Poetry competition CLOSED 19th September 2012 6:50pm
WINNER
MrAlptraum (Mr A)
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RUNNER-UP: cheesypocket

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Ramblings On

JimmBGrace
wozard
Twisted Dreamer
Canada 1awards
Joined 21st July 2012
Forum Posts: 21

"Shady Trees"

Blink eye blink
sting it stings
lemon drops make my eyes pop
all about looks
in vein i like books
not so much to look at
even with a suit and a top hat
a performing monkey
caged since i was freed
blink blink
sting sick
i love the smell of chloroform
mornings make me sick
it makes my head stay still
and my mind go blank
i hate the world
i love the sea
i love the lands
with grass and trees
i love my love
but i hate the world
what is this world coming to
hatred and love
and peace and violence
and god and satan
sharing a drink one night
for old time sake
i feel old
i feel frail
i am tired and ill
so sad, so mad
the life before
the best i've ever had
goooooooo! with love

Karrabear
Question
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 29th Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 416

Just Another Fight

Tap, tap, tap.
Stop that nervouse habit!
Tap, tap, tap.
Can't you see its weak?
Nibble, nibble, nibble.
Why do you bite your nails?
Scratch, scratch, scratch.
My gods you drive me nuts!
Tap, tap, tap.
Give me that damned pencil.
No, no, no.
Your little saftey net should go.
Let go, let go, let go.
Stop!
You idiot, now my pencil broke!

"What are you doing?"

Just fighting by myself.

Duncan
Duncan Alexander
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 1awards
Joined 4th May 2010
Forum Posts: 2144

Thank you to everyone who entered my competition, there have been some really awesome entries making the final decision quite tough but I've come to a verdict.

PS.Eamon you were the third runner up.

What do you call a Scots woman with one leg?


Eileen.

lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
Yemen 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14589

Ah good man Mr A , nice one

good stuff Alip, Ken

decent comp Duncan, bit o fun.

".Eamon you were the third runner up."

cheers man, I read that and got 'loser'  :D

Duncan
Duncan Alexander
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 1awards
Joined 4th May 2010
Forum Posts: 2144

lepperochan said:decent comp Duncan, bit o fun.

".Eamon you were the third runner up."

cheers man, I read that and got 'loser'  :D
Thanks.

Dunce.

Karrabear
Question
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 29th Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 416

Congrats XD

MrAlptraum
Mr A
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 17awards
Joined 24th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 1878

Cheers folks, and Duncan, I'll pay you the rest later.

Well done Alip and cheesypocket...

and Eamon the loser. For the right price you can have your number 27. :)

cheesypocket
Ken
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 5th June 2012
Forum Posts: 81

:) well done to everyone I have to say. Actually I thought the "rambling thong" poem was pretty good. I think I particularly liked this competition.  

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