Tell me what can fuck off

Title your work

not too long (let's say under 200 words)

everyone start with the same sentence (given)

I'm looking for passionate anger here!

one week, inbox questions to me please

this will be judged with the assistance of Mr. Carpe_noctem

INTRO
Nothing is more fucked up than

Prose acceptable?

prose or poetry
:-)

Industrial Can of Whoopass Worms

Nothing is more fucked up than
a tin man in a garbage can,
enjoying every dump of brains,
waste fecal and blood bathed remains.
Whe’er human, veg’table or beast
tin soldier heartless fiercely feasts.
Trading axe for shark toothed jaw,
he mangles women raw with saw
of same.

In whose unholy name
does he perform these feats of public gore
then call US all “poetry whores”?
I’ll never understand the thrill
Of fucking with dead meat’s ill chill.

‘Tis sad, this piss poor rant you’ve read
but sadder still the heart bled dead.

thank's for kicking this off, Artina
:-) nice job

Enjoy your comp, Miki and Carpe. :)

Nothing is more fucked up than living a lie
Wondering if anyone will find out before you die
I hate myself for doing such things back then
When I think about it, I blow up, over and over again

The fact that you took all that time away from me
When you wasted the minutes and the person I wanted to be
I hate you for doing such things and for what you took
It wasn’t like you loved me or even cared if I lived or how I’d look

Go to hell you heathen from outside of this world
With you I always ended up in the fetal position body curled
I hate how great you were at first, always there and warm
But after a few minutes, you’d unleash such a storm

I wouldn’t care if you died this very day
Because I know that I’d be better without you anyway
I hate that you think you owned me
And when you were there, you threw away the key

Go pound sand, that life has to end soon
Because of you, I cannot trust, love, or listen to a tune
I hate me for reminiscing, crying, never showing a smile
Without wanting a future, and without you, I have started to defile

My beauty, my youth, you took all of it so fast
Oh how I hated each and every second of that past
I hate that you live on, and people just praise your amber hue
Because if I had my way, I’d break each and every one of you

How angry am I, just look back and you will see
I’ve stayed away for some time now, to recapture what was left of me
I hate myself so much for allowing you in
And my anger jumps out at those I love; I live in sin

Fuck off, you bastard, you bitch, whatever you think you are
Stay away, leave me alone, don’t rear your ugly head, or show up to take me to a bar
I hate that you exist, that you call, that you remain alive and willing
To take over my life any day now, to hasten my death, you must enjoy killing

The Devil said give me a call

Nothing is more fucked up than
late night phone sex infomercials
half-dressed sexy ass women
prancing around holding a damn telephone
Satans direct hot line 1-900-ULONELY
flashes at the bottom of the screen
just below her massive tits
playing peek-a-boo with a halter top
I hope you die a miserable death inventor of the phone sex guy
you knew a brother would be fucked up by this time of night
owning a credit card that doesn’t register time
the smack is working and the bitch sounds good
I fucking hate you
you intelligent bastard  

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We have only scanned over these this far, but thank you all!
looking good--you all always make it hard to judge these :-)

Text Talk

Nothing is more fucked up than
writing your ass off and using text
talk at the same time whether on
paper or computer or cell phone
and all through it you becomes
u and to/too becomes 2 or you're
gets turned into ur that shit
really pisses me off
If you've taken the time to spell
other words why not just add the
damn y and o to u and so on if it's
not a text message don't use text talk
it makes you look dumb and my
eyes start to bleed

So, im guessing it's limited to one entry?

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LOL  --oh, they have plenty of self-esteem to afford a little paring down.....