Poetry competition CLOSED 22nd February 2013 3:04pm
WINNER
kriticool
kriticool
RUNNER-UP:
Grace
When you..I feel
Anonymous
“Like That I Feel”
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When you look at me like that,
I feel I leave the planet.
When you touch me like that,
I feel hard like granite.
When you hold me like that,
I feel like you’re a bandit.
When you kiss me like that,
I feel like I’m your favorite.
When you love me like that,
I feel like we are kismet.
______________________________
You’ve stolen my heart,
l feel like that,
cataclysmic.
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-xC4M3Sp42Uc/TiJNB_hjz3I/AAAAAAAAD3o/4eAyCuiFpLY/s1600/lip-kiss.jpg
When you look at me like that,
I feel I leave the planet.
When you touch me like that,
I feel hard like granite.
When you hold me like that,
I feel like you’re a bandit.
When you kiss me like that,
I feel like I’m your favorite.
When you love me like that,
I feel like we are kismet.
______________________________
You’ve stolen my heart,
l feel like that,
cataclysmic.
Anonymous
Pleased with the entries, thank's to all! :-)
when you smile at me
i feel like there's a flutter in my tummy
when you touch my hand
i feel like rain vanished and sun came to shine
when you look at me
i feel like a smoldering heat run through my body
when you take me into your arms
i feel like a warm blanket had comforted me
and when you kiss me
i feel like heaven had descended on me...
i feel like there's a flutter in my tummy
when you touch my hand
i feel like rain vanished and sun came to shine
when you look at me
i feel like a smoldering heat run through my body
when you take me into your arms
i feel like a warm blanket had comforted me
and when you kiss me
i feel like heaven had descended on me...
Anonymous
So far, so good! thank's poets! keep em coming...make my decision to choose a winner hard-as usual LOL
Feel the vibes
When I am alone, I think of you
I feel so blue I really do
When you are around
I feel like smacking you
When you hold me in your arms
I feel so happy, I tremble for you
When you lie and I know it
I feel like garrotting you with a nylon string
When you say you are sorry
I feel like you mean it
When you turn away and I’m alone
I feel like a fool, I've been had again.
When I am alone, I think of you
I feel so blue I really do
When you are around
I feel like smacking you
When you hold me in your arms
I feel so happy, I tremble for you
When you lie and I know it
I feel like garrotting you with a nylon string
When you say you are sorry
I feel like you mean it
When you turn away and I’m alone
I feel like a fool, I've been had again.
Anonymous
Thank you Grace, another great entry!
.:When you.. I feel:.
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When you nurture my enslavement
I feel the cost of a life lost
When you twist my words into nothing
I feel no reason to speak at all
When you claim I give you meaning
I feel another tale that’s tall
When you launch into your tirade
I feel hunkered by your screams
When you whisper that you love me
I feel that’s not how it seems
http://8020.photos.jpgmag.com/3028428_178066_ce0895b14a_l.jpg
When you nurture my enslavement
I feel the cost of a life lost
When you twist my words into nothing
I feel no reason to speak at all
When you claim I give you meaning
I feel another tale that’s tall
When you launch into your tirade
I feel hunkered by your screams
When you whisper that you love me
I feel that’s not how it seems
Anonymous
Kriticool , I've missed you..thanks for entering-;-)
When I look at you,
I feel betrayed.
When you come near me,
I feel like I need to run.
When you say I love you,
I feel your lie seeping into my soul.
When you say you'd come back, but never did,
I feel abandoned.
When you walk away, with me watching,
I feel free for the first time.
I feel betrayed.
When you come near me,
I feel like I need to run.
When you say I love you,
I feel your lie seeping into my soul.
When you say you'd come back, but never did,
I feel abandoned.
When you walk away, with me watching,
I feel free for the first time.
Anonymous
thank you...Corrin Skinner
lots of great stuff here!!
lots of great stuff here!!
When you cry,it makes me smile.
I feel alive,when you're on fire
When you scream,I hear a song.
I dance in dream,when you are lost.
When you break down,it builds me up.
A king is crowned,when you self destruct.
When you come apart,I feel content.
My joyous heart,when yours is dead.
When you believe,It's a lie I tell.
It isn't me,when you lift the veil...
I feel alive,when you're on fire
When you scream,I hear a song.
I dance in dream,when you are lost.
When you break down,it builds me up.
A king is crowned,when you self destruct.
When you come apart,I feel content.
My joyous heart,when yours is dead.
When you believe,It's a lie I tell.
It isn't me,when you lift the veil...
When you speak words unspoken breaking through the surface
I feel so much better
when you speak, speak the truth to me.
I feel as if the world's eyes are upon you.
When lies take stage in the form you present them.
I feel restricted as if a snake coils around my neck
When you constrict these lies even further
I feel time running thinly as butter spread across a piece of bread
When you scream your propaganda into the microphone
I feel your world crumble, as Eyes of Artillery shreds your pavement.
I feel so much better
when you speak, speak the truth to me.
I feel as if the world's eyes are upon you.
When lies take stage in the form you present them.
I feel restricted as if a snake coils around my neck
When you constrict these lies even further
I feel time running thinly as butter spread across a piece of bread
When you scream your propaganda into the microphone
I feel your world crumble, as Eyes of Artillery shreds your pavement.
When you speak to me
I feel hopeless yet I desire you.
When you win
I feel like a god standing on the side of a cliff.
When you leave me
I feel desperate and crazed .
When you quiet down
I feel remorse.
When you sleep
I feel some measure of peace.
When you wake up
I feel the cycle begin again.
When you are no where to be found
I feel lost, suicidal, thankful, confused.
Addiction will you leave me alone!
When you speak to me
I feel peace.
When you win
I feel like I have a purpose.
When you don't leave me
I feel like I can get through it.
When you quiet down
I fell the need to listen harder.
When you are there and I can't sleep
I feel I can talk to you.
When you answer
I know your listening.
When you are every where I look
I know I am walking with you.
God, help me to never turn away again!
I feel hopeless yet I desire you.
When you win
I feel like a god standing on the side of a cliff.
When you leave me
I feel desperate and crazed .
When you quiet down
I feel remorse.
When you sleep
I feel some measure of peace.
When you wake up
I feel the cycle begin again.
When you are no where to be found
I feel lost, suicidal, thankful, confused.
Addiction will you leave me alone!
When you speak to me
I feel peace.
When you win
I feel like I have a purpose.
When you don't leave me
I feel like I can get through it.
When you quiet down
I fell the need to listen harder.
When you are there and I can't sleep
I feel I can talk to you.
When you answer
I know your listening.
When you are every where I look
I know I am walking with you.
God, help me to never turn away again!
Anonymous
thank's! keep em coming! impressive!
When you strip first yourself and then me,
I feel the pleasure of anticipation.
When you embrace me, fitting your nude body into the curves of mine,
I feel the pleasure of anticipation.
When you open your legs and take me in you,
I feel the pleasure of anticipation.
When you move your pelvis against mine, forcing me deeply with in you,
I feel the pleasure of anticipation.
When you cum causing me to do the same.
I feel the pleasure of anticipation fulfilled.
I feel the pleasure of anticipation.
When you embrace me, fitting your nude body into the curves of mine,
I feel the pleasure of anticipation.
When you open your legs and take me in you,
I feel the pleasure of anticipation.
When you move your pelvis against mine, forcing me deeply with in you,
I feel the pleasure of anticipation.
When you cum causing me to do the same.
I feel the pleasure of anticipation fulfilled.
