Poetry competition CLOSED 20th May 2013 4:24am
WINNER
kriticool
kriticool
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Lover
Anonymous
Poetry Contest Description
Fill in the middle
I once started a poem and could never get past the beginning. It did have an end, similar to the start. I'll give the first two lines and the last two. Fill in the rest - whatever takes your fancy.
FIRST LINES
"With loving lips and lustful eyes
My latest lover lies"
LAST LINES
"With laughing lips and listless eyes
My languid lover...
Lies"
FIRST LINES
"With loving lips and lustful eyes
My latest lover lies"
LAST LINES
"With laughing lips and listless eyes
My languid lover...
Lies"
Anonymous
YOUR LIPS
With loving lips and lustful eyes
My latest lover lies
Looks like Mick Jagger
Machiavellian, calculating eyes
He is using me as I am using him
There is nothing like a lover
Who could be your kin
We are in a villa in the south of France
The mistral is making the curtains dance
While we lie on a bed totally naked
You are the only man who satisfies me
Your energy is beyond the others
When you enter me explosions come in
When my legs surround you, you sigh like the wind
We make love in every way, all day
Stopping for a rest, for a cool drink of water
My lover has a wonderful sense of humor
We laugh and love so much
We finally reached enough
With laughing lips and listless eyes
My languid lover...
Lies
Anonymous
By LerdGoin
Blood Slave
With loving lips and lustful eyes
My latest lover lies
I crawl up the bed and smile at him
my insatiable passion never denied
''Morning baby did you enjoy the taste?
How wonderful to wake to your delicious embrace''
His body is like a drug to me
For I am his blood slave
never to be free
Since the night he sunk in his teeth
The orgasmic bliss was such a treat
I see in his eyes his need for blood
I'll feed his hunger
with my slave love
With laughing lips and listless eyes
My languid lover...
Lies[/color]
my languid lover dies
with loving lips and lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
so tonight
i'm mixing his drink
real stiff,
just one sip
and all that love
all that lust
will leave his eyes
leave those lips
and he won't be my latest lover
anymore
he'll just be
my late lover.
no more
of his
with laughing lips and listless eyes
my languid lover
lies
[in his grave.]
with loving lips and lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
so tonight
i'm mixing his drink
real stiff,
just one sip
and all that love
all that lust
will leave his eyes
leave those lips
and he won't be my latest lover
anymore
he'll just be
my late lover.
no more
of his
with laughing lips and listless eyes
my languid lover
lies
[in his grave.]
Lover
with loving lips and
lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
this…my
current lover
she always “gets over”
overachieving
in her
indiscretions
bringing forth such
shallow undercurrents of
half truths and
too often
overly simplistic
answers
she has
the way of
fancy dancers
always
good for a two-step of
lies &
damn lies
but those eyes
those lazy twin pools
used as tools
certainly
I’m amongst her fools
I know I am, yes
of course
I am
clever is my lover
this lover
my trickster
with her
sleight of hand
and of heart
I am mangled
and ..so easily
I’ve been ..tangled
and
she’s one; clearly
one hard
for me to part
her calling
my falling
so very
"not" smart, and
she’s so more than wise
with laughing lips and
listless eyes
my languid lover
lies
Anonymous
I absolutely LOVE this one! So true to my original intent - but you found the words I could not.
Anonymous
“Lust Lies Forever”
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6030/6017994518_d6b13f8f0b_z.jpg
With loving lips and lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
in the mystery
of my fresh parted-thighs,
spinning ourselves
endlessly,
we embrace
face to face
as if nothing matters,
a personal sensual-act.
We play this passion play.
continually,
to our own tune,
as if we were
genetically
meant to spark,
one into the other.
With utmost care,
I wrap myself in your
gorgeous hair,
it smells lavender,
a hint of cinnamon.
Now,
spent on Heaven-seed,
the deed is done,
our needs fulfilled,
we spin off
on separate
mind-vessels,
forever,
thrilled.
With laughing lips and listless eyes
my languid lover...
lies.
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6030/6017994518_d6b13f8f0b_z.jpg
With loving lips and lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
in the mystery
of my fresh parted-thighs,
spinning ourselves
endlessly,
we embrace
face to face
as if nothing matters,
a personal sensual-act.
We play this passion play.
continually,
to our own tune,
as if we were
genetically
meant to spark,
one into the other.
With utmost care,
I wrap myself in your
gorgeous hair,
it smells lavender,
a hint of cinnamon.
Now,
spent on Heaven-seed,
the deed is done,
our needs fulfilled,
we spin off
on separate
mind-vessels,
forever,
thrilled.
With laughing lips and listless eyes
my languid lover...
lies.
With loving lips
and lustful eyes
my only latest lover lies,
In a streaming welcome
and whiskey dreams
Backseat warm, our spirits of cake and dust
Stern and silk
I'll just take whatever hit there is until the end of this moment
Chewing mercury, it's hot as hell back here
Though I don't mind the fire.
And not the strangulation either. His strong hand on my cross
The penetration and hyrdro comings
Waves of a revolution, haha
I look at him.....
With laughing lips and listless eyes
My languid lover lies.....
and lustful eyes
my only latest lover lies,
In a streaming welcome
and whiskey dreams
Backseat warm, our spirits of cake and dust
Stern and silk
I'll just take whatever hit there is until the end of this moment
Chewing mercury, it's hot as hell back here
Though I don't mind the fire.
And not the strangulation either. His strong hand on my cross
The penetration and hyrdro comings
Waves of a revolution, haha
I look at him.....
With laughing lips and listless eyes
My languid lover lies.....
With loving lips and lustful eyes
My last lover lies
Tells me things that wrote never true
Only to find that my heart rained blue
Dying in the pit
He laid me down to fit
My lover now is like another
Reigns as if they knew each other
My sorrow fills
As if I swollow the huge pill
Feel my lover from head to toe
He loves me but I am no hoe
So now I sit
In the pit
With laughing lips
And listless eyes
My languid lover...
lies
My last lover lies
Tells me things that wrote never true
Only to find that my heart rained blue
Dying in the pit
He laid me down to fit
My lover now is like another
Reigns as if they knew each other
My sorrow fills
As if I swollow the huge pill
Feel my lover from head to toe
He loves me but I am no hoe
So now I sit
In the pit
With laughing lips
And listless eyes
My languid lover...
lies
With loving lips
and lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
with lustful lies
and love betrayed
my lover I despise
with languid eyes
and tears cried
my anger now applies
with laughing lips
and listless eyes
my languid lover lies
and lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
with lustful lies
and love betrayed
my lover I despise
with languid eyes
and tears cried
my anger now applies
with laughing lips
and listless eyes
my languid lover lies
Anonymous
(I changed it up a little, not using the last lines quite at the end but I hope it's okay)
Was
With loving lips and lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
no longer in the bed we shared
it's not me he desires
into the heart of another, he climbs
the door to him, open wide
She's his and he's no longer mine
latest lover, last kiss
last time...
With laughing lips and listless eyes
my languid lover lies
no more
she restored his sparkle
renewed his shine
picked him up
He's back to life
Was
With loving lips and lustful eyes
my latest lover lies
no longer in the bed we shared
it's not me he desires
into the heart of another, he climbs
the door to him, open wide
She's his and he's no longer mine
latest lover, last kiss
last time...
With laughing lips and listless eyes
my languid lover lies
no more
she restored his sparkle
renewed his shine
picked him up
He's back to life
Anonymous
I must choose kriticool. Of all the poems, this one most stays true to the beginning and ending words. A lover ardent at the beginning, but indifferent at the end.
