Ways to Mesh
whale
24
Joined 9th Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 233
Dangerous Mind
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SALT
Then give your cold feet
To my body heat and give my lips
A parting petal in the snow.
Give way to full weight
As hips lift, stars light in dark pits
And hunger surrenders to, to and fro.
And words I mouthed in water
Beat tattoo upon your body
Petals pressed in linen sheets
Pressed against a mirror.
And pestle meshed with mortar,
Leaves salt upon the snow.
Then give your cold feet
To my body heat and give my lips
A parting petal in the snow.
Give way to full weight
As hips lift, stars light in dark pits
And hunger surrenders to, to and fro.
And words I mouthed in water
Beat tattoo upon your body
Petals pressed in linen sheets
Pressed against a mirror.
And pestle meshed with mortar,
Leaves salt upon the snow.
gardenlover
23
Joined 19th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 625
Fire of Insight
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Thanks to all the contributors. Difficult to judge.
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Congratulations to Solomon_Song! And thank you gardenlover for a fun and interesting competition!