Poetry competition CLOSED 6th February 2013 6:05pm
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kriticool
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BLOOD BOND

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

Write a poetic intepretation of the photograph below.
http://24.media.tumblr.com/b2abc23337b3cdab87ac40c877ce3e27/tumblr_mf12t7zKH31r7fnc1o1_500.jpg

Two entries maximum.

Collaborations welcome (credit will be split).

Any length, any style.

Good Luck!

Strider

poet Anonymous

POETIC BONDING


Dear Poet

Expose your poetry to me

For I have seen your lines

Read between them

Knew that you wrote them

So I could feel your passion

But I am greedy reader

And want more than a few lines

I want the poet and his poetry

I think you can read my mind

So let us corroborate on a poem

Just you and me

In my place or yours

However comfortable it needs to be!

Kou_Indigo
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
Tyrant of Words
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Forum Posts: 2808

somelikeithot said:
POETIC BONDING


Dear Poet

Expose your poetry to me

For I have seen your lines

Read between them

Knew that you wrote them

So I could feel your passion

But I am greedy reader

And want more than a few lines

I want the poet and his poetry

I think you can read my mind

So let us corroborate on a poem

Just you and me

In my place or yours

However comfortable it needs to be!


I love it, Kitty! Really romantic, poetic, and lovely poem you wrote here. Excellent symbolims, too! But your poetry is always great stuff.

poet Anonymous

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Lost Thinker
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Forum Posts: 13

My heart pumps the blood
And keeps my vains flowing
But you my dear
You are what keeps me going

My heart can only work
For as long as I allow it
But any day if I chose to
I could end it

I could slit my wrists
And cut through my vains
But you my dear
You won't allow it

I am exposed to you
Inside and out
You do not shame me or condemn me
But you love me

Rough days come so often
But when I touch you
Hand in hand
My vains flow more easily

I see you too
Your heart
And soul
I can feel your blood pumping

Us together forever
May not be reality
But you my dear
Are keeping me from insanity

N.g

kriticool
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596



.:Sameness:.


you & me
along the same vein
drawn upon us; through us
no joke, each stroke
we give birth to the same description
always us; together
illustrating in more ways than one
that we are the sum of each other
the same syncopated heart beat
the same wit in which our blood streams
for sure it seems
laughter is etched within our smile
there’s a flow that’s spelled-out
ours is the love of being in love
co-naked, fittingly sacred
you & me
beings of our own easiness
each other pleasing us
our hearts feeding us
forever.


..

poet Anonymous

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souladareatease
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 28th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 5085

    ONE

look to the mirror
the veins connect
ethereal
to the me I see...
feel that?
of course I do
its You
You, the birth of the twins
thou that bleeds within my skin

according to the muscles
reflexed in double
might
be the presentation
shown to the masses
for adoration
we the atlas
  THE
Herculean being

from my heart two MY Heart
claret
bleeding between
this sinew bond
vena, venous, vasa
endless and flowing


Unum corpus simul
     


poet Anonymous

Fellow Poets,

I liked them all. Kriticool got this one~tkannks to kitty and Gabriel and the other writers for entering this competition.

Keep writing....Strider!

kriticool
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596

Nice company of work, appreciate the recognition

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