Rappin' Vs. Rockin' Vs. Anybody

Must be 13 years or older,
no cheating,
foul language is accepted, however... just don't use it towards the poets, etc.
no drama,
yes, you can "chill"..
must be fightin' for the top spot before July 31st,
I'm the host but will be checking here from time to time,
this thing called the "Rhyme King" & "Rhyme Kween" or "Rhyme Prince" or Rhyme Princezz" they will get their poem commented by me, read by me, and will be favorited whomever wins.. Now, who's ready for some fuckin' fun? lemme know wassup.. anything contact: electricgtr23@aol.com that's my email just hmu ight.. thanks.

Attention, i almost forgot, lol. when this event ends... i will check it after July 31 or whenever i can but i will have to "crown" the winner late because i am currently busy, but yeah. keep it real and up, and have fun. -Mia-

Okay... lemme see what you got against "Vicious"... cmon.. don't be backin down if you readin.. just step the hell up!!

Venom like a cobra snake,
Webs like a spider's taste,
Vicious like crystal lake,
These rhymes ain't goin' to waste.. I spit like a fuckin monster ace, have ya eyes tied to ya shoelace, and then make ya fall before it's too late, better when I said two face.. I can bring the wool and the steel, I can smash ya body with one kill.. How fast do I run? Maybe 1mil.. But never get tired of the same deal... Yeah.. Push me till I'm ill..
I'm feelin' it, like imma stone of a life still.. But, vicious till it's suspicious, I won't lie again.. So imma speak till I spill.. Ha, like it or not, take it back pull it forward, rise to the top.. Imma hurt you with a A game, put you on lock cuz.. I won't stop..

Vicious, vicious... Imma spit till it hurts.. One too many times, I'm so of the unworst.. Think imma pain in ass, cuz you can't stop me, I don't think you will last... Drop! Leave!
Imma scream till I make you bleed! No evil, no scene.. Just what's up with me... Imma break it and break ya into pieces,  Imma break it and break ya into pieces,  Imma break it and break ya into pieces, imma break ya.. Imma break ya...

Sick as a motherfucker,
Only quicker, no picker upper..
Jabbed in slightly like a nine inch nail, Trent Reznor, by the others.. So flowy, I can Budweiser the cover.. Of a madman, it isn't sad man..
Nu metal my stakes, time isn't safe, anymore, outta waste, to a taste, for your bait.. Choose it, cuz I don't have time to lose it, like blood music, dead celeb status of a truance.. Fly by, young & flashy, Lloyd Banks, money in the air, so come & get it you fakes.. Gangstas, on guns & sharp shanks.. Cuz I'mma put you on lock, cuz I won't stop...

Vicious, vicious... Imma spit till it hurts.. One too many times, I'm so of the unworst.. Think imma pain in ass, cuz you can't stop me, I don't think you will last... Drop! Leave!
Imma scream till I make you bleed! No evil, no scene.. Just what's up with me... Imma break it and break ya into pieces,  Imma break it and break ya into pieces,  Imma break it and break ya into pieces, imma break ya.. Imma break ya...

[music].. Catabolism misfists,
Catacomb underground kids,
Catholic bitches, and stones on the mountains.. Chamber coal, coal chamber, chambers of commerce.. Charismatic, ills, chills of a verse... Kissing Corpses, brides of a morbid..
In my ears tell me, I'm still here.. Chronic winds, I'm no demonic of a sin, I breathe within these godly ends.. Rev up my engine to Cobalt 60, can't mess with me, cuz I might be a fuckin vicious or a empty.. [echo]...

Vicious, vicious... Imma spit till it hurts.. One too many times, I'm so of the unworst.. Think imma pain in ass, cuz you can't stop me, I don't think you will last... Drop! Leave!
Imma scream till I make you bleed! No evil, no scene.. Just what's up with me... Imma break it and break ya into pieces,  Imma break it and break ya into pieces,  Imma break it and break ya into pieces, imma break ya.. Imma break ya...

Conserve your mind to what you heard... I'm fuckin' vicious..
I'm so of the unworst.. [echo]..  

I have a short one,

Just Enjoy


We need to slow down and meditate for a minute,

It's not fair about how we are living, it's all about the money we get spinning,

Would it not be better to live from the beginning,

No laws, no hate and no sadness,

Before this will turn all into madness,

We need to sit back, relax and enjoy our life,

Instead of stabbing eachother with a knife.  

pretty nice my man im likin it.. ahaha keep bringin more, bring some friends :)

damn Ricky lmao another hit! ;P hahaha this is good.. good good but i need some girls to come up too not just a lot of guys.. let's keep this up!

I have no idea how to rap, but I've rocked all my life.
Here's what I got

Badge Of Honor

I wear my scars like a badge of honor.    
I'm proud of them for making me a strong person.    
The perma split in my lip forever reminding me    
I didn't take it lying down    
I didn't just say stick it in.    
I said go ahead, stick it in    
I'll bite that mother fucker right off.    

and I tried    
Mother fucker.    
 
 
I wear my scars with my head held high.    
you broke my nose without a backward glance    
expecting me to cower in fear    
a fear I would never willingly show you.    
I licked the blood streaming down my face    
and laughed, looking you straight in the eyes    

yeah fuck you too daddy    
figuratively speaking    
 
I saw my cheek opened to the bone    
forgive the fuck outa me for going to the fair    
I guess you taught me not to disobey    
I just laughed and stuck my finger on the bone    
and twisted    

stupid mother fucker    
you taught me how to be fearless  
while black holed mother thought me insane    
 
I wear your scars on my face    
proudly    
with pomp and ceremony    
marching down the halls of my youth    
remembering that I got you back
in the only way a kid could    
I took flesh from your face with my nails    

I'm a bitch and I pay back    
 
I hold my head high, look the world in the eye    
and say I am as good as you are    
I may be scarred, but my scars hold a place of honor    
on my body and face    
They say to the world that I didn't take it lying down    
I gave it back. Fuck I DID!!    
 
You bashed me and bashed me for my defiance    
begging me to stop making you hit me    
telling me it didn't have to be this way    
if I would just BOW to your power    
BOW WOW mother fucker    
that all you got?    
 
I would rather be beat to death than to surrender    

I pitted my mind against yours    
and I payed heavily, yet so did you    
 
I was a soldier in my own war    
And wear my scars like a badge of honor    
Stupid mother fucker    
You never did know me at all  

Sometimes you have to be a little insane to survive.



   

before i do anything, i want everyone to know that i am so srry.. i couldnt enter my account because something happened..

and shaunda your awesome too, i like the poem very nice :)

Now, i will have to crown somebody, even though a few stepped up and not a lot of posts so.. the winner, who i crown as a... goes to.. Shaunda! congratz girl, your my new "Rhyme Kween".. even thou you donot rhyme you say, ill upgrade it to Rockin Kween.. enjoy :)