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Poetry competition CLOSED 25th March 2014 9:11pm
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Debbie Does Neverland - Rated [X]

case28
Alexander Case
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Poetry Contest

Take a porn star, serial killer, horror villain and insert them into a children's bedtime story.
Choose any tainted character from your favourite [R] or [X] rated film and unleash them into a fairytale or fantasy world from children's literature. Give me graphic details of debauchery, blood, lust, gore with one fucked up classic fairytale or Disney plot ripped to shreds in your character's wake.

Comp details:
- new poem or prose
- one entry per poet
- max. 750 word limit
- no collabs
- extra bonus points given to kick-ass titles
- all entries will be ranked by independent judges

Remember, keep it simple to terrify small minds and give those little fuckers nightmares.  


lepperochan
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Blow Right, the Lamb, and the seven dinners


The soft knock on the door interrupted dinner. Grumpy made his way over and opened it. the man in the doorway smiled and asked if he could come in and rest for a few hours. he said he'd been chased through the forest by some very unsavoury beings.

"I'm not fucking happy" grumpy snarled. the man laughed and replied "oh, which one are you fucking then?" and made his way into the room. Blow Right batted her eyes and asked if he'd like something to eat. "I should introduce myself first, hello my name is Hannibal, pleasure to eat ..I mean meet you"

Blow right blushed because she assumed Hannibal was implying exactly what she was thinking. "time for bed dwarfs, there's a lot of work to be done in the morning". she bent down and kissed each of the seven on the forehead.

when they were safely out of earshot Blow Right sighed. "Jesus Christ, it's hell living with these dwarfs, none of them can fuck to save their lives, I've tried them all, tried three at a time but still nothing, but I have to let them try or else I'll have nowhere to stay.  

Hannibal walked over to her. rested his hands on her shoulders then ripped her dress down. Blow Right gasped. she stood naked and quickly freed Hannibal's erection. she sucked, then they fucked like rabbits. she screamed with delight and shuddered like an epileptic when she squirted cum all over his shaft. then touched her toes and begged him to fuck her ass. he thrust himself into her. she cried out in pain, so he thrust harder and harder, pulled her hair back hard so he could cum on her face. they sat and smoked.

"I can help you, if you let me" Hannibal said. " ask that grumpy bastard to get out of bed and fetch some wood with me "  Blow Right nodded and got Grumpy out of bed. the two of them went out to the wood shed. Hannibal asked Grumpy to hold a log so he can split it with the axe. then brought it hard into his head. then ripped him open from his balls to his neck, feasted on his insides while they were still warm.

..to be continued

poet Anonymous

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HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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I'm here. This seems like a wonderfully sadistic idea. My hat's off to you, Case, for coming up with this.

CellarDoor954
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Hell yeah, this'll be fun!

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
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... porn & Disney at bedtime - works for me

crimsin
Unveiling
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Case this is one wicked idea if I can come up with something twisted I'm in

snugglebuck
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HEDGEHOG TO THE RESCUE

Shane and Sia, twin Barbie dolls
Loved little animals sweet and small

Then one day an evil villain
Sent them videos of him killing kittens

His name was Dr. Magnatta
He even killed people with a chain saw

The poor little Barbie’s didn’t know what to do
Till their friend “The Hedgehog’ came to their rescue

With an offer to audition for pornography
Dr. Magnatta threw aside his cloak of anonymity

So instead of a sexual audition
Magnatta is spending life in prison

Now little children
Before you dismiss me as a poetic fool
Consider this,
Everything I told you is absolutely true

poet Anonymous

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HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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IN SINDERELLA, CUMS DARKNESS


Featuring Cinderella and Darkness from Legend

From castle walls to haunted moors
Cums a fair haired beauty licking the whores
Kneeling in woods at the pentagram
Her name, in fresh blood, known across the land

Of all devils, she only wants one
She longs for wretched birth, give her a son
He steps through fires, deed is done
Sinderella in awe, Darkness has come

The wicked step-witches laid bare
With their virgin flesh spread open to tear
Sinderella let's her gown shift
And behold glass dildo, just the right fit

Untold splendors under the moon
All for Darkness to watch and swoon
Stiffens devil's shaft like a broom
Friction, make room
For the blood-skin devil needs to eat
Mounds of moistened meat
Under pagan-laden dooms

Foreplay is over, it is time
As Sinderella lays bare on dead pine
Needles strewn across the wood's floor
Awaiting the moistened flesh of the whore

Cloying smells, forbidden incense
Masking the scene of forbidden incest
Step-witches work their fingers as
The devil, Darkness, slips it in her ass

In throes, they moan under the trees
Sinderella kneels sucking on her knees
Lost in ecstasy, she gives in
From sucking to the fucking, every whim

When all is done, they collect the semen
Freshly pumped from the cock of the demon
They praise the pits and curse heavenly skies
With this juice they'll let loose The Anti-Christ

liz
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                                                         Red Riding Whore
                               
                                                          Red hood cloak
                                                          no panties underneath,
                                                          whip cream and apples
                                                          in her basket
                                                          skipping roughly to grannies house
                                                          with a silk blanket
                                                          Mr. Wolf waiting impatiently
                                                          on grannies bed
                                                          ask red riding whore
                                                          to bend over for a loaf of bread
                                                          Mr.Wolf aroused with what he have seen
                                                          gets hard like wooden tree
                                                          red riding whore come to me
                                                          dance under these sheets
                                                          and forever after,
                                                          fuck till we fall a sleep

       
   
             

gardenlover
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In a wood a maiden stood rejected by her mother
She was too beautiful for this vain bitch so she was cast asunder

Snow White was beautiful as we have said and for her age mature
And when you got to know her she was not demure

She came across this cottage in a woodland clearing
It was the home of seven dwarfs who always worked until evening

They came home and found her, boldly sitting in their chair
She asked if she could stay and serve their needs and her body share

It was soon agreed that each dwarf would have a night a week with her
She was delighted with this scheme so she did not demur

Sunday night it was Doc
The leader of the pack
He entered her with gusto
He really had the knack

Monday it was Dopey
The silent clumsy one
She didn't mind his fumbling
As long as he made her come

Tuesday it was Bashful's turn
He was so very sweet
She had to coax him to undress
So their genitals could meet

Wednesday was a difficult night
Grumpy was so hard to please
But she soon found that deep down
He was easy to appease

Thursday was the turn of Sneezy
His sneezes could blow her away
She let him fuck her very quickly
And then soon send him on his way

Friday was a different problem
How to keep Sleepy alert
When he dropped off in mid action
She used her mouth to make him spurt

Saturday was Happy's day
A pleasure for both to enjoy
They fucked in every position
To find one that brought most joy

This arrangement went on for years the outside world forgotten
An evil prince* rode by, Snow White was alone, so he fucked her rotten

The seven dwarfs were not pleased at this cruel event
They were livid that he'd fucked her without their consent

They gathered friends and went to war with the prince's kingdom
They beat him and his army, giving his people freedom

Snow White became the Queen the seven dwarfs her consorts
She continued to fuck them day by day according to reports

*The Evil Prince is Prince Charming from Shrek the Third



case28
Alexander Case
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Debbie Does Toy Story and the Adventures of Buzz Light Ring…


surely there are more twisted mofos out there.


Thank you for all the demonic disney [anal] scenes, my poets of the Netherlands… you sick poets. Walt would be turning in his grave only to be fucked up the [preverbal] mouseketear by Tinkerbell wearing a strap-on idol in the shape of Goofy. [Tinkherbell and Goofy??? As if Walt Disney wasn't a twisted fuck????]


ML do we need to increase the number of entries to [2] or bump up the word count??? It's your call twisted mother superior. ;)

poet Anonymous

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HadesRising
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I can do two???? I shall return

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