Poetry competition CLOSED 24th October 2013 2:15am
WINNER
praveengola
praveengola
No 'E' in POEM
Poetry Contest Description
Read below....
Wikipdia
Wikipdia is a multilingual, wb-basd,
fr-contnt ncyclopdia projct supportd by
th Wikimdia Foundation
and basd on an opnly ditabl modl.
Th nam "Wikipdia" is a portmantau
of th words wiki (a tchnology for crating collaborativ wbsits,
from th Hawaiian word wiki, maning "quick")
and ncyclopdia.
Wikipdia's articls provid links
dsignd to guid th usr to
rlatd pags
with additional information.
Wikipdia is writtn collaborativly
by largly anonymous Intrnt voluntrs
who writ without pay.
Wikipdia is a multilingual, wb-basd,
fr-contnt ncyclopdia projct supportd by
th Wikimdia Foundation
and basd on an opnly ditabl modl.
Th nam "Wikipdia" is a portmantau
of th words wiki (a tchnology for crating collaborativ wbsits,
from th Hawaiian word wiki, maning "quick")
and ncyclopdia.
Wikipdia's articls provid links
dsignd to guid th usr to
rlatd pags
with additional information.
Wikipdia is writtn collaborativly
by largly anonymous Intrnt voluntrs
who writ without pay.
It is a pretty good comp idea Vizard so are you with me? I'll edit that thing I put up there and give you a real poem as you asked if you edit those articles that you copied and pasted into the history comp and replace at least one of them with a real poem.
Blazing
It's not a good thought
to display work that's
not yours
and think
it will lift
your mind.
All growth
is from pain
and your slip
is showing
again.
High opinions
will stay low
as long as
you spit up
rubbish.
Push it
along, birth your
own ink.
Your path still
stinks.
Look, this work
starts in my
mind. Sixty
words and
counting.
And not a
solitary
wisp
or sigh
of that
appalling
copy cat.
75 words. No E's
It's not a good thought
to display work that's
not yours
and think
it will lift
your mind.
All growth
is from pain
and your slip
is showing
again.
High opinions
will stay low
as long as
you spit up
rubbish.
Push it
along, birth your
own ink.
Your path still
stinks.
Look, this work
starts in my
mind. Sixty
words and
counting.
And not a
solitary
wisp
or sigh
of that
appalling
copy cat.
75 words. No E's
Anonymous
Anonymous said:<< post removed >>
so you're some big personality?
you're openly admitting to stealing?
what fuck does shah rukh kunt have to do with poetry?
if that's making a mountain of a mole hill... then you're on a completely different planet my friend.
keep a leash on that thing you so boast about, you're not the only (wannabe)poet in the world.
if you can't be original then don't be a fake.
respect isn't given. it's earned.
from the way you behave it looks to me you're still a child. even teenagers have the sense to know when they're wrong.
disappointing.
so you're some big personality?
you're openly admitting to stealing?
what fuck does shah rukh kunt have to do with poetry?
if that's making a mountain of a mole hill... then you're on a completely different planet my friend.
keep a leash on that thing you so boast about, you're not the only (wannabe)poet in the world.
if you can't be original then don't be a fake.
respect isn't given. it's earned.
from the way you behave it looks to me you're still a child. even teenagers have the sense to know when they're wrong.
disappointing.
Anonymous said:<< post removed >>
Vizard, as far as I had seen, DUP's been extremely polite enough in bearing up with mistakes...giving n-number of chances to correct them, may it be those recently ousted controversial members or those still having their joy-run with multiple profiles for disturbing/self-advantageous causes. I sense something v.wrong in ur approach & I say this as a fellow Indian for your good. Pls, learn to accept mistakes & if you do have accepted, do not repeat them.There's no point in just giving meaningless replies to everyone, esp. those who are DU's undisputed talent pools (& I am not doubting/judging your talent in any way here)
Hope I make sense in my point & this is not a comp. entry obviously!
Vizard, as far as I had seen, DUP's been extremely polite enough in bearing up with mistakes...giving n-number of chances to correct them, may it be those recently ousted controversial members or those still having their joy-run with multiple profiles for disturbing/self-advantageous causes. I sense something v.wrong in ur approach & I say this as a fellow Indian for your good. Pls, learn to accept mistakes & if you do have accepted, do not repeat them.There's no point in just giving meaningless replies to everyone, esp. those who are DU's undisputed talent pools (& I am not doubting/judging your talent in any way here)
Hope I make sense in my point & this is not a comp. entry obviously!
Patch-Up wait
A starting fight ,
How other show its trait?
A topic must...
Hot and bait.
I am trying....
to pour Love ,
For those....
Who Stuck.
This is a Forum ,
Not a ground....
So try to patch up ,
without any sound.
Why Going Mad?
This trick is not bad ,
If You will plan....
Than sit in front man.
Humans are Mastro ,
Can build a high wall,
what is important ,
That should a call.
"Vizard" and "Bragg",
Both Had traits ,
But poor thoughts ,
could Not Find a "Patch-Up wait".
A starting fight ,
How other show its trait?
A topic must...
Hot and bait.
I am trying....
to pour Love ,
For those....
Who Stuck.
This is a Forum ,
Not a ground....
So try to patch up ,
without any sound.
Why Going Mad?
This trick is not bad ,
If You will plan....
Than sit in front man.
Humans are Mastro ,
Can build a high wall,
what is important ,
That should a call.
"Vizard" and "Bragg",
Both Had traits ,
But poor thoughts ,
could Not Find a "Patch-Up wait".
