Erotic Collaboration challenge!
malin69
malin
Forum Posts: 820
malin
Dangerous Mind
5
Joined 12th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 820
atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
touch me, love me
touche moi, aime moi
Write in collaboration with GabiGabriella and malin
Oh, my love, I'm never been so far
In love with you, your laugh so cheerful
Your mind so sharp and careful to my desires
Your soul is so beautiful and trustful
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your hot lips
Love me with your sexy hips
Touche moi, aime moi
I love to feel your long fingers on my skin
And your dark hair caressing my arms
All the sensations move to my spine
All my body is strained to all your gesture
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your tender hands
Our love never ends
Touche moi, aime moi
My eyes need your glance and
I read the deep of your soul
The splendor of your mind
We've never been so close to mix our thoughts
That now, in this while, we are unable
To know from who the thought comes
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your soul
Love me with your heart
Touche moi, aime moi
And all our gestures are guided by these
Common thoughts, the best way to get
The best loving time together
We are attached and bound
All your feelings are mine and mine yours
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your feelings
Love me with your thought
Touche moi, aime moi
Your skin so tender, so silky
Under my rough hands and I love
Sliding them under your sexy night dress
Feeling through our common thought
The effect on your body, nipples erected
Shiver of delight, your body sticks to mine
Your dress slides along your body
As a cloud slips away in the sky
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your intense pleasure
Love me with your loudly moan
Touche moi, aime moi
And our body are mixed
Me in you and you in me
All our senses are deepened
Together, they are one
Our bodies in rhythm dance love
Until the deepest of our soul
Our orgasm calms this strength uncontrolled
In the quietness, we stay always one
One in our body, our mind, our soul
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me by your immense beauty
Love me with your intense strength
Touche moi, aime moi
Frumoasa si minunata este dragostea
Beauty of a wonderful love
Beauté d'un amour merveilleux
Cu tine, dragostea mea
With you, my love
Avec vous, mon amour
touch me, love me
touche moi, aime moi
Write in collaboration with GabiGabriella and malin
Oh, my love, I'm never been so far
In love with you, your laugh so cheerful
Your mind so sharp and careful to my desires
Your soul is so beautiful and trustful
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your hot lips
Love me with your sexy hips
Touche moi, aime moi
I love to feel your long fingers on my skin
And your dark hair caressing my arms
All the sensations move to my spine
All my body is strained to all your gesture
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your tender hands
Our love never ends
Touche moi, aime moi
My eyes need your glance and
I read the deep of your soul
The splendor of your mind
We've never been so close to mix our thoughts
That now, in this while, we are unable
To know from who the thought comes
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your soul
Love me with your heart
Touche moi, aime moi
And all our gestures are guided by these
Common thoughts, the best way to get
The best loving time together
We are attached and bound
All your feelings are mine and mine yours
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your feelings
Love me with your thought
Touche moi, aime moi
Your skin so tender, so silky
Under my rough hands and I love
Sliding them under your sexy night dress
Feeling through our common thought
The effect on your body, nipples erected
Shiver of delight, your body sticks to mine
Your dress slides along your body
As a cloud slips away in the sky
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me with your intense pleasure
Love me with your loudly moan
Touche moi, aime moi
And our body are mixed
Me in you and you in me
All our senses are deepened
Together, they are one
Our bodies in rhythm dance love
Until the deepest of our soul
Our orgasm calms this strength uncontrolled
In the quietness, we stay always one
One in our body, our mind, our soul
Atinge-ma, iubeste-ma
Touch me by your immense beauty
Love me with your intense strength
Touche moi, aime moi
Frumoasa si minunata este dragostea
Beauty of a wonderful love
Beauté d'un amour merveilleux
Cu tine, dragostea mea
With you, my love
Avec vous, mon amour
Smoogej1s
Taylor
Forum Posts: 267
Taylor
Fire of Insight
16
Joined 15th Apr 2011Forum Posts: 267
Thanks for your submission GabiGabriella and malin
_shadoe_
yiyi
Forum Posts: 577
yiyi
Tyrant of Words
54
Joined 25th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 577
In an Evening
This evening, O,
we will untarnish all needs.
The Soul......
is an inspired invention.
Will you agree?
Yes, Sir.
This exercise,
meant not to strip the soul
from its body
but rather to encapsulate
its pleasure,
raises these interesting questions: What is the soul, O?
Tell me,
while you face me,
look and show me
your soul.
You'll allow
a moment to think,
please, Sir?
I don't want
to describe it
conventionally.
I think of it
as all encompassing,
the physical,
emotional,
and mental,
all coming together.
As needed, O….
we can take days
or weeks to think through this...
I am absolutely
in no hurry...
No man should be in a hurry
to make love
to Helen of Troy..... Take your time..
I am listening
to your heart...
here...
hear me listening
to you.... I'm asking
a very complex question......
and yet wanting
a visceral answer...
what does your body
tell you? Allow the soul
to speak
through the body....
Feel free to meditate
on this problem:
Get back to me once your body
has spoken to you....
I can wait....
or listen....
or watch.....
I could read it to you... while you meditate.....
now write it....
now you feel it...
As needed......
Is this okay?
Undress me
not merely physically;
strip flesh from bone;
leave me vulnerable
and exposed as you read the harsh truths
when I'm completely
naked with you.
Let there be nothing
between us
and still everything trapped between,
more than just our skin
intangible and palpable
as you finger my insecurity.
Ah, yes,
the bare
but not barren truth,
yes, O.
Tell me then,
why does the soul resist love?
There's no place to hide
when I'm finally naked
and you've removed
my sense of shame
when you see
into every part of me
I've tried keep
to and for myself.
Yes, Love,
Sweet O.
Yes.
Breaking the will,
but not the spirit;
is this not the path of all love?
Yes, Sir,
to bend to your will
be an instrument
of pleasure
and dance to your tune
but still remain intact.
Why would the soul
harbor such a fugitive
as the ego,
when being free
to respond
without will would free the soul
to live
within the now
and enjoy
the radiant bliss
of being loved unconditionally?
Fear…
fear of rejection
and discovering
that I,
alone,
am not enough, imperfect,
a flawed diamond
in a perfect setting.
Yes, O, yes,
My Lovely.
But perfect to me........
Will you then
leave off your will to power
and allow yourself to be fully owned;
will you be fully mine?
I would gladly surrender
kneel at your feet
where I long to be
with all that I am
and all
you allow me to become.
Then now
and forever,
your soul is my soul,
Sweet and Tender, O.
Again, is not the soul
an inspired invention,
and living,
yet empty,
quiet fully
the ultimate joy?
Yes,
Sir but it quietly waits
for it's mirror
the other half
to finally make it whole.
Then
for all times
let this be our destiny...
Let our lessons
never be over.
Ever, Sweet O.
runningturtle87 and shadoe
This evening, O,
we will untarnish all needs.
The Soul......
is an inspired invention.
Will you agree?
Yes, Sir.
This exercise,
meant not to strip the soul
from its body
but rather to encapsulate
its pleasure,
raises these interesting questions: What is the soul, O?
Tell me,
while you face me,
look and show me
your soul.
You'll allow
a moment to think,
please, Sir?
I don't want
to describe it
conventionally.
I think of it
as all encompassing,
the physical,
emotional,
and mental,
all coming together.
As needed, O….
we can take days
or weeks to think through this...
I am absolutely
in no hurry...
No man should be in a hurry
to make love
to Helen of Troy..... Take your time..
I am listening
to your heart...
here...
hear me listening
to you.... I'm asking
a very complex question......
and yet wanting
a visceral answer...
what does your body
tell you? Allow the soul
to speak
through the body....
Feel free to meditate
on this problem:
Get back to me once your body
has spoken to you....
I can wait....
or listen....
or watch.....
I could read it to you... while you meditate.....
now write it....
now you feel it...
As needed......
Is this okay?
Undress me
not merely physically;
strip flesh from bone;
leave me vulnerable
and exposed as you read the harsh truths
when I'm completely
naked with you.
Let there be nothing
between us
and still everything trapped between,
more than just our skin
intangible and palpable
as you finger my insecurity.
Ah, yes,
the bare
but not barren truth,
yes, O.
Tell me then,
why does the soul resist love?
There's no place to hide
when I'm finally naked
and you've removed
my sense of shame
when you see
into every part of me
I've tried keep
to and for myself.
Yes, Love,
Sweet O.
Yes.
Breaking the will,
but not the spirit;
is this not the path of all love?
Yes, Sir,
to bend to your will
be an instrument
of pleasure
and dance to your tune
but still remain intact.
Why would the soul
harbor such a fugitive
as the ego,
when being free
to respond
without will would free the soul
to live
within the now
and enjoy
the radiant bliss
of being loved unconditionally?
Fear…
fear of rejection
and discovering
that I,
alone,
am not enough, imperfect,
a flawed diamond
in a perfect setting.
Yes, O, yes,
My Lovely.
But perfect to me........
Will you then
leave off your will to power
and allow yourself to be fully owned;
will you be fully mine?
I would gladly surrender
kneel at your feet
where I long to be
with all that I am
and all
you allow me to become.
Then now
and forever,
your soul is my soul,
Sweet and Tender, O.
Again, is not the soul
an inspired invention,
and living,
yet empty,
quiet fully
the ultimate joy?
Yes,
Sir but it quietly waits
for it's mirror
the other half
to finally make it whole.
Then
for all times
let this be our destiny...
Let our lessons
never be over.
Ever, Sweet O.
runningturtle87 and shadoe
Smoogej1s
Taylor
Forum Posts: 267
Taylor
Fire of Insight
16
Joined 15th Apr 2011Forum Posts: 267
Thanks for your submission runningturtle87 and shadoe!
This one is going to be hard to judge, there are some brilliant collabs. here!
This one is going to be hard to judge, there are some brilliant collabs. here!
runningturtle87
Forum Posts: 518
Tyrant of Words
14
Joined 20th June 2012Forum Posts: 518
This Osprey and His Dove ( by runningturtle87 and Gg78 )
Each Time we meet like this I know
about what time it is
to be with you so nakedly
is every simple bliss.
Your body here with me to touch,
your mind to love divine;
I need to feel and be with you,
to nakedly combine.
I need to hear my name
be said from those soft lips and swerves
brush soft kisses from your nape
and feel all of your curves.
Raise my knees and slit my skirt,
possess the all of me;
for just this night
let us be us, and just let us be we.
Let me kiss, yes, both your lips,
and hold you in my arms,
and I'll take you into my heart,
not merely wooed with charms.
I will want you, mouth and eye,
and what we share will not be stolen
from the feathered ground into the sky
our touch will be but golden.
I know we came here lusting
to taste of all the finer things;
imprint my mind onto your body
and see what touching brings.
Always giving, every breath,
from stripped to making love;
already broken-promises,
this Osprey and his Dove.
Each Time we meet like this I know
about what time it is
to be with you so nakedly
is every simple bliss.
Your body here with me to touch,
your mind to love divine;
I need to feel and be with you,
to nakedly combine.
I need to hear my name
be said from those soft lips and swerves
brush soft kisses from your nape
and feel all of your curves.
Raise my knees and slit my skirt,
possess the all of me;
for just this night
let us be us, and just let us be we.
Let me kiss, yes, both your lips,
and hold you in my arms,
and I'll take you into my heart,
not merely wooed with charms.
I will want you, mouth and eye,
and what we share will not be stolen
from the feathered ground into the sky
our touch will be but golden.
I know we came here lusting
to taste of all the finer things;
imprint my mind onto your body
and see what touching brings.
Always giving, every breath,
from stripped to making love;
already broken-promises,
this Osprey and his Dove.
Smoogej1s
Taylor
Forum Posts: 267
Taylor
Fire of Insight
16
Joined 15th Apr 2011Forum Posts: 267
Thanks for your submission runningturtle87 and Gg78 :)
Smoogej1s
Taylor
Forum Posts: 267
Taylor
Fire of Insight
16
Joined 15th Apr 2011Forum Posts: 267
Congrats to GabiGabriella and malin.
I'm still working on getting the second trophy awarded for the comp. so I apologize for the wait GabiGabriella, but it will be resolved.
Congrats to Petit_Minou and runningturtle87 for runner-up!
There were some amazing collabs. in this competition, it was hard to judge!
I'm still working on getting the second trophy awarded for the comp. so I apologize for the wait GabiGabriella, but it will be resolved.
Congrats to Petit_Minou and runningturtle87 for runner-up!
There were some amazing collabs. in this competition, it was hard to judge!
malin69
malin
Forum Posts: 820
malin
Dangerous Mind
5
Joined 12th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 820
I am awesome and confused for this trophy, all other contributions are so wonderful, I could not imagine to win.
Thank you so much Taylor for GabiGabriella and me, we are very honored by this result, and thank you to have planed this comp. very nice and different to others. Congratulation also to Petit_Minou and runningturtle87, and all other.. Very nice and funny comp. Hope all people has found pleasure to participate as we had GabiGabriella and me to collaborate together.
And you see here? Two!!! Incredible!
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Thank you so much Taylor for GabiGabriella and me, we are very honored by this result, and thank you to have planed this comp. very nice and different to others. Congratulation also to Petit_Minou and runningturtle87, and all other.. Very nice and funny comp. Hope all people has found pleasure to participate as we had GabiGabriella and me to collaborate together.
And you see here? Two!!! Incredible!
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Anonymous
Congratulations, malin and Gabi! Yours was a truly unique collaboration - two people and three languages coming together to speak of love.
And thank you, Taylor for this competition and the runner-up honor. I can imagine how difficult it was to choose, given the level of talent that was displayed here. It was a pleasure to participate.
Chris - thanks for being the writing partner you are. You bring out all that is best in me...
And thank you, Taylor for this competition and the runner-up honor. I can imagine how difficult it was to choose, given the level of talent that was displayed here. It was a pleasure to participate.
Chris - thanks for being the writing partner you are. You bring out all that is best in me...