MARRIAGE
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catlady
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Broken pieces
will never make
a pot that holds
anything
But oh there is potery
that feasts
are served on
come my love
and dine
with me
will never make
a pot that holds
anything
But oh there is potery
that feasts
are served on
come my love
and dine
with me
Anonymous
Thank you for your submissions Rachel and Catlady!
Kitty
Kitty
marielavoue
Gypsy Red
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Gypsy Red
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 18th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 905
Marriage for me has always
been the epitome of unhappiness
so much so, I once considered
becoming a nun or a celibate priestess.
As a child I saw all the female
family members and how they suffered,
as a daughter I watched as my mother
sat on the kitchen floor and cried.
As a woman I endured physical abuse
and rape at the hands of my first spouse;
verbal, physical and mental with the second.
But, do I hate marriage?…No.
For too long women have been made
to think they are powerless in marriage
that they must “cleave onto thy mate”
“thy must obey” the vows says it this way,
I say: to HELL with that, we have a say!
I view marriage has a partnership
a unified tie that binds.
where my partner is weak I am strong,
where I feel fear he fortifies me to carry on,
together we face the challenges life throws,
where comfortably together
into old age we grow…
Gypsy Red
Anonymous
Gypsy Red - thank you for that beautifully presented poem.
Kitty
Kitty
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Anonymous
Sapphire - thank you for your submission.
Kitty
Kitty
Anonymous
A character poem~
"Hollow Word Lament"
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2566/4091095220_1ddfffb471.jpg
She said she wasn’t mad at me and smiled, but,
I was dialed into her hands, which
she clenched like her jaw line,
giving away her poker face.
She lied, I feel sad.
She said she liked my gift and smiled, but,
I haven’t seen it in weeks, she’s
hidden it away without play.
What can I say?
She lied, I feel a bit mad.
She said she was interested in me and smiled, but,
when I got near her feet turned away,
pointed in the other direction.
She gave me the wrong instructions,
my brilliant deduction.
She lied, what phony seduction.
She said she wanted to kiss me and smiled,
licked and touched her lips more than usual, but,
when I went to them to sway,
her eyes and face quickly turned the other way.
She lied, why do I even stay.
I’ve tried diligently to seize all opportunities,
show her my thoughtfulness,
how gentle, how caring I can be, but,
her body speaks louder than her hollow words.
I can’t even swallow my pride anymore.
It hurts just as much,
spent,
I lament.
"Hollow Word Lament"
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2566/4091095220_1ddfffb471.jpg
She said she wasn’t mad at me and smiled, but,
I was dialed into her hands, which
she clenched like her jaw line,
giving away her poker face.
She lied, I feel sad.
She said she liked my gift and smiled, but,
I haven’t seen it in weeks, she’s
hidden it away without play.
What can I say?
She lied, I feel a bit mad.
She said she was interested in me and smiled, but,
when I got near her feet turned away,
pointed in the other direction.
She gave me the wrong instructions,
my brilliant deduction.
She lied, what phony seduction.
She said she wanted to kiss me and smiled,
licked and touched her lips more than usual, but,
when I went to them to sway,
her eyes and face quickly turned the other way.
She lied, why do I even stay.
I’ve tried diligently to seize all opportunities,
show her my thoughtfulness,
how gentle, how caring I can be, but,
her body speaks louder than her hollow words.
I can’t even swallow my pride anymore.
It hurts just as much,
spent,
I lament.
Anonymous
Strider - thank you for your submission!
Kitty
Kitty
Anonymous
The ‘D’ word .
i. A sign
“To be continued.”
left on the
bedroom door.
reminding him of
what was disregarded yesterday.
As it is read
shattered
fragments of their
life’s windscreen
appear vividly in his mind,
like a dress rehearsal
for the afterlife.
But the man has
emotions
whilst well sheltered
they speak volumes
and share
his cracked
dislocated
heart
with society and the rest
of this unforgiving
world.
ii. An affirmation
of just two
words, was where
this tormented
bliss began.
And the rubix
riddle he finds himself
clutching to
becomes apparent.
Yet still
in the depths of
his soul,
the heart
races
chanting
in alarming
retorts
and screaming
"Suicide"
from the depth
of its dark
unexercised
bass-less
beat.
Yet it remembers
those three letters,
oh how easily
he shouted
“I do.”
iii. Today he studies
new verse.
Two new words
that he
will be prompted
to say
at a moment
opportune.
And he studies them
learns them
rehearses them
auditions
in front
of his reflection
in her full length
wall mirror.
Finally he finds
enthusiasm
in his voice,
as he blurts the
six letters,
in harmonious
dissonance
“The End.”
-x-
Previously written and published at DU on 13 November 2011.
i. A sign
“To be continued.”
left on the
bedroom door.
reminding him of
what was disregarded yesterday.
As it is read
shattered
fragments of their
life’s windscreen
appear vividly in his mind,
like a dress rehearsal
for the afterlife.
But the man has
emotions
whilst well sheltered
they speak volumes
and share
his cracked
dislocated
heart
with society and the rest
of this unforgiving
world.
ii. An affirmation
of just two
words, was where
this tormented
bliss began.
And the rubix
riddle he finds himself
clutching to
becomes apparent.
Yet still
in the depths of
his soul,
the heart
races
chanting
in alarming
retorts
and screaming
"Suicide"
from the depth
of its dark
unexercised
bass-less
beat.
Yet it remembers
those three letters,
oh how easily
he shouted
“I do.”
iii. Today he studies
new verse.
Two new words
that he
will be prompted
to say
at a moment
opportune.
And he studies them
learns them
rehearses them
auditions
in front
of his reflection
in her full length
wall mirror.
Finally he finds
enthusiasm
in his voice,
as he blurts the
six letters,
in harmonious
dissonance
“The End.”
-x-
Previously written and published at DU on 13 November 2011.
Anonymous
At times . . .
In the times
when my
heart
roars louder
than the
voices
in my head.
And my vocal
chords;
are muted
by the
memories
we share.
In the times
I see
our daughters'
smile
laugh
& sing.
I stare at
emotions with
lust-filled
craving.
Saving yet
another
mental-picture
of you.
As the
album
fills
I come to realise
I do,
I do still
love you.
-x-
Especially for Kerry.
Previously written and published on DU on 3rd February 2012.
In the times
when my
heart
roars louder
than the
voices
in my head.
And my vocal
chords;
are muted
by the
memories
we share.
In the times
I see
our daughters'
smile
laugh
& sing.
I stare at
emotions with
lust-filled
craving.
Saving yet
another
mental-picture
of you.
As the
album
fills
I come to realise
I do,
I do still
love you.
-x-
Especially for Kerry.
Previously written and published on DU on 3rd February 2012.
Anonymous
Alip - thank you so much for participating!
Kitty
Kitty
Scattered_Thoughts
ST
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ST
Thought Provoker
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