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Anonymous: Part One - Critique

poet Anonymous

Edit: deleted to move list with my critique.

Gg78
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1. Hear My Call - Poet: intricate B

2. Present Damned - Poet: no idea but I'm gonna guess with sixx

3. The seventh day - Poet: atakti

4. Mind Maze - Poet: Gemini

5. How fucking sweet - Poet: devilish

6. PURE - Poet: Evan

7. A new face - Poet: johnrot

8. feathered song - Poet: no clue lol Caxton ?

9. Inked - Poet: I have no idea ... Miss sub ? (Love it) or grace

10. Hope is for the young - Poet: lepprechaun ? I'm not sure  

11. Lattice Work - Poet: Anna grin

12 will be mr a


I know I lost lol but I'll be back for the critique

anna_grin
ANNAN
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you got 11 wrong
i think 12 is dedus case judas , someone bailed

DystopianMelody
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I don't know about the rest but my guesses so far are:
4 - that grinny Anna chick
7 - LSP
9 - petit minou or shadoe
11 - Atakti or missy (whoever it is should be very proud)

anna_grin
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im not in guize im not in

DystopianMelody
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.... If you WERE in that's what you would say.... O o
It's either you, or johnrot or someone I don't know. My brains still hurting from Otizeses competition fuckery

braggman
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1 Diddi, no doubt about that
2 hades
3 lightbaron
4 switch this to anna
5. Devilish
6 Probably Evan
7 That antihero Travis guy
8 Grace
9 Missy
10 This is beginnings look like Craic
11 Jestalessa

How about them apples, Case? I think I must have gotten at least half.

Damn it. This would be easier if I knew there was a list of who is in this thing. Maybe I missed a third link. I will be back to say something heartfelt and meaningful about number 10 or possibly 11.

Gg78
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I agree can we get 13 names and pair them up ? To many people on this site to just guess . Even if we know their writting they could switch it up. Throw some names that aren't in too so it's throw off idk just saying

case28
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Miss_Sub said:These are my guesses, I'll come back later and edit to include a critique:

1. Vishal
2. Violet
3. Grace
4. Gemini
5. Devilish
6. Kittyfromhell
7. Intricate B
8. Mr_riberio
9. _shadoe_
10. Crim
11. Miki



Missy, you have 1 anonymous poet in your list.

case28
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Gg78 said:1. Hear My Call - Poet: intricate B

2. Present Damned - Poet: no idea but I'm gonna guess with sixx

3. The seventh day - Poet: atakti

4. Mind Maze - Poet: Gemini

5. How fucking sweet - Poet: devilish

6. PURE - Poet: Evan

7. A new face - Poet: johnrot

8. feathered song - Poet: no clue lol Caxton ?

9. Inked - Poet: I have no idea ... Miss sub ? (Love it) or grace

10. Hope is for the young - Poet: lepprechaun ? I'm not sure  

11. Lattice Work - Poet: Anna grin



I know I lost lol but I'll be back for the critique



Gigi, you have 3 anonymous poets in your list.

case28
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anna_grin said:you got 11 wrong
i think 12 is dedus case judas , someone bailed


anna, you're incorrect. Number 12 is very busy entering every other competition except mine.

case28
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anna_grin said:5. dev we can smell ya all down the street

8. sounds like raki

9. if thats you miss sub i would take my hat off but i dont wear hats has to be my knickers i guess

sixx is in there somewhere
could be 3. or is that wishful thinking

4. miki? no gemini
i can change my mind there arent any prizes for guessing!!!

1. might be caxton

6. evan almighty is that him

10. hm tricky got an oldman vibe but i think it has a ladys begloved hand

11.sixx


7. no idea but i guess hades

scratch all that last the only 1 that i can tell is dev the rest are playin games



anna, you're 100% right about me disliking disorder... and I know you're fucking with me.

You have 3 anonymous poets in your list.

case28
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DystopianMelody said:I don't know about the rest but my guesses so far are:
4 - that grinny Anna chick
7 - LSP
9 - petit minou or shadoe
11 - Atakti or missy (whoever it is should be very proud)


DM, you have 1 anonymous poet in your list.

case28
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braggman said:
1 Diddi, no doubt about that
2 That's probably 13 (Dennis)
3 lightbaron
4 johnrot maybe, no vaginas mentioned in it, so it ain't anna
5. Intricate B
6 Probably Evan
7 That antihero Travis guy
8 Don't know but they sure do love punctuation
9 Missy
10 Mr A.
11 Jestalessa

How about them apples, Case? I think I must have gotten at least half.

Damn it. This would be easier if I knew there was a list of who is in this thing. Maybe I missed a third link. I will be back to say something heartfelt and meaningful about number 10.


Braggs, you've got 3 anonymous apples in your list.

I'm sorry, but there ain't going to be a list. You master minds don't need a list using your powers of deduction.

I will however answer any questions about the poets, but I won't name them. I will also point out that Number 8 is screwing you with punctuation. Maybe you should be checking out their Favourite Poets/Writers.

case28
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Gg78 said:I agree can we get 13 names and pair them up ? To many people on this site to just guess . Even if we know their writting they could switch it up. Throw some names that aren't in too so it's throw off idk just saying

Good idea Gigi... but unfortunately I like to make things difficult and make you work for your prize. And besides, I want you all to pick a winning poem based on the qualities of the piece, not on an assumed identity.

I will answer your questions, as long as the question and answer does not specifically identify the anonymous poet.

Post your questions here and keep an eye out for clues.

By the way Gigi there isn't 13 poets, there are supposed to be 12, but there are only 11... Number 12 is in the dark. Do you wanna write us a poem?

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