Poetry competition CLOSED 29th August 2012 11:32pm
WINNER
wanderer (Faceless)
wanderer (Faceless)
RUNNER-UP:
PierreTheMad
A write for the one above!
Anonymous
Mike the Engineer
Concretely processing
he strides confidently
through the forums,
the voice of reason
in a gossamer prison
of darling darklings.
He could be a surgeon,
a specialist
of magnetically controlled
word studies
excising intricacies
with precision
and care.
Concretely processing
he strides confidently
through the forums,
the voice of reason
in a gossamer prison
of darling darklings.
He could be a surgeon,
a specialist
of magnetically controlled
word studies
excising intricacies
with precision
and care.
The eastern breeze
blows focused
as spiraled light
through a wand
Illuminating the underground
down here
where the weight
of mans angst
can be palpable
A column stands
that seems to defy
physicality
gravity
subscribes to different suggestions
as the levitation from the love
of his craft,
of the recognized stature
of the muses he must evoke
to wrap his sculpted air around
arises
as a coiled
and sleeping serpent
sprung into awoke by the excited spine
of awareness
blows focused
as spiraled light
through a wand
Illuminating the underground
down here
where the weight
of mans angst
can be palpable
A column stands
that seems to defy
physicality
gravity
subscribes to different suggestions
as the levitation from the love
of his craft,
of the recognized stature
of the muses he must evoke
to wrap his sculpted air around
arises
as a coiled
and sleeping serpent
sprung into awoke by the excited spine
of awareness
Lightbaron
A light glowing from the inside of ones soul
as hard truth is unfurled on white scrolls
Enticing the mind of the reader to think
As he enlightens then tightens our definitions in ink
A prolific word master
as his mind moves faster
Than light
As he hones his craft until
he gets it right.
A breath of fresh air he is
with his vivid insights
Always writing with meaning
Never a word written that is contrite.
A light glowing from the inside of ones soul
as hard truth is unfurled on white scrolls
Enticing the mind of the reader to think
As he enlightens then tightens our definitions in ink
A prolific word master
as his mind moves faster
Than light
As he hones his craft until
he gets it right.
A breath of fresh air he is
with his vivid insights
Always writing with meaning
Never a word written that is contrite.
lightbaron said:So incredibly flattered Ms. Firebyrd. Loved it much
AAh shucks...
I have always admired your writing style LB,
You are really cool people with a vivid and fresh outlook
you pull no punches, and you make us your loyal readers think when you write. I may not all ways comment but I am allways reading your work, its good stuff!
AAh shucks...
I have always admired your writing style LB,
You are really cool people with a vivid and fresh outlook
you pull no punches, and you make us your loyal readers think when you write. I may not all ways comment but I am allways reading your work, its good stuff!
Aish said:Mike the Engineer
Concretely processing
he strides confidently
through the forums,
the voice of reason
in a gossamer prison
of darling darklings.
He could be a surgeon,
a specialist
of magnetically controlled
word studies
excising intricacies
with precision
and care.
*blush* Aw shucks, Aish, that's entirely too complimentary. Thanks, for sure.
Concretely processing
he strides confidently
through the forums,
the voice of reason
in a gossamer prison
of darling darklings.
He could be a surgeon,
a specialist
of magnetically controlled
word studies
excising intricacies
with precision
and care.
*blush* Aw shucks, Aish, that's entirely too complimentary. Thanks, for sure.
Firebyrd
***
Wings Outstretched Across the Horizon
Their flames competing with the sun's rays
Her dance is wicked and sweet
As waves crash over her feet
Warm chocalate skin
And Deep thoughtful eyes
She is a goddess
From the skies
She takes them in
All tucked within
And hushes them to sleep with her angelic voice
With a mothers hands
And a fathers strenght
She guides us to the stairway
To our new home
***
Wings Outstretched Across the Horizon
Their flames competing with the sun's rays
Her dance is wicked and sweet
As waves crash over her feet
Warm chocalate skin
And Deep thoughtful eyes
She is a goddess
From the skies
She takes them in
All tucked within
And hushes them to sleep with her angelic voice
With a mothers hands
And a fathers strenght
She guides us to the stairway
To our new home
Danii said:Firebyrd
***
Wings Outstretched Across the Horizon
Their flames competing with the sun's rays
Her dance is wicked and sweet
As waves crash over her feet
Warm chocalate skin
And Deep thoughtful eyes
She is a goddess
From the skies
She takes them in
All tucked within
And hushes them to sleep with her angelic voice
With a mothers hands
And a fathers strenght
She guides us to the stairway
To our new home
THAT WAS AWESOME DANII ....Wow...speechless!
***
Wings Outstretched Across the Horizon
Their flames competing with the sun's rays
Her dance is wicked and sweet
As waves crash over her feet
Warm chocalate skin
And Deep thoughtful eyes
She is a goddess
From the skies
She takes them in
All tucked within
And hushes them to sleep with her angelic voice
With a mothers hands
And a fathers strenght
She guides us to the stairway
To our new home
THAT WAS AWESOME DANII ....Wow...speechless!
