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Life is a box of chocolates

Posted: 27th August 2012 6:56pm
poet Anonymous
LeColonel, Thank you for sharing that work with us. I do believe I had a crooked smile on my face as well.

Posted: 27th August 2012 6:57pm
poet Anonymous
I agree with Lowerridergirl. This gem needs to be posted :-).

Posted: 27th August 2012 7:03pm
poet Anonymous
Doe eyes, thank you for your submission. Is it wrong that I cuckled? I have had that feeling, but to me it's all the coconut crap :-)

Posted: 27th August 2012 7:07pm
poet Anonymous
nopoetiknow, thank you for your submission. Interesting view as well.

Posted: 27th August 2012 7:12pm
Myheartdiesforyou
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Sweet and dark
Or caramel filled
Or that disgusting surprise of crap
filling the hollow chocolate.
The deceivingly heavy
heart shaped box
Calls to
Me,
And i eat
And eat
And eat
Then like life
Im ADDICTED
I Get FAT
And say..
Screw this life
And throw out the damn box.

Posted: 27th August 2012 7:13pm
Edited: 27th August 2012 7:14pm
Icuduseahugritenow
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haha yes and the coconut i shall add that
btw i'm glad you giggled a little, i did too

Posted: 27th August 2012 8:36pm
AlmostDead0909
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L_Geo said:AlmostDead0909, Thank you for your submission. I heard the Adam's family song in my head while I read this one.

Aha Thank you

Posted: 27th August 2012 10:34pm
poet Anonymous
Dead Lovers, So true and thank you for sharing your work. :-)

Posted: 27th August 2012 10:47pm
Myheartdiesforyou
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L_Geo said:Dead Lovers, So true and thank you for sharing your work. :-)
Your welcome, dear..

Posted: 28th August 2012 3:34am
beautiful_accident
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Chocolate covered rant

Orange creme-filled dark chocolate
Upside down in its space
Thumb print visible in the bottom
Some days, this is my life.

Today is Monday.
Today is one of those days.

I never find the box untainted;
Never even pass my eyes over caramel
Over tasty nougat or solid chocolate
I always see the box with its lone occupant--
The nasty, orange creme-filled chocolate
Complete with invading thumb hole
This is my box of chocolates
This is my life

I did notice, however,
If I eat enough of the rum-soaked fruitcake
I don't care if the chocolate
tastes like shit
I eat it anyway.

I hate Mondays.

Posted: 28th August 2012 3:53am
poet Anonymous
beautiful_accident, thank you for your submission. I think of it as "Chocolate Monday"

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