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epicRawrz
Party Poison
Twisted Dreamer
United States 3awards
Joined 30th July 2012
Forum Posts: 226

Poetry Contest

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So write a poem about your current love/lover, no collaborations, 1 entry per poet...thanks for entering!

Cannaballester
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 3rd Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 112

waynehowell
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom 1awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 48

               No one will ever love you the way that i do


Twelve months since we split after nine years together
I thought we would have been together whatever the weather
I moved away from my home and all that i knew
So i wouldn't miss a single moment with you
Now i'm in another country all on my own
wondering why i just don't go home
And what i come up with while im wondering why
Is the reason i stay is just to hope to see you go by
If i go back to England, it would be admitting defeat
But that i can't do, cos my heart would never again take a single beat
Cos no one will ever love you the way that i do
And the reason im sure and know this to be true
Is when i looked in your eyes and the vows that i said
were imprinted on my heart the day we were wed
And there they will stay until the day that i die
Even after a year there's songs that make me cry
Because i will always love you, until the end of all time
And the hole that is left is knowing that your no longer mine
Its a deep dark void that will never again be filled
Sometimes i think it would be easier if i had been killed
Because without you my life just doesn't seem to matter
This thing in my chest i used to call my heart is in tatters
But no one will ever love you the way that i do
I just wish u knew how much i still and always will love you

socialbutterfly
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 15th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 10

Enduring

He's not good for me I know
Yet I can think of no one else
They want to push us apart
As does he sometimes too
All attempts fail miserably

When we are enveloped in each other
We're on cloud nine and all is divine
My heart aches when we must be apart
Days go by while i feel powered off
I know he must go fight for this country

Still I feel selfish with want
Just one more touch
A second kiss to give
One more glance in the rear view
Another heartfelt goodbye

Obstacles are meant to be overcome
Despite them all I will endure
I'll find courage to fight
For you, for me, for us
Because now you do it every day

poisinrose
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 27th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 6

Doe Eyed Romeo



My world was cold

It was black and white
Until I saw his hazel eye


And my heart beat
Started like a hummingbird
Beating out of my chest


He looked right back and stared at me
So dolefully
" will you date me, my fair lady"



When I asked why
He looked as if he would cry
and asked
'"Didn't you know?"
"your the very best"


And from the moment my heart was chained
To a charmer, A romancer
That I never wished to escape, again
Rose petals on my pillow



Lips upon my cheek
Sweet nothings in my ear
Any other modern guy could not meet
My doe eyed Casanova



Because I swooped him up
Before any other vixen
Could discover his medieval chivalry
His Fiery inferno of passion


I protect him from any hurt
My Romeo, I won't leave alone
And before I know it


I'm below a starry sky
With the perfect guy
And he's on one knee


He needn't even ask
For I have always been sworn
To his loving doe eyes


A one in a million guy
Who could never think to cheat
Would never dare to lie


Because his single sweetest weakness
His singlest greatest fear

Is my heartbroken cry

ELL30
Brandy
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 19th July 2012
Forum Posts: 528

Love At First Light


As dawn breaks over a frost covered mountain to the east
He is my first thought
just as he is always the last
I have come to crave the scent
of coffee and cigarettes at dawn
and I have grown to appreciate
all of the pieces that comprise
his existence
Be it virtue or vice
I adore him
unconditionally

 
Having finally aquired the peace within
to provide sound sleep
we are quiet upon waking this
November morning
Serene and present
Keenly aware that spoken words might cloud
the unequivocal purity in the atmosphere
Each of us knowing how vital
these moments are

 
I join him on the porch
of a humble log cabin
tucked within the forest
of the Smoky Mountains
Draping a blanket around him
I set his coffee down and
sweetly kiss his temple
He closes his eyes briefly
savoring the feel of my mouth
on his skin
I do not linger
I take my seat
and take in the view

 
The vision of his silhouette
is stunning
Washed in shades of blue grey
at first light, before the sun
Crouched over and writing
glancing up pensively
to see and feel the inspiration
as God unfolds before him,
around him and in everything
he sees


Caught up and in his element
he barely notices I'm there
and I observe in wonder
and awe of who he is
in this very moment
Memories and dreams,
vulnerability and strength
Driven by necessity
Fueled by hope and faith

 
Suddenly a Carolina Wren
catches my eye, my ear and my
undivided attention
Never was a picture painted
that could match the beauty
surrounding us
I am now in my element
and I study him as he too
is caught up in his morning routine
Driven by instinct
Fueled by purpose
I silently thank God for the blessing to witness
his work

 
My focus is turned back
to the radiant man
next to me
Who's face has now been
christened by the amber glow of dawn
The moment is breathtaking and
I feel a tangible pull in my soul
toward him and onto him
Latched on like my life depends on it
with no measure of seperation  between
our naked bodies
He drags soft, passionate kisses
down my neck
Our adoring eyes lock as
he slides slowly into me

 

I feel his heart and soul in between
these passionate breaths
and rolling waves
and we finally speak
the only three words that matter
  to the spirit
     to the soul

 
I     Love    You

poet Anonymous

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poet Anonymous

MY DARLING SERPENTINE

My darling serpentine
There you sit
With opal eyes

I swim
The sea
Between you
And me

My darling serpentine
Will you waltz
With me
In ethereal time

My skin
Becomes yours
As you enter
My veins

The rippled tide
Has granted me its wishes
My shipwreck was found
Upon your shore

A spiral stairs
I took, spiraling up
Spiraling down
(spell bound)

My elixir of emotion
Love, the strongest potion
Becomes a token
Of time

I inhale the secrets
Of the senses
You are of me
I am of you

Your voice
speaks through
my mouth

My darling serpentine
Our castles
Remain
In the sands of time

Your surface
I seek
Surrendering to
The comfort
Of being weak

I am the tear
On your cheek
The open horizon
That you seek

My hand in your palm
I recite this psalm
And softly silently
I say
Stay




zenithquasar77
Marcus cooke
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 10awards
Joined 6th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 88

"Ghosts And Flowers"

Two spirits entwined
Pass me by
unexpected i recall.

Like diamonds in the rough
They remind me
That some Diamonds are forever
Circumstances bought us together
Circumstances tore us apart
Are hearts ruled by higher powers?
Now all remain are ghosts and flowers
Tenderly, you kissed me and i you
The aurora borealis was named from that kiss
I named it after you.

You used to handle me with kids gloves
But I’m not the one who kept their soul in the ice box
My eyes became crusty and dry
but that's what happens when there are no tears left to cry.
My chest has a hole where my heart used to be
Now there is nothing left but ash and black flowers
Where love used to be.

I will take my turn on the turnstile
The thrill of the ride
Like raging tides
It was me who should have died.

I close my eyes
Prey to forget
But the ghost of you remains
On every street corner
Past the cemetery gates and the marble step
Every room with a view
Lost and skewed
This town has taken you.
 

FacePaint
Steven D
Thought Provoker
United States 8awards
Joined 28th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 98

The World In Her Eyes~


This world is lonely, least thats what they say,

But no one told me it doesnt have to be that way.

Nobody said "Hey! Come let me love you."

No one said a thing, thats what made it untrue.

But now I see a light, showing me salvation,

A heart that beats a song, surely my temptation.

And when I hold her, her heart stops the time,

Then she looks at me with the world in her eyes.

And I get so high when she smiles at me,

That I could just cry, but I'd say "I'm Melting."

She's become my drug, now I'm a dope fiend,

I cant get enough, I dont wanna stay clean.

Cause this world's ugly, but she makes it a dream,

And then suddenly everything is serene.

But I cant stop there cause there's no comprimise,

Nothing can compare to the world in her eyes.

Its such a great thing, I cant help but stare,

When she comes around there's a love in the air.

Its one with no name, one I cant explain,

One I cant tame, but I just cant refrain.

She looks at me with eyes wide as the sea,

Gives me a smile and kisses me softly.

She listens to my heart as it beats to the sky,

And im off to that place, the world in her eyes.

She holds me so close like she'll never let go,

My heart races faster but then it gets slow.

There's no sweeter moment, a kiss sealed in time,

I still feel her lips passing poison to mine.

So do you see now all the love that I've found,

It moves between bodies and needs not a sound.

Do you see now what's relieved my hearts cries,

Its what she gives me, Its the world in her eyes

EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
United States 40awards
Joined 11th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 2483


Sir_Lancelott
Lance
Dangerous Mind
United States 17awards
Joined 14th Jan 2011
Forum Posts: 39

Check me out it's called "I Love You"

Sir Lancelott

poet Anonymous


In a dark drunk distraught  part of me lies nothing
nothing is what is and is what isn't
we strive for it all but discover nothing...
We live we live we live but we don't live...
My blood isnt unique...
Not even a bit!
My face is as spectacularly ordinary as the next person's

...You are my only
heart
love
joy
happiness
passion
will
desire
peace
woman
pleasure
friend
serenity
tranquility!

You are, Cheri...

You are special
you are beautiful
you are loving
you are sexy
you are honest
you are caring
you are mine...
As I am solely yours...

Remember me as I am when with you for then I am a man...

Skill3tfr3ak
PerfectOrphan
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 17th May 2012
Forum Posts: 33

Love

A special bond of trust from two
A friendship lasting through darkest of blues
The care that it takes for one heart to give
Is the fire that makes the other one live

All of the days these hearts intertwine
Through beauty and closeness truly divine
Never could something unruly and crude
Break these apart for it is too shrewd

No object like distance money or time
Could break apart a love that is prime
Sharing the joy with all that they know
Lovers go out and put on a show

By others side two lovers shall be
Happy and careless amazingly
Holding each other in arms of peace
Sorrow and sadness anger shall cease

For love conquers anger fear and death
Rejoicing forever with every breath
Only those in love can truly see
What a great feeling it always can be

cryingeyes
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 28th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 10

I love her
i will do everything for her
Oneday I was Trying to "talk to her"
Snabb... from the bottom to top
I didn't expect
My eyes are crying
tears are falling
My heart is ripping off

The son of darkness
Stub my back i was all along

The light from Heaven shine on me
I saw the Son of GOd coming down
hug me... tap my back
he told me this is just the beginning
I woke up from sleep
I went to store.. and
she was there--- he apologize
and my heart beat is fast
almost Got heart attact
extreamly happiness to the bone

Inside of me i was crying and happy

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