Poetry competition CLOSED 29th August 2012 11:32pm
WINNER
wanderer (Faceless)
wanderer (Faceless)
RUNNER-UP:
PierreTheMad
A write for the one above!
Gg78 said:Ok autumn don't kill me :-p
Autumn
They say never judge a book by it's cover
I never believed that until I met
Autumn
Such a beauty,
the look of innocence on her face
You'd think she's dumb as post
Caring just about her looks
No not our autumn
She's more then that
The girl will give Shakespeare a run for his money
Without a bat of a lash
I bet she'd tell him,
"Romeo was a fool"
For Juliet was just another loose whore
Can't blame her can we
And everyone should love her for it
She has the guts to be who she is
A pretty girl with a mind of her own
Hate on her if you like
She just won't care
Only the weak give a fuck
She doesn't give two fucks
What's that tell you there?
Well here goes nothing.
Gg
A soul of light
with a laugh of gold
She loves to have fun
as I am sure we all know
She also will gossip a little
as I learned on the day without DUP
But all of her rumors
I really found funny
So I leave with this
few last lines
She's just awesome
so if you don't know her yet, she's kind.
Autumn
They say never judge a book by it's cover
I never believed that until I met
Autumn
Such a beauty,
the look of innocence on her face
You'd think she's dumb as post
Caring just about her looks
No not our autumn
She's more then that
The girl will give Shakespeare a run for his money
Without a bat of a lash
I bet she'd tell him,
"Romeo was a fool"
For Juliet was just another loose whore
Can't blame her can we
And everyone should love her for it
She has the guts to be who she is
A pretty girl with a mind of her own
Hate on her if you like
She just won't care
Only the weak give a fuck
She doesn't give two fucks
What's that tell you there?
Well here goes nothing.
Gg
A soul of light
with a laugh of gold
She loves to have fun
as I am sure we all know
She also will gossip a little
as I learned on the day without DUP
But all of her rumors
I really found funny
So I leave with this
few last lines
She's just awesome
so if you don't know her yet, she's kind.
violet said:Awaiting Mr A's submission for jesta. So, that leaves Mr A. for you :)
A. Nightmare
Red hands in cold,
still waters
Washing in depths
so the surface looks calm and undisturbed
But the scars tell a different story
In other words
the words that fall prostrate
to sum up the comfort of pain
are his
in love with his flow
they are still and come
from the red and murky depths
of a heart built like a fortress
with cracks in its walls
The dark returns
when his back is turned
and his mind is lured away
the vigil is broken
But his spirit can never be
A. Nightmare
Red hands in cold,
still waters
Washing in depths
so the surface looks calm and undisturbed
But the scars tell a different story
In other words
the words that fall prostrate
to sum up the comfort of pain
are his
in love with his flow
they are still and come
from the red and murky depths
of a heart built like a fortress
with cracks in its walls
The dark returns
when his back is turned
and his mind is lured away
the vigil is broken
But his spirit can never be
PierreTheMad said:[quote-116649-violet]Awaiting Mr A's submission for jesta. So, that leaves Mr A. for you :)
A. Nightmare
Red hands in cold,
still waters
Washing in depths
so the surface looks calm and undisturbed
But the scars tell a different story
In other words
the words that fall prostrate
to sum up the comfort of pain
are his
in love with his flow
they are still and come
from the red and murky depths
of a heart built like a fortress
with cracks in its walls
The dark returns
when his back is turned
and his mind is lured away
the vigil is broken
But his spirit can never be[/quote]
Wow, ptm. Very brooding and excellent metaphors. Beautifully crafted and I'm not sure I'm worthy of such a strong poem. Thank you very much, man!
A. Nightmare
Red hands in cold,
still waters
Washing in depths
so the surface looks calm and undisturbed
But the scars tell a different story
In other words
the words that fall prostrate
to sum up the comfort of pain
are his
in love with his flow
they are still and come
from the red and murky depths
of a heart built like a fortress
with cracks in its walls
The dark returns
when his back is turned
and his mind is lured away
the vigil is broken
But his spirit can never be[/quote]
Wow, ptm. Very brooding and excellent metaphors. Beautifully crafted and I'm not sure I'm worthy of such a strong poem. Thank you very much, man!
siphondarkness said:[quote-116595-Gg78]Ok autumn don't kill me :-p
Autumn
They say never judge a book by it's cover
I never believed that until I met
Autumn
Such a beauty,
the look of innocence on her face
You'd think she's dumb as post
Caring just about her looks
No not our autumn
She's more then that
The girl will give Shakespeare a run for his money
Without a bat of a lash
I bet she'd tell him,
"Romeo was a fool"
For Juliet was just another loose whore
Can't blame her can we
And everyone should love her for it
She has the guts to be who she is
A pretty girl with a mind of her own
Hate on her if you like
She just won't care
Only the weak give a fuck
She doesn't give two fucks
What's that tell you there?
Well here goes nothing.
Gg
A soul of light
with a laugh of gold
She loves to have fun
as I am sure we all know
She also will gossip a little
as I learned on the day without DUP
But all of her rumors
I really found funny
So I leave with this
few last lines
She's just awesome
so if you don't know her yet, she's kind.[/quote]
Awe thank you Levi. I will write one for you. But no one needs to write another about me. You just did. And jesta did. So it makes it even
Autumn
They say never judge a book by it's cover
I never believed that until I met
Autumn
Such a beauty,
the look of innocence on her face
You'd think she's dumb as post
Caring just about her looks
No not our autumn
She's more then that
The girl will give Shakespeare a run for his money
Without a bat of a lash
I bet she'd tell him,
"Romeo was a fool"
For Juliet was just another loose whore
Can't blame her can we
And everyone should love her for it
She has the guts to be who she is
A pretty girl with a mind of her own
Hate on her if you like
She just won't care
Only the weak give a fuck
She doesn't give two fucks
What's that tell you there?
Well here goes nothing.
Gg
A soul of light
with a laugh of gold
She loves to have fun
as I am sure we all know
She also will gossip a little
as I learned on the day without DUP
But all of her rumors
I really found funny
So I leave with this
few last lines
She's just awesome
so if you don't know her yet, she's kind.[/quote]
Awe thank you Levi. I will write one for you. But no one needs to write another about me. You just did. And jesta did. So it makes it even
(For Jestaneverthelessa)
"Child of the Sun"
Hair, trapped
in a windswept mould
but it longs for a certain wind
a wind with a warm salty kiss.
Eyes slightly tortured
that swallow the world
still
with more life
than a lioness hunting
for her starving cubs.
She belongs to scortched sands
linked by open roads
to give this gold-welder of words
the inspiration she deserves -
one day, J, one day
may your ties come undone.
She's a chaser of our star
and her spirit needs to run,
a prodigal celestial.
She's a child of the sun.
"Child of the Sun"
Hair, trapped
in a windswept mould
but it longs for a certain wind
a wind with a warm salty kiss.
Eyes slightly tortured
that swallow the world
still
with more life
than a lioness hunting
for her starving cubs.
She belongs to scortched sands
linked by open roads
to give this gold-welder of words
the inspiration she deserves -
one day, J, one day
may your ties come undone.
She's a chaser of our star
and her spirit needs to run,
a prodigal celestial.
She's a child of the sun.
mjs211 said:So, wait. If I were to join this big awesome convoluted fuckbang, who would I be writing for?
Broke it down to keep up.
Kou wrote for Violet
Grace wrote for Kou
Kitty wrote for Grace
Drivel wrote for Kitty
Strider wrote for Drivel
Mag wrote for Strider
Strider wrote for Mag
Jesta wrote for Gigi
Gigi wrote for Autumn
PTM wrote for Kou
Levi wrote for Gigi
PTM wrote for Mr.A
Mr.A wrote for Jesta
Hmm, I think PTM and Levi are left, but Levi bowed out, so the next one is PTM. Everyone else who wrote has been written for, right?
Broke it down to keep up.
Kou wrote for Violet
Grace wrote for Kou
Kitty wrote for Grace
Drivel wrote for Kitty
Strider wrote for Drivel
Mag wrote for Strider
Strider wrote for Mag
Jesta wrote for Gigi
Gigi wrote for Autumn
PTM wrote for Kou
Levi wrote for Gigi
PTM wrote for Mr.A
Mr.A wrote for Jesta
Hmm, I think PTM and Levi are left, but Levi bowed out, so the next one is PTM. Everyone else who wrote has been written for, right?
raorrick said:
Hmm, I think PTM and Levi are left, but Levi bowed out, so the next one is PTM. Everyone else who wrote has been written for, right?
Fantastic, thanks so much for that breakdown. This is an awesome but difficult-to-follow competition type, haha. I call PTM, be back in a bit with my entry.
Hmm, I think PTM and Levi are left, but Levi bowed out, so the next one is PTM. Everyone else who wrote has been written for, right?
Fantastic, thanks so much for that breakdown. This is an awesome but difficult-to-follow competition type, haha. I call PTM, be back in a bit with my entry.
