Poetry competition CLOSED 24th August 2012 10:41pm
WINNER
PierreTheMad
PierreTheMad
RUNNERS-UP:
mjs211
and 13
love doesn't always suck,
The pain I seem to carry
Like a shock collar blade
Everytime I start to fall
The wounds dig deep
I embrace you with my all
And my blood spills over us
Its like playing with fire
You push me away
I'm not sure what to say
I knew you were the one
The first time we spoke
Even though we met
On the thing called internet
I'd be a fool
But I have to play it cool
So walk away
Because I know you'll come back
You always do
Distance is a stupid thing
Love is so fickel
Give me a day
And I'll know what to say
For now I can only cry
As I write you long letters
I see past my bitter judgement
I know how you feel
I've felt every tear
I know every fear
So won't you let me in
So I can be here?
Because I've sincerly fallen for you
Like a shock collar blade
Everytime I start to fall
The wounds dig deep
I embrace you with my all
And my blood spills over us
Its like playing with fire
You push me away
I'm not sure what to say
I knew you were the one
The first time we spoke
Even though we met
On the thing called internet
I'd be a fool
But I have to play it cool
So walk away
Because I know you'll come back
You always do
Distance is a stupid thing
Love is so fickel
Give me a day
And I'll know what to say
For now I can only cry
As I write you long letters
I see past my bitter judgement
I know how you feel
I've felt every tear
I know every fear
So won't you let me in
So I can be here?
Because I've sincerly fallen for you
"Mistress Heroin"
I know how to be more fun,
More charming, more polite.
I know how to win a man back from a bitch,
And know how to throw down a fight.
I know how to keep a clean house,
And be quite for as long as he says.
I know how to work so that when he's in jail,
All of our bills will be paid.
I've not lost him yet,
Because I'm quick as a dime.
If he wants to leave me,
I'll change his mind.
There was the girl in his college class,
His lab partner in school.
I met her at Starbucks,
And she blew her cool.
The woman from work,
And the questions she asked him?
Me and the girls made sure her tires
Got a good slashing.
His ex, Kristine, was lurking around,
For that one I was scaed.
But he remembered the times I was there
When nobody else could care.
I don't know how to win him back though,
For his heart's no longer mine.
The drug he values over all else,
And I can't get through this time.
She owns his mind completely
And she's all he wants and needs.
Without her heartlesss, beatless love,
He swears that he would grieve.
He doesn't want my body,
Finds exotic rouse in her embrace,
He doesn't care to tuck my hair
Or gently kiss my face.
My superman, so loyal!
In shining armor, my knight!
I never knew that he could lie,
Or sleep without me at night.
At our high school reunion,
Will our friends all sigh and gasp?
To learn that Mistress Heroin,
Married him at last?
I know how to be more fun,
More charming, more polite.
I know how to win a man back from a bitch,
And know how to throw down a fight.
I know how to keep a clean house,
And be quite for as long as he says.
I know how to work so that when he's in jail,
All of our bills will be paid.
I've not lost him yet,
Because I'm quick as a dime.
If he wants to leave me,
I'll change his mind.
There was the girl in his college class,
His lab partner in school.
I met her at Starbucks,
And she blew her cool.
The woman from work,
And the questions she asked him?
Me and the girls made sure her tires
Got a good slashing.
His ex, Kristine, was lurking around,
For that one I was scaed.
But he remembered the times I was there
When nobody else could care.
I don't know how to win him back though,
For his heart's no longer mine.
The drug he values over all else,
And I can't get through this time.
She owns his mind completely
And she's all he wants and needs.
Without her heartlesss, beatless love,
He swears that he would grieve.
He doesn't want my body,
Finds exotic rouse in her embrace,
He doesn't care to tuck my hair
Or gently kiss my face.
My superman, so loyal!
In shining armor, my knight!
I never knew that he could lie,
Or sleep without me at night.
At our high school reunion,
Will our friends all sigh and gasp?
To learn that Mistress Heroin,
Married him at last?
wicked girl but your pain is like a knife
i heard from others about what you did with her.
she's a witch havent you heard
she was born in hell
her father is the devil
but yet you still go and commit the sin
do not lie with the devils daughter is written on stone
when i asked you if it was true
i felt like i was having a heart attack
your words stabs me in the chest
they sliced up my heart
but reached so deep that they shattered my soul.
i heard from others about what you did with her.
she's a witch havent you heard
she was born in hell
her father is the devil
but yet you still go and commit the sin
do not lie with the devils daughter is written on stone
when i asked you if it was true
i felt like i was having a heart attack
your words stabs me in the chest
they sliced up my heart
but reached so deep that they shattered my soul.
Anonymous
Good Riddance
It was nearly twelve
almost midnight
I was away but -
something didn't feel right
Not that night...
After a plethora of calls
a multitude of pleadings
You tried to fill me up
with slack, petty reasons
Life has it's seasons
This is the fall
I will see another spring
wont miss you at all
Anonymous
“Love Mail”
http://magnetforfoolishness.files.wordpress.com/2011/06/pict31.jpg
She loved the glitz, the glamour, island sun,
fast European cars, Tiki bars, said
she would take me far,
be my forever loving wife,
end all my earthly strife.
Told me she was mine, what a looker,
so very fine, generous and kind,
not a hooker, a real class act.
We were on our way, she
gave me everything, including,
this chronic heartburn,
I got it when I learned
she was f’ing everyone
behind my back, just for fun.
She had no character,
lacked integrity,
I told her to get bent.
She lost,
I won the lottery,
six million spent,
six million to go.
She’s living in a dump,
a hole downtown.
Oh, well, pity for her.
No frown here, just smiles.
from all this love mail.
http://magnetforfoolishness.files.wordpress.com/2011/06/pict31.jpg
She loved the glitz, the glamour, island sun,
fast European cars, Tiki bars, said
she would take me far,
be my forever loving wife,
end all my earthly strife.
Told me she was mine, what a looker,
so very fine, generous and kind,
not a hooker, a real class act.
We were on our way, she
gave me everything, including,
this chronic heartburn,
I got it when I learned
she was f’ing everyone
behind my back, just for fun.
She had no character,
lacked integrity,
I told her to get bent.
She lost,
I won the lottery,
six million spent,
six million to go.
She’s living in a dump,
a hole downtown.
Oh, well, pity for her.
No frown here, just smiles.
from all this love mail.
Anonymous
Pious .
You declare warfare within my
un-solved mind.
On bended knee
I recite my emotions -
a prayer in the darkness
of my divine soul.
And I whisper
my wor-ship
in solitude…
“I am loyal
to your every
- pant
- gasp
& breath.
Fervent to your existence,
beyond any words
devoted to your judgments
virtuous to your well-being
devout of your desire
& protective
of your heart.
My emotions
surpass
another
“I – love - you” cliché.
This is my prayer of
spiritual - dedication,
honour & devotion.
Devout always.
Amen . ”
-x-
I thank you for taking the time to create this competition, and have provided a previous write for your consideration, it was written and published on DU on 23rd December 2011.
You declare warfare within my
un-solved mind.
On bended knee
I recite my emotions -
a prayer in the darkness
of my divine soul.
And I whisper
my wor-ship
in solitude…
“I am loyal
to your every
- pant
- gasp
& breath.
Fervent to your existence,
beyond any words
devoted to your judgments
virtuous to your well-being
devout of your desire
& protective
of your heart.
My emotions
surpass
another
“I – love - you” cliché.
This is my prayer of
spiritual - dedication,
honour & devotion.
Devout always.
Amen . ”
-x-
I thank you for taking the time to create this competition, and have provided a previous write for your consideration, it was written and published on DU on 23rd December 2011.
I kissed my husband goodbye,
He no idea, I had my alibi.
A four hour drive to see my dark man,
It has been ten years still his love I demand.
The first kiss so awkward, oh what did I miss?
The nights spent in passion, am I being old fashioned?
After some drinks our minds start to sync.
I am feeling that flame checking out is main vein.
For he is now a man yet I don't understand,
Why we ever parted and I was left broken hearted.
Enough of the soft shit, his hand grabs my tit.
I pull out his black dick and beat it on my clit.
Just like I remember, that curve to the right.
It makes it so interesting, so full and so tight.
He was so gentle and swore of his love,
We fucked in the bathroom, he didn't wear a glove.
I felt my man cum after all of these years,
I'm always such a softy, he brought me to tears.
Now that it's my turn to make this flame burn,
I turn to the bedroom with my Nurse uniform.
"Come see the Nurse you are feeling so hot"
Now pull out that dick and fuck my pink twot.
I sucked on his dick and and rubbed on his balls,
He ate out my pussy as my heels hit the walls.
Such a good patient for his Nurse yes indeed,
Now bring your ass over here it's time to breastfeed.
Suck on my nipples and squeeze on my tit,
Put that big boy right under my clit.
It's my turn to cum now you don't dissapoint,
I jump on the lap launcher his turn to anoint,
My ass moves like an x-wing on his black thing.
His pulses send bullets so deep inside,
I feel my cat cumming she's burning with pride.
The call light is on, his Nurse in the room.
All vital signs stable as I burst like a balloon.
I came on his stomach and he in my cunt,
His seeds are now planted, his semen has landed.
The morning after pill in hand, I don't understand.
Why I was so stupid to not cover his gland.
Until next time, oh yes there will be,
I'll hang with my husband and our kids of three.
I send my words of poetry so dirty,
He always gets hard because I'm so flirty.
He just sent a picture of the big black dick,
Bending to the right and I want to lick.
The feelings live on, the lust fills my heart.
I'm sure if I had him we would have fallen a part.
He no idea, I had my alibi.
A four hour drive to see my dark man,
It has been ten years still his love I demand.
The first kiss so awkward, oh what did I miss?
The nights spent in passion, am I being old fashioned?
After some drinks our minds start to sync.
I am feeling that flame checking out is main vein.
For he is now a man yet I don't understand,
Why we ever parted and I was left broken hearted.
Enough of the soft shit, his hand grabs my tit.
I pull out his black dick and beat it on my clit.
Just like I remember, that curve to the right.
It makes it so interesting, so full and so tight.
He was so gentle and swore of his love,
We fucked in the bathroom, he didn't wear a glove.
I felt my man cum after all of these years,
I'm always such a softy, he brought me to tears.
Now that it's my turn to make this flame burn,
I turn to the bedroom with my Nurse uniform.
"Come see the Nurse you are feeling so hot"
Now pull out that dick and fuck my pink twot.
I sucked on his dick and and rubbed on his balls,
He ate out my pussy as my heels hit the walls.
Such a good patient for his Nurse yes indeed,
Now bring your ass over here it's time to breastfeed.
Suck on my nipples and squeeze on my tit,
Put that big boy right under my clit.
It's my turn to cum now you don't dissapoint,
I jump on the lap launcher his turn to anoint,
My ass moves like an x-wing on his black thing.
His pulses send bullets so deep inside,
I feel my cat cumming she's burning with pride.
The call light is on, his Nurse in the room.
All vital signs stable as I burst like a balloon.
I came on his stomach and he in my cunt,
His seeds are now planted, his semen has landed.
The morning after pill in hand, I don't understand.
Why I was so stupid to not cover his gland.
Until next time, oh yes there will be,
I'll hang with my husband and our kids of three.
I send my words of poetry so dirty,
He always gets hard because I'm so flirty.
He just sent a picture of the big black dick,
Bending to the right and I want to lick.
The feelings live on, the lust fills my heart.
I'm sure if I had him we would have fallen a part.
