Poetry competition CLOSED 16th October 2012 6:00pm
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shaunda
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REVENGE

poet Anonymous

Loving You by Mikimoondancer

Sometimes, some days...
I miss you being near

So, I close my eyes-pretend
Imagine you are here

I stare into your eyes
as your lips curve to a smile

Take your hand in mine
and hold it for a while

Then I deftly slice each finger
revealing pure white bone

Sever every vein
but leave the arteries alone

for now...

I softly kiss your cheek
as I whisper-I love you
sink a hatchet in your back
drink your bloody organ stew

You must see how much I love you
feel my passion in your pain

I twist your balls-remove your dick
am I loving you in vain?

The floor is red-the walls are too
wake up my love
I'm not yet through

loving you

poet Anonymous

Thank you Miki - for that wonderful poem.................!

poet Anonymous

My pleasure Kitty Thank you

shaunda
Fire of Insight
United States 13awards
Joined 19th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 261

I killed my daddy today

So many years- I said and I said  
don't touch me daddy- I'm out of my head  

you use your lies- sharp tongue and wit  
to get with me- be alone with me-   SHIT  

Go ahead daddy- you take  and you take  
one of these days- I'm a cut off your snake  

go ahead daddy- rip my clothes with your knife  
I'll steal it someday and I'll cut out your life  


Get that pillow off my face daddy-cause you're blocking my air  
Oh fuck it-get it over with-death is better than despair.  

I plot, I plan, and then procrastinate  
you used the pillow on my sister and sealed your fate  

I've changed my mind daddy, I want you, I need you  
I look in your eyes and I hope I deceive you.  

Let's meet in the dark daddy- hind the big willow trees  
I will lie on the grass and you'll get what you please  

So I lay in the dark on my back in the grass  
Let me touch you he says- cause you got a sweet ass  

As you lean in real close and undo my top button  
I pull out your knife and then I start  a-cuttin  

oh your screams sound so pretty-as I cut and I slash  
your arterial blood sprays-on my face and sweet ass  

then your body goes flying -cause there ain't no speed bumps  
and i laugh, god i laugh, when you roll in the swamp  


I'm feeling real smart and  I'll not dig a hole  
I hear the sound of the alligator doing his death roll

poet Anonymous

Shaunda - thank you for submitting a poem.

SupHomeboi
Thought Provoker
United States 15awards
Joined 9th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 276

Bad Judgement, Swift Justice

Look deep into the dark abyss in my eyes
Do you recognize the emptiness you made me feel
Trying to stay strong as steel to conceal the hurt
The dirt that contaminated my spirit
Memories of you mounting me resides in me like a parasite
Out of sight out of mind I tried to avoid seeing you
But no luck I can still feel your breath
On the back of my neck as you penetrated me to death
You wanted to play God so I begged you for mercy
Instead you cursed me or so you thought
Here I am ten years later stronger and greater than before
That previous experience doesn't affect me anymore
Here you are ten years later in a hospice bed
Contracted that thing from one of your victims
Silly uncle of mine it's only a matter of time
You don't have too much longer to exist
Death raped you as you done unto to me
You feel its breath on the back of your neck
Like I felt yours
You're begging for mercy but instead it cursed you
Like you did me
Sounds familiar because karma is reminding you
That no wicked act goes unpunished
Now dwell on that as you lie on your hospice bed and cry
While I get the pleasure of watching you die

poet Anonymous

SupHomboi - thank you for your submission.

13
Dangerous Mind
India 17awards
Joined 25th June 2011
Forum Posts: 682

I'm angry... like I could never be
how easily I was deceived
its pathetic.
I'm angry at myself, at my oppressor
at my helplessness and my ignorance.
the credit that I deserved
is scattered amongst pigs and swines alike.
hard work brushed aside, by avaricious devils
cancerous whores of society that call themselves men.
they're reaping all that I've sweat and bled for.
soon will come a time, one I tarry for.
when their morning walks will make them sweat.
when in the dead of night on their beds they'll bleed.
when they see each other at work - they wont.
living in hell and constant fear of my retribution,
my absolute resolve to destroy such betrayal.
they'll lose the things that matter most in their lives,
the way they took away what mattered most in mine.
and when they've all realized
I'll slowly slit their throats before them and lie,
just like they lied " everything is fine."

13
Dangerous Mind
India 17awards
Joined 25th June 2011
Forum Posts: 682

SHIT! im late :(

poet Anonymous

You were not late 13....I judged the competition with your poem.
Thanks for participating!

poet Anonymous

COMPETITION: REVENGE
WINNER: shaunda CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST WIN AT DUP!

RUNNER-UP: Jessica Jennifer Ashton (Kou_Indigo) and ldryad (Grace)     

JESSICA AND GRACE ARE THE POET-LAUREATES OF DUP
Their work is always worthy.

NO ONE PERSON SUBMITTED A BAD POEM
Thank you to each and every person who submitted.
Kitty

13
Dangerous Mind
India 17awards
Joined 25th June 2011
Forum Posts: 682

yes this is why you won congrats! :)

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