Inside Their minds..

That was tough to write =/

warning do not follow the following link if you have a ligh heart, prone to nightmares or squimish around blood
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/51550-my-dark-side/

raorrick said:That was tough to write =/

I believe you with all my heart that this was tough to write .. Outstanding rachel.. im so impressed with your ability to go way out of your comfort zone and totally get into the character holding no punches yet making it easy to read and love.. the format and gramar that is.. amazing.. jeffrey dohmer?.. thats who came to mind.. "Bows"

The Mud Lust Calamity.

Dig.

We stood on the precipice of fate.
I watched the tears intermingle with the sweat,
your flesh colliding with the midnight air. 

I was in love with your golden hair,
and I made a mental note to cut it free and place it 
under my pillow, forever having you sleep with me. 

Dig. You bitch. 

You shivered with the fear of Hell,
and I watched you look at this empty shell
of mud that lay stagnant beyond the ground

Your whimpering sounds - sweet music to my soul. 
I moved closer to my princess,
your panicked feet clawing away from the hole. 

Dig. You fucking whore. 

And there were screams, I silenced with a palm,
and behind your back, I tied your twisted arms,
watching your fists clasp in desperate prayer. 

And the blonde threads shone like angel hair,
and with your final gasp of air,
I snapped your neck in twists with my violent fists. 

Dig. No more!

I knifed the hair as promised,
And sealed the warm lips with a kiss
before I tossed you into the dirt ridden abyss. 

And I smiled with a shovel in hand,
memorising your mottled face,
immortalised in this very place just for me.

Dig.
Laugh.
Dig. 

Foul Play.

"One day, men will look back and say I gave birth to the Twentieth century." - Jack The Ripper, 1888         
         
         
As i open my eyes,          
Smoke rises from my lungs          
through the winter frost.          
         
I watch mere mortal flesh cross          
this dank and lifeless path.          
         
Tick          
Tock          
Tick          
tock.          
         
Dwindling, fragile creatures.          
Urges. The creation of sin.          
Burning bright in my crippled mind.          
The tight corsetry of the feminine species,          
milky skin bursting at the seams.          
Whores of the senses. Walking anatomy.        
         
Oh i would pay to set you free,          
and who would suspect a man like me?          
The refined. The blended. The educated.          
The white gloved mark of the pure.          
           
I rip the serrated blade          
through cloth. Through skin.          
Intestines saturated with degradation.          
Severing through your glory holes,          
giving back to the world          
what you took from me.          
         
My pride. My human entity.          
Oh you will not hurt me any more.          
I line my pockets with your blood soaked skin.          
So you will keep your purpose forever useful.        
Patience. Stitched in to this abyss.         
         
God created the world in seven days,          
and on the eighth, he created me.          
To save you all. Lord have mercy,    
The Messiah has come!          
Redemption is at hand,          
and we will dance and die my child.          
         
In the cerebral alleyways of my mind.

One Day at Midnight.

I spotted you first at quarter to ten.
You seemed so familiar with those type of men,
So i followed you, with transfixed eyes,
staring down between your thighs.
 
I had to have you there and then.
I could not risk never seeing you again,
So i made a plan exclusivily,
eternity for you and me...
 
I watched your life for considerable time.
Watched you stand on that empty train line,
watched you smoke as you waited for trade,
watched you count the money you'd made.
 
I decided, on that December's night,
that tonight would deffinitly be the night
that i could finally speak to you,
you could join the other two,
who sat in silence behind my bedroom door.
They looked so beautiful spread upon the floor.
 
So i made that fatal glance at you.
Of course you smiled and looked at me too.
Just pleased to find some clientele.
I was pleased that you were mine as well.
 
We found a place to commit the crime,
you looked nervously to check the time
as i leaned to whisper in your ear
'this will be the last sound you ever hear'
 
I locked the doors. You started to panic,
your eyes looked so glorious when they went manic.
That beauty in screaming you performed so well.
I had to get inside your shell.
 
I had to calm this nervous wreck,
so took the seat belt from around your neck
and twisted it tightly around your skin.
A neck easily broken, your frame so thin.
 
I had to feel you for myself
and fucked you with all my heart, my stealth,
to make sure you were truely mine,
mine alone for all of time.
 
I positioned you were you still sat,
and calmly drove back through blocks of flats,
until i came back to my bedroom door,
and placed you with my lovers upon the floor.
 
I kissed the lips of all in turn,
amazing dead breasts are still so firm
if even not a little cold.
Look at you all. Timeless. You'll never grow old.
 
So i pick you up and we dance in style,
both naked, as i make your lips force a smile,
and when i'm done we all lie together,
I wish we all could stay here forever.
 
Alas, i have to throw you away.
The time has come, we can no longer play.
I stroke your faces, and wish i might,
see these pretties in my mind all night.
 
So i crucify you all in the woods and the park.
We're all together, my girls. Till death do us part.




(http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ipswich_serial_murders#section_5)

Devilish said:[quote-84419-raorrick]That was tough to write =/

I believe you with all my heart that this was tough to write .. Outstanding rachel.. im so impressed with your ability to go way out of your comfort zone and totally get into the character holding no punches yet making it easy to read and love.. the format and gramar that is.. amazing.. jeffrey dohmer?.. thats who came to mind.. "Bows"[/quote]

Thank you for that Devilish. I really appreciate it. I didn't really have a certain serial killer in mind when I wrote this. I guess it was just 'in general' to the things they do.

CONFESSIONS OF A MUDERESS
I stared at him with such hate
I wanted tocause him such pain
But not now
I reminded myself
You still have so much time, your day will come

Right now, I would practice on smaller victims

I was like a wild animal
one drop of blood and I couldn't stop
Eventually squirrels and rabbits became less exciting

I moved on to Large dogs and small children
Johnny was my first human victim
I spotted him outside looking forhis dog, which I had killed the night before
I walked over to him took a glance around and spoke to him
"what are you doing?" I asked
"oh- Miss, you scared Me! I'm looking for my dog, he's gone missin' Ma'am."
"why don't you come over to my house, and we'll make some posters to put up." I smile at him
He follows me to my home
The moment the door is shut, I snatch himup and drag him to my work room
His screams could not be heard over the sound of my radio
Everyone believed he got lost looking for his dog
only I knew the truth
Of course no one would suspect me in a murder
I was the nicest lady in town

His mom came to my house one day saying she didn't think he got lost, maybe he was kidnapped she never pointed the finger, but I knew she suspected me

I bought some chocolates and had them delivered to her after I poisoned them
Now I was ready to kill him
I found the little piece of paper with the adress on it and drove to the old worn house
He looked kind of suprised to see me
Who are you?
Daddy, I'm your daughter

He seemed unaffected by my words
Heartless man
He was stupid to let me in
One bullet was all it took

And Daddy was dead tools



 

"tsuikyuu" (追求)

wiggle from pain carved in my wrist
feel the anger flown of the power of my fist,
shout to the sky for all let betsuni bring you down.
telling little child to dance on the  hills.
paleness of skin from swallowing pills.
come up my bright sun lite up my fine day.
hear the Christan song and dance to what he say.
stars shall drown in the darkness of the land.
beery my feet in the warm beach sand.
calm white sea, from the sakura tree,
let the petals fall down to the soft edge grass.
Swift from the heavens  swinging from the cloud,
let me urn my way in,
known shall he  forgive us from all are dreadful sin
“Were I to take the wings of the dawn,
that I might reside in the most remote sea,”
said David, “there, also, your own hand would lead me and your right hand would lay hold of me.”
(Psalm 139:9, 10)
we all shall pass, grow from this beast,
we shall not parish out to become his feast .
nodal our hero that we each prays the other..
but we all do no we come from his mother.
mother of god whom i speak today
we rejoice in hands each and every day.
lullaby i sing to put thy young to rest.
which shall grow old a day and be put to his sprouting test.
Genesis 2:1-25
Thus the heavens and the earth and all their army came to their completion.
increase in all humanity growth or accretion.

Kumiko Yamamoto
note :title means-search or pursuit

LOST world
this is the story of an unknown girl
keeping her lost in an forgotten world
skys always gray and sun never shins
sometimes iv forgotten what is mine

Shinu sumori desu
Shinu sumori desu

tasukete!
tasukete!

this is a story that can never be told
hearing her scream and watch it unfold

never was lost time cant tell
of this forgotten world lost in hell...

             -Kumiko Yamamoto

Wow Thank you all so much.. since i currently suck i havent been able to do one of my own.. so i appreciate reading these..

Devilish said:Oh thank you sweety.. i am going to stalk aileen tonight and see what I can come up with. honestly i've never dont it myself either so my first time as well..

I wonder if anyone can do albert fish?.. that would be the ultimate.



Hey Dev I will bite on Albert Fish......see what filth i can come up with

BlackVelvetRose said:[quote-83382-Devilish]Oh thank you sweety.. i am going to stalk aileen tonight and see what I can come up with. honestly i've never dont it myself either so my first time as well..

I wonder if anyone can do albert fish?.. that would be the ultimate.



Hey Dev I will bite on Albert Fish......see what filth i can come up with[/quote]
Girl I will suck on your stick if you do... hurry .lol. ill be waiting like a dog in heat.

gahhhhh.....you gotta give me a lil time.....slow and easy love slow and easy