Poetry competition CLOSED 11th April 2012 7:32am
WINNER
BleedingInferno219 (Kristyn Ashley.)
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RUNNERS-UP: diddi and Cinny

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CRISIS & YOU

drone
Tyrant of Words
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Though the maze
of uncertainty's
though the pain
and the fear
though the valley
of broken promises
and the friendships they wear
on the banks
of wishful thinking
with my bridges burning clear
i slowly start to wonder
why am I here

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
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tats an absorbing piece!
Thank You for the entry, drone.

anandosen
Fire of Insight
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Forum Posts: 316

Crisis


The end of any navigation is crisis.

At the beginning
When everything is complicated
There exists the battle for sustenance.
Crystal clear things loses continuity
And this is when one turns poetic.

The lunatics and the fanatics are like birds
At higher altitudes they merge the lands and seas,
Like two different cultures craving for existence.

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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striking! i got that how we turned poetic..
Thank you Anando Sen, fellow country poet!

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1337

No!I dont want to leave this page..am taken by heaviness & silence, melting to tears & flowing into your worlds -these varying shades of crisis made me feel the heat-those terrorizing & gripping ones (welldone Pierre), those sheer desperate souls ( Cinny & Bleeding Inferno), those emotional trauma of separation & death (Paul& Bleeding Inferno), those stark pragmatic Mid-life Crisis(somelikeithot) !! am MOVED to the core people!!!
and some short n cute writes so wonderfully woven-- are though-provoking( Anando, hatsoff!) & absorbing(drone, welldone!).

All are WINNERS to me, but the one that needs to be awarded here is "Änother Morning Without You"--So deeply conveying the loss in very less words!
Bring Her Home-Paul is just another brilliant crisis in a fluent flow as natural to Paul (the first runner-up),
Cinny's write is well-sculpted one in couplets form.(second runner-up).

See you all sooner with yet another absorbing comp. BYE & THNX A LOT ALL:)

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