cost
Dissing alla those who can spit it much better
Saying shit like that like you've got a vendetta
Against the rest ov us who know

Who started this was Crow
Sitting thrice upon a wire
Watching all ov us burn
On a pyre - unholy fire

Madintellect said:Three.crows you.suck... Spelling? Ha ha ha thats all u got. your the bitch. Id fucking smash you out and leave u for the crows.. Nice name

Honastly is that all u got?
Your dilustional pal.  Wow

Yaaaawn cheers bud

Im inspired
But if rhyme is work?
Then your fired
Your
Not admired
Your spot expired
Your not desired
Yyyaaaaaawn

Three crows
fuck your flea flowz
Your stuck w these hoes
You stink so bad.. You can-
Be smelled w no nose

It smells bad
And the tale it  tells?
Is sad

At present
What u think is working..
Just doesn't

go pound sand
Flow sound grand?

Nope
but thats a.tripple rhyme
Thats not in-
Your scope

If im alone? I.still cheer
Words are thrown-
Like 10 spear

That can steer
The end near

As far as this goes...

I leave scars with flows

And oppose wars, and crows
With force, who knows
Who will be choose....

I willing to bet its not you
You must be hufin hot glue

Lets make it clear, quit stirring the pot
Because this stew is boiling hot
To spoil your plot

Your a royal snot

Turmoils got..


By the balls
your on the side-
That falls

Ill stop you like walls
And lure you-
With  my crow calls hahaha

Crows are annoying
These flows-
Im enjoying

What Impose
Is destroying u

Deleted?
why cant it be u!

Your rants are staight poo

checkmate Is overdue
Ill affect fate
Tommorow too..

Youll feel defeat, cause your scum

YOU WILL BE
BEAT LIKE A DRUM

yaaaaaawn hahahaha

You loose! The end;)

Im cheering for me

Back up? Not needed
Now shut up
And just stay seated

Your poems? You'd have...
Lol to pay, to be readed

Ok.your defeated
never challange or
Its repeated

I silence those who competed

Fucking three crows?!  Bwah ah ahah
your a joke

Youve been burned,
now except that u smoke

Do not provoke

Yaaaaaawn.....

Your gone
Whore spawn

This wars done.


yo rhyming is lame
makin fun of my name
like ive heard it enough
and its not that rough
I can take all these thing you throw
cause i'm more than one crow
its just a name
I had for a band
it could be its own brand
but I don't have one so I used it here
and its becoming quite clear
that everyone malks the same thing
and I don't care
you should go look up the definition of
insane

Not bad...But your thought sadAnd im hot redYou'll be chopt dead
Layed out like a bed spreadU must beoff your med kid
You'll end up aDead squid
You should've hidThenYou could've rid

Your self from being slainBut I dont think u hav a brain

U know what, U Show slut?You've been cutBy an obscene nut

You cant keep it goingWith the rant that your flowingand U've waisted your time-But not knowing
Time for start rowing...

Your up shit creekSo shutYour quiff beakbecauseYour skills weakand mine? ItsA real creek..
During a monsoon.I really hope that-Your gone soonU cant float-Like a pon-toon
And you willSink in this pond soon.
This creek of flowWill speak & show
U cant reach-The peak I go.....(to everytime)
U aint got no deadly rhyme
U think your ahead? Thats fine
This ones mineFirst time
I burst rhymeWith a thirst crime
To murder your wordsBecause your not first=you will rot, cursedyou've now-Been thought nursed
silence is suggestedIm word violence infestedYour unrequested
Take a rest kid
The best get dusted
This quest you've lusted?
Is over now...
now i'll take-A sober bow
As winner.
Your a snack.I flow dinner
Go ahead &Let the crow enter

Its time you for u too shut your beakand not speak
Your pissin in the windyour diss dont offend

im hardly tenseOk. There smarty pant?
You need some senceCause these rhyme I swing?
Are leavin prints

Saytr is thats name?Your climbingThe ladder the shameSo make your claimwhile I rake ur brain
Im great. Your slainI hate your name
To late to dreamMasterbate is the same
As challanging me.
do u get it?U fuck your self
You just read it
U need a dust medic lol





 


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Madintellect said:Saytr is thats name?Your climbingThe ladder the shameSo make your claimwhile I rake ur brain
Im great. Your slainI hate your name
To late to dreamMasterbate is the same
As challanging me.
do u get it?U fuck your self
You just read it
U need a dust medic lol



Lemme tell you now, in this game called rap
The shit that you spit is nothing but crap
You fuck with the Satyr, you get the horns
Twisted by Herod, like Christ's crowned thorns

You can say that I'm slain, you can think you've won
Your existence is my bane, coming at you like a Bofors gun

The ladder I climb is the philosophical kind
One you cannot find in the prison you're confined
The darkness ov your soul
Where I shall gain control
My eyes as black as coal
Guess what? No parole

For you, that'd be too nice
Since my words are made ov ice
This pseudonym is my disguise
Your caprice for rhyme -
Ultimately your demise

Lol thats funny..

Your eyes black coal:D i'll shackle your soul
Are u on crack? I think so.

You have phycosis, thats fine
Its all in your mind...

That fact is your really just a person

With a reality perversion lol


Its a good occurs when..



I read your stuff

But I call your bluff

Your weak. Not tuff

Horns? Enough!


Of your dillusional fantasy

your conclusion? Should be to plan to see


The devils not real, god dammit the..


Shit you say...

is not ok

Just walk away

You rock? No way

Think this rap? Ok


But its not

your mentally insane, and I hope u caught


Talking crazyness

The doctors will take your piss


And check drugs

I dont respect slugs



Who believe in delusions

You need institution


to moniter u

I mean that, no joke.

Your fucking nuts


The devil:D bwah ahaha

U gotta be kidding

Who the F u pretend to be..


Is your bussiness...

Coo.coo.catcho

Its time to grow up and stop living in fantasy land

Its too late to defend

drop your hate you send
Your literally crazy my friend
the end

yall keep fightin' its fun to watch
if ya stand still Ill kick ya in the croutch
your words ain't rhymin
its all in the timin
yall fakers aint got face
and yall stickin out of place

(drop dat  beat yo)

look at you makin fun of names
is this the way you play all yo games?
bet yall ain't got no self-esteem
maybe yall should be on the same team
sure you would go 0 and 16
like the Detroit lions
just losers ain't in no pride
like a nascar driver
out of a ride
listen to me talk oh so sly
here my words on da fly
this is crazy
yall both need some kinda med
now excuse me while I
while delclair this battle dead