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Your very own sexual fantasy

SupHomeboi
Thought Provoker
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Better Than

Hey there stranger let me suck your dick
I'll suck it real good if I'm your number one pick
Let's talk real quick let's discuss the price
You packing ten inches damn sounds real nice
Yum delicious sounds so nutritious
I suck dick better than any of them bitches

For a few extra dollars you can eat my butt
Well let me get started by licking your nuts
A little bit salty but I like some flavor
Your dick is so hard and ready to be savored
My profusely wet lips have made the connection
To your big black mandingo erection
The bittersweet taste of your precum excites me
This whole escapade is so hot & spicy
Up and down & in and out
Keep pumping your big black dick in my mouth
Your dick is saturated and lubed up with saliva
Makes you want to fuck my chocolate ass like a vagina
For a few extra bucks you sure can get the privilege
I take dick better than any of them bitches

You gave me the cash now get you some ass
My hole so snug I'm sure you'll cum fast
In under five minutes that's how long you'll be in it
In a blink of an eye I'm sure you'll be finished
It's pure enjoyment you won't be disappointed
Feel the effects of my chocolate poison
Yeah that's right fuck me nice and slow
Your dick is tensing up pretty soon it's going to blow
You wearing a rubber let loose and explode
Go ahead my dude and deposit your load
Some of the best sex you ever had in your life
I made you feel good way better than your wife
Thanks come again!

humanoid
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United States
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i like girls

Gg78
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humanoid said:i like girls



Lmao ;)

Gg78
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Ok after a glass of wine I decided to join the thrilling moment

One fuck

I want him from the moment I see
him
Not even knowing his name 
He smells so good 
sandalwood and musk a hint of something I can't explain
It's intoxicating 

We dance in this empty hotel room 
No music on 
Just us ripping our clothes off slowly 
Making it last 
His hands sliding up and down my arms 
They Feel like heaven 
The calluses leaving their mark as he trails his path 
Kissing my neck whispering oh fuck in my ear
Leaning his forehead against mine 
As he tries to take it slow 
I don't want it slow 
I want it all
I take him to the bed and I do get what I want 
The pleasure was serial 
Not knowing him made me do everything I ever wanted to do
Every word said 
Every touch was a pure "fuck"
From an incredible one night stand 





RSena
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this a long competition, i better, write on this deeply, sexy, carfully.
this i consider, my area, if you dont think about that, you can read, mines. allready done. let see what i got

RSena
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My fantasy is really your Fantasy

I saw you,
In that bath tub full of foam,
Red lit candle well planned, smelling like mango,
An stranger to your eyes,
Wishing I had eaten sea food,
More energize,
I was just a simple worker,
I saw the door opened so
I kind off know it. You wanted me
To act like it was an accident,
Ok, I followed you.
I was the most gorgeous person that you have ever
Seen, I had this blue pants jeans, I wish they fall off, knowing you
Wanted to see. You were looking all over my body,
With your eyes open like they were cds,
With desire indeed.
Inspired in your position inside
The hut tub, touching you all,
I could not see,
exciting me
Hoping you were smooth,
Gentle and tight,
You imagine yourself as an irresistible sex goddess  whom
could overtake me with my superb sexual
manner, you suspire and can’t hide it.
It is true, this is ok, is just a Fantasy
Wanted to be played,
Your chicks are red, shamed?
But that’s ok, because that’s
My sign, so I can go ahead,
My white tent top, exciting you
I start taking off my buckle,
I’m so posing for you,
Making my dick, going
Fatter, veins noticeable,
But you cant see It yet,
Because my pants still on,
And im waiting for the reaction
Of your face, when they fell off,
Happened what I wanted,
You said uff.

Im all naked, I hope you too,
You told me, don’t tell my husband dude,
I ask her, would you tell my wife? and she said
Don’t be cruel,
Lets not talk, our body, would do good.

I got in the tub, facing her,
She start leaking my toe,
I did it too, I could not see anything
That’s what I wanted, my hands when around her
Feet’s, like they where the owner,
She grabbed my dick, under the hut water,
Both hands, one was not enough,
How im going to get this in my
Vigine she wonder, she got out of the tub,
I went to her and hug her.

My dick so hard, went between
Her ass, dividing those leg, she calm,
She had to open a littler bit her feet, while
I was kissing her neck, my full vein dick,
Start touching the hold before her clitorix,
And she could not contain herself,
She face me, jumped on my waist
Start raping me, take me to bed,
Oh, please I beg,
My husband has not touch me
In months more or less.
Put her on bed,
Facing the ceiling,
I went all over her, until
With my dick I went into her mouth,
She start touching my leg,
Ask me how,
So strong, and tight,
I fucked her mouth,
When I went down on her,
She cried out loud,
She told me slowly,
Break my pussy,
Don’t hit me hard,
So confusing,
My husband might see it,
So as I wished.
A tight pussy, gave me a rash,
The pain made it more pleasant.
Inch by inch, was going in,
While she was opening her mouth
With all this wanting desire,
When the base touch her clitoris,
And my heavy balls he ass,
She said oh, my god,
I told her from now on,
After she came, making the bed
Wed, this is your cock. For
A next fantasy date.

SENA


kriticool
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.:Mother's Day:.


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Jeff's mom? She's quite similar to my mom
Except in my mind…Jeff’s mom is…
Well.. she’s into some serious Fun & Games
Jeff’s mom is into playing with flames; a fire starter
This is what each thrill taught her
What caught her attention was seeing if it maims
Collecting young guy’s names and adding ‘em to small bits of paper
This, a significant part of an ongoing caper
Known to be into a bit of clowning
Her thinking, “There won’t be any frowning”
Streaming A-lines, how they angled just right
All tight!! From head to toe what a sight!
Straight down into them soft & supple lines
Blowin' minds.. Profound, each mound
Always up for a Kid around

Whenever Jeff’s friends came around
She would “talk-up” the fresh lemonade
Then she’d mention “other stuff” to persuade
The incoming…a little bit of Lip Humming
Some dudes got nervous…snickering
The wonderment about what she’d been figuring?
Wondering if she heard us?
As she leaned forward and bent over to serve us
That’s when most of the guys; they’d start to fade
Excuses for departure would soon cascade
Even too hot for Jeff; saying even he had to go & seek shade
While on this particular day she’s offering me a Dutch
Masking surprise, keeping it wise, I say
uhhhhhhhhhh…thank you very much
I’m thinking, maybe, just maybe
This is some kinda conversational crutch
Anyways I’m concluding...this is a very nice touch

After awhile, after that,
Guess it was on to that next caper
Where that next caper came shortly after we inhaled all that vapor
After the mist seemed to disappear
Seemed like the conversation it kind of veered
A toe wiggle, a slight giggle with words no longer constrained
Seemingly all-parties here; we were about to get entertained
I had a thought we might undertake something long range
My images of Jeff’s mom they were venturing into the strange
I’m thinking somehow all of this has been prearranged
But now this here affair...it was now in the realm of Ms. Sugar Bear
I’m glazed and I’m seeing Grey sparkling streaks
Seeing ‘em in that sandy blond hair
Her smile is gleaming and right now her breast is bare
I’m glazed in a haze wherein I just stare
Them twin moons…they sit and they justa blazing
Me? I’m Higher than High and I’m straight gazing
I’m feeling like I’m about to start praising
I’m now thinking Jeff’s Mom is really, really brazen!
This cougar for sure, she’s like Mountain View amazing!

::so now::

We’re inside the condo and standing here toe-to-toe
Here, all along my conscience been saying, “Dude!! Don’t go”
But by now it’s The Time, it’s like.. WHATEVER!!
It’s turning into a Tri-Pod-X video and this one’s called “Endeavor”
Push-up-Bra...Who…Jeff’s mom??? …Never!!
I’m thinking her Surgeon Generals got silicon that’s really quite clever
Jeff’s mom with her gift for gab, no flab and that’s the facts
Got features for creatures fully extended
I’m thinking for her age
Jeff’s Mom...she’s been very well attended,
She’s been more than well blended...and
her physicality…it had me all up-ended
Each aspect coming correct inna special way!
Time hadn’t caused her any dismay
Clearly her play was based on what’s relentless
So to leave no doubt; I went the wicked rout and
I went on with this

I was taking into account the ecstasy
All that delicacy found within this slick sickness
Her wetness, couldn’t at all neglect this
Jeff’s mom, she making me wanna witness
I’m so HIGH thinking, Kid, you want to go on & get this
Where everything & anything
It would certainly get polished
Nothing taboo and all inhibitions were abolished
Ancient places for the groping of this young man
Leaving me truly astonished doing the best that I can

So go ahead you can admonish but I was tripping
And Jeff’s mom? She wasn’t resisting
I was all in there getting quite the mannish
Hungry; but Jeff’s mom; she was quite the famished
I mean I was just a kid;
But Jeff’s mom, she placed that bid
Really, she should’ve known a smidgen bit better
Left me with a crush; I had never had better
In any event; that go round,
I never shared with Jeff or shared it with anybody.
How Jeff’s mom had me turned out like…you know,

::Lottie Dotty::

But I did ask Jeff where he had disappeared “that” day.
All he said was, His mom had called my mom
Her saying, “Let’s do our pups” today
I said, uhhhhhhhhhh really…Yo, kid, you don’t say?
Jeff added, “he hadn’t”
grinning inna kinda funny way.




photo: Michele Randell

kriticool
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Devilish.. we thank you

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Atropabelladonna
Atro
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A masochists prayer:


Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the mistress that I keep
If I should wake before the day
I praise the lord for her lay

Feeling the breeze pushing through the door
Lying their dreaming of her more and more
With her warm body of gold
I pray to do everything I am told

Appearing as the moon light shine
A can only pray my hands she will bind
Feeling the hardnees I know too well
Without her it is my he'll

Cracking her whip and scorning me
Smiling, laughing, a feeling of glee
Collar of spikes a chain she drags
She brings her toys in many bags

Telling me to run without hast
The cracking of the whip: don't look at my face
Put on this gag and this chain
Eagerly waiting for my love of pain

Learning my loin with a rope
Tugging and pulling, even a grope
Dressing me chaps of laytex
Praying to her please; what next

She sits there in my seat
Commanding me to lick her feet
Sorting and spreading her toes
The feeling of excitement that she knows

Kicking me after my task
Why she do that, I dare not ask
You nasties, you ass, you fucking slob
You failed me slave; not a good job

Cracking her whip on my back
Pulling and tugging on my sack
Blood running down my sides
Like the oceans of their tides

Lick and trace my thighs
I know this will bring her sighs
Coming ever so close to her clit
A bad move; once again a got the whip

Laying there blood and sweat
Not letting me taste for what is wet
Bad boy she screams at me
This is mine you leave it be

Watching her as deep as she probes
Leaving me there to watch, I dare not weep
Glossing wet fingers letting out a sigh
T'is my agony, my crucify

Her fingers; pulling them out
Fucking put them in you mouth as she shout
Better do it well, better be clean
Dont piss me off, don't make me mean

Drapping her leg over my side
Now you can lick for what I hide
Lick and lap as it's your last meal
Cracking the whip as I go
T'is your worship, t'is not a show

Shoving my tongue inside her fold
This is bullshit, do as your told
Sadistictly pulling the rope on my dick
You are mine: once again another whip
 
I want you in my swollen clit
Don't tease: please me, not just a bit
Take whats mine: making it yours
Making her cum like the ocean shores

Tence is her body as she drips
Filling my mouth, and on my lips
Wrapping her hands around my head
Good boy now it's time for bed

Dawn is here and I must go
Remember to say the prayer you know
I come only in the darkness here
I love you my bitch sounding so sincere

Releasing me as she goes
Gone with the wind as it blows.

kristinakarate
Kristina Leigh
Lost Thinker
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Joined 9th Apr 2012
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Stung up by the binding against my wrists
I slowly lose feeling in my fingertips
The candle light flickers,
As he ruthlessly stares
I begin to wonder if he’s the only one there.

He walks towards me slowly
With a predators gait
Hips swaying sensuously
As he stands near me and waits.

I know what he wants to hear
I cannot stop the words tumbling from my lips
“Please, sir, I’m yours…
To do with as you see fit.”

His smile becomes a threat,
And I quietly whimper
He picks up the blindfold ans says
“Hush love, you’ll enjoy it.”

All of a sudden I feel hands on my hips
Calloused and rough,
Nothing like Sirs,
Whose are so gentle and soft.

Without any warning, I hear the whir
The flogger is singing
As my body quivers like water
One light smack, against my breast and I'm lost

All I have is sensation
And rough hands on my body
As Sir flogs me witless
I scream out in pleasure.

Harder now, for my noise not permitted
Blood rushes to the surface
Making me sensitive and fevered.

I am slowly released from my world of bliss
As hands carress me
And lower me down
My legs give out from my masters sweet kiss.


Thrown down to the bed
My senses soaring high
Two sets of hands
And mouths set to mission.

Rolled over a hard body,
And propped up in his lap
I can feel his arousal
Throbbing a tattoo unmatched.

I’m lifted from his torso
As master slides home
Rough hands reappear
Molding my body to what he pleases.

Permission to be verbal
My Master grants
As he slowly starts moving
And I begin to pant

Moans of pleasure
Cries of love
Pushed forward so roughly
Taken by two.

My masters Grunts of passion
My own cries of pleasure
I’m told to hold off
Until I they are done.

Flesh against flesh
Sweat tricking from three
A sweet kiss on my lips
As I find It hard to breathe

One whispered command,
My body flies apart
My masters right behind me
With a groan and a slap.

Falling aside in a heap of bliss
Cuddled between both of my masters rocking hips
The blindfold removed as I’m looked upon from above
My masters adore me, and I am  showered with love

Diviy
The Illusionist ofSorrow
Thought Provoker
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Whore at War


Laying on the bed with you,
My hands wonder up and down your body,
They get to know every inch...crevice,
Until your mind is disembody,
And as I kiss your neck,
Moans fleeing from your being,
I silence you with my hand to your throat,
No point in you agreeing,
With the thought in mind,
I drop our clothes... one by one,
My tongue explores your haven,
But I've only just begun,
I take my time with you,
Making sure that you enjoy,
I slide my finger in,
No need for all your toys,
As I flick my tongue,
Back and forth upon your clit,
You push my head down further,
No longer can you resist,
When I finish drinking,
The juices you have provided,
I get on top of you,
And start to slowly slide in,
With a pulsing motion,
I move in and out,
My hand returns to your throat,
Because you begin to shout,
I breathe heavily in your ear,
Unable to think properly,
We're almost at the climax, you say,
"Please don't stop baby..."
So I fasten up the pace,
At last I go much harder,
Until I fill you with my,
Running white stream of 'water',
And as we finish up,
You rub yourself some more,
Moaning you grasp my dick,
Looks like it's the second war...


poet Anonymous

PLEASE FUCK MY BRAINS OUT
my breasts long for my lover's touch - licking, touching, sucking, squeezing, cupping
i sometimes reassure them myself - but they say they want a man's touch - a man like yourself
my skin wants to be felt all over, i have so much skin neglected, the cells long for your touch
my pussy wants to be played with, fun with pubic hair, then slip your fingers down
my vagina eagerly waiting, for your fingers, not mine, my touch is insufficient
maybe it is testosterone, who knows, they lover finger fucking, more fingers the better
my mouth longs to pleasure you for it knows that it will be repaid in kind
i will suck you and lick you until you are out of your mind
and seize me in a frenzy , insert your manhood with one thrust and spread me so wide
that i feel you are enormous, fuck me so hard and high, i start to cum and cry
don't slow down, fuck my brains out please, i want it so bad, give it too me please
we both cum at once, sweaty and dazed, don't ask me what my name is
good fucking makes me half crazed

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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"The Train"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

The line is wrapped around the building
Standing in line the ladies are more than just chilling
Waiting for their turn as the line moves along
Each is dressed only in 8 inch open toed heels & an edible blue thong
The faces are famous & the frames are so sexy to the sight
There are masturbations, bumping clits, sucking tits, & 69 other delights
You see Meagan Good all over Meagan Fox
With Nia Long eating Halle's berry sending your sexy frame into shocks
And Mila Cuniz is sucking Lady Gaga's tiny tits
And with 3 fingers in, Zoe Saldana is giving herself so many fits
Sally Richardson is tongue kissing Lisa Raye
And Kelly Roland's tongue keeps Jennifer Love Hewitt on a moist display
So many sexy ass ladies all waiting to enter the room
Where I will stroke them in every position they can assume
Two at a time, that's just the way I like it
And I don't do married women, but this one time I wouldn't fight it
Because this is the fantasy that I am trapped in
Where so many sexy ladies run a train on me starting with Nikki Manaj riding me backwards while Alicia Keys rides my chin.....;)

Firebyrd
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 200

Mene Ja Toi

So we meet finaly
Just you me and he
In a secluded hotel
every so discretely
No small talk needed
We all know what we're here for
SO you both strip naked
As I come out the bathroom door
So eagerly ....as you invite me
to come over to the bed
SO I do obligingly...as I start
to give Him some head...
Then she comes up behind me...
and whispers in my ear...
How my ass looks so inviting
as she sticks a finger in my rear
Now he is so turned on...
He's about to explode...
So I slow it down... so
he can save his load...
So Im thinking that its time
To straddle his face..
but she says " No Honey, let me take his place"
So under me she goes...
as she spreads my sweet lower lips apart
SHe had a great technique...
I could tell by the way my back arched...
She sucked ravenously...on my swollen clit
Then he came up behind me and my back
he began to lick...he said he wondered
How I felt about anal penetration
I said bring it on baby...
and he did to my elation
He started out slow and sweet
then went deeper than deep
I knew I would cum soon
As She made my juices seep
She branded me with her tongue
and now this pleasure I could no longer hold
As he was cumming too...together we would explode
Then I focused my attention....upon her lovely frame
I slid down her body until I reached her flowered mane
I licked and sucked her clit...juicy and divine
Until she bucked and screamed and almost lost her mind
Then upon the bed...we all layed breathless and bent
and all I cant tell you is,that was one afternoon
well spent!

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