The Stars
TriTaoWisp
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Poetry Contest Description
Be it Metaphor, the sky's, into space, on earth, of myth or the twinkle in a lovers eye, form this how you chose or in this case perhaps formless but be it of the stars.
Of the stars but not celebrities or little green men please.
Write under 400 words, can be one word if you wish.
My only other rule is please enjoy yourself, unless you must write out your pain this is also accepted, Hope it helps.
Write under 400 words, can be one word if you wish.
My only other rule is please enjoy yourself, unless you must write out your pain this is also accepted, Hope it helps.
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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I Can See Neptune (SP Summerscales)
Walking along
I can see Neptune ,
shining really strong
above the dusted moon ,
new words of a song
they come rushing through ,
Mars is blushing too
my steps they rush , one , two
on this lush balloon ,
I so miniscule
take a lasting breath ,
of the large see through
atomic molecules ,
what is my effect
and what do I turn to
some energy renewed ,
selectional , directional
complexity , terrestrial
we burn to be from the big sol
then you are me
we're spent then gone
none entity's in spherical
and then there's bi-dimensional
as my mind try's to take it all
my eyes do see
why I am small .
Walking along
I can see Neptune ,
shining really strong
above the dusted moon ,
new words of a song
they come rushing through ,
Mars is blushing too
my steps they rush , one , two
on this lush balloon ,
I so miniscule
take a lasting breath ,
of the large see through
atomic molecules ,
what is my effect
and what do I turn to
some energy renewed ,
selectional , directional
complexity , terrestrial
we burn to be from the big sol
then you are me
we're spent then gone
none entity's in spherical
and then there's bi-dimensional
as my mind try's to take it all
my eyes do see
why I am small .
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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Joined 18th Dec 2009
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StephenPaul Summerscales
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Into Blind (SP Summerscales)
Hello ,
infinity night
your dead out there
although ,
I get your light .
It's lonely here
below the stratosphere
were nowhere near
but to me your clear
am I in your sights .
You became my friend ,
your dark
you listen
dogs bark
street lights glisten ,
no end
to your mission
you bend
comprehension
can I lend
some vision
to tend
my dimension
the other end
of the spectrum
you aprehend
all to be done .
So once again
hello my friend
you've always been there
you breathe
without air
I see you
when there's nothing there ,
no feet
but you get everywhere .
So when we meet
I hope that you still care .
Hello ,
infinity night
your dead out there
although ,
I get your light .
It's lonely here
below the stratosphere
were nowhere near
but to me your clear
am I in your sights .
You became my friend ,
your dark
you listen
dogs bark
street lights glisten ,
no end
to your mission
you bend
comprehension
can I lend
some vision
to tend
my dimension
the other end
of the spectrum
you aprehend
all to be done .
So once again
hello my friend
you've always been there
you breathe
without air
I see you
when there's nothing there ,
no feet
but you get everywhere .
So when we meet
I hope that you still care .
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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Joined 18th Dec 2009
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Inner Space (SP Summerscales)
The continual baffling
of endless time
the spent is amassing
anti matter from light
the present a passing
in a gone time
we live a yesterday
as tomorrow will die .
We live in a measurement
by our sun
which is irrelavent
past this zone
thoughts produce none particle space
in this nothing we deduce
a something of less weight
we only believe what we can understand
through this we deceive
the movement of man
nothing and something
together they face
the nothing is more
as it is inner space .
The continual baffling
of endless time
the spent is amassing
anti matter from light
the present a passing
in a gone time
we live a yesterday
as tomorrow will die .
We live in a measurement
by our sun
which is irrelavent
past this zone
thoughts produce none particle space
in this nothing we deduce
a something of less weight
we only believe what we can understand
through this we deceive
the movement of man
nothing and something
together they face
the nothing is more
as it is inner space .
TriTaoWisp
Joined 23rd Jan 2012
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Thank you Paul, your poems are absolutely Brilliant, great start for the competition.
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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Thanks , great idea you have for this competition :)
Lee
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Joined 1st Jan 2012
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Story of the Stars
I was caught on a sleepless night,
With nightmares on the fold,
And so went out to the gardens,
Where the stars, a story told.
They took pity on my fright,
And so began to tell their story,
A fanciful artwork,
Of pain and fear and glory.
“Why would I wish to hear of pain,
When my horrors are still new?”
They simply laughed and said:
“Worry naught, there is love here too.”
Their voices blurred together,
Upon this starlit lullaby,
They told of all their seeing,
From way up in the sky.
They whispered secret knowings,
Of truth and lies yet found,
And chanted softly,
Of how the world spun round and round.
They spoke of war and famine,
They sang of joy and mirth
They shared their mourning of all the deaths,
And rejoiced with all the births.
I settled down beneath the sky,
And let the stars sing me to sleep,
I knew beneath their watchful gaze,
My dreams would properly keep.
And when I woke, I was full of knowledge,
The language of the stars,
That granted me an open window,
That to most held only bars.
And so every night I sank to sleep,
Listening to them sing,
Oh, how I wished I could thank them,
For the peace they seemed to bring.

Dark Star
Orchestral
Amazing you-
An Oracle.
Another obstacle-
I would fall
for you-
be Possible
Probable-
In Estrellas
I am audible
Softly then
a quiet tone
Stars are falling
and no-one knows.
Orchestral
Amazing you-
An Oracle.
Another obstacle-
I would fall
for you-
be Possible
Probable-
In Estrellas
I am audible
Softly then
a quiet tone
Stars are falling
and no-one knows.
Page_Writer
Mad Girl
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Joined 25th Nov 2011
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Mad Girl
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Star-Crossed
I was going to be with another.
Fall behind her in every step to be taken.
I wasn't looking for love.
For I thought that it was found.
I only gazed out my bedroom window,
not dreaming of something better.
But knowing that better things were yet to come.
I didn't think that you could fall in love when you were already in love.
At least until I met him.
It was a friendship.
Harmless in the beginning, I'm assuming that you all know the tale.
But now at least I assume that you would.
How I tried, tried, tried and tried.
But all that happen in the love I was apart of was that I died.
All because the ones I was with all she knew how to do was lie.
But this isn't about that.
This is about after that.
How I ran from my castle that was slowly crumbling beneath my feet.
How I wanted to feel the dagger's cold blade puncture my heart.
Allow Juliet's heart to be ripped out by Paris' grip.
Tears blurred my vision.
As his arms wrapped around me, pulling me close.
I wanted to die.
I wanted to die.
He tilts my chin up, having me look at him.
"Don't give up... I need you. You need to live because I need you."
I look up at him.
Into his beautiful eyes.
And just like that...
Planets aligned.
Souls entertwined.
Stars crossed.
And he stole my heart.
I was a star crossed lover.
Going on a destined path until he stepped in the shadow of fate.
And he become my destiny.
His life crossed into mine.
And ever since, my life has never been or will be the same.
And I wouldn't want it any other way.
I was going to be with another.
Fall behind her in every step to be taken.
I wasn't looking for love.
For I thought that it was found.
I only gazed out my bedroom window,
not dreaming of something better.
But knowing that better things were yet to come.
I didn't think that you could fall in love when you were already in love.
At least until I met him.
It was a friendship.
Harmless in the beginning, I'm assuming that you all know the tale.
But now at least I assume that you would.
How I tried, tried, tried and tried.
But all that happen in the love I was apart of was that I died.
All because the ones I was with all she knew how to do was lie.
But this isn't about that.
This is about after that.
How I ran from my castle that was slowly crumbling beneath my feet.
How I wanted to feel the dagger's cold blade puncture my heart.
Allow Juliet's heart to be ripped out by Paris' grip.
Tears blurred my vision.
As his arms wrapped around me, pulling me close.
I wanted to die.
I wanted to die.
He tilts my chin up, having me look at him.
"Don't give up... I need you. You need to live because I need you."
I look up at him.
Into his beautiful eyes.
And just like that...
Planets aligned.
Souls entertwined.
Stars crossed.
And he stole my heart.
I was a star crossed lover.
Going on a destined path until he stepped in the shadow of fate.
And he become my destiny.
His life crossed into mine.
And ever since, my life has never been or will be the same.
And I wouldn't want it any other way.

This is an older poem of mine. I've entered it in another contest but a winner was never picked... I'll put it here for a second shot
SORROW FOR THE STARS
As a little child
I loved to stare up at the moon
Imagining what it would be like
To sit and watch the blue planet
Rise on the horizon
I wished for nothing more at that time
Then to be up in the sky
Ride upon a shooting star
That would take me to a magical land
Created just for me
I used to tell you how I loved that moon
How the silver light would guide me
As I walked down the beaten dirt road
On those teary nights
When nowhere was the only place to go
Orion was my hero
He helped me through the nights
Shielded me with his six stars
I felt safer when he was in my skylight
I knew pain would only be distant
Now, I just wish they would go away
My love for them is not lost
It will always be there
But some love causes great sorrow
A stab deeper than words
Now every time I look to the heavens
And spot Orion defending in the skies
Or see the luminescent moon
I can't help but cry
Finding it hard to breath
A sharp pain goes through my chest
As if a screw is being twisted in
Deeper and deeper it imbeds itself
Until it is so far in
That it cannot be removed
I don't want the light of the moon
To be my guide any longer
I wish night would drape over me
Like black silk over
A gypsy's shew stone
The comfort I once found
In the expansive twilight
Has been replaced by a feeling
That is worse than being held under water
Or being burned by fire
Now, I just wish they would go away
Because they remind me of you
Of how you will never be next to me
To hold my hand in yours
And admire their beauty
Together.

SORROW FOR THE STARS
As a little child
I loved to stare up at the moon
Imagining what it would be like
To sit and watch the blue planet
Rise on the horizon
I wished for nothing more at that time
Then to be up in the sky
Ride upon a shooting star
That would take me to a magical land
Created just for me
I used to tell you how I loved that moon
How the silver light would guide me
As I walked down the beaten dirt road
On those teary nights
When nowhere was the only place to go
Orion was my hero
He helped me through the nights
Shielded me with his six stars
I felt safer when he was in my skylight
I knew pain would only be distant
Now, I just wish they would go away
My love for them is not lost
It will always be there
But some love causes great sorrow
A stab deeper than words
Now every time I look to the heavens
And spot Orion defending in the skies
Or see the luminescent moon
I can't help but cry
Finding it hard to breath
A sharp pain goes through my chest
As if a screw is being twisted in
Deeper and deeper it imbeds itself
Until it is so far in
That it cannot be removed
I don't want the light of the moon
To be my guide any longer
I wish night would drape over me
Like black silk over
A gypsy's shew stone
The comfort I once found
In the expansive twilight
Has been replaced by a feeling
That is worse than being held under water
Or being burned by fire
Now, I just wish they would go away
Because they remind me of you
Of how you will never be next to me
To hold my hand in yours
And admire their beauty
Together.
PierreTheMad
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Joined 7th Dec 2009
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One In A Million
A fool you're burning for feeling a yearning
to be a shooting star,
to race across the sky only to die,
to strike something bigger than yourself and cease.
Unfolding the map 'til you get lost in the crease.
A map to show you which star is yours in that sparkling night sky.
The selfsame star that feels a yearning to race
all the others to the goal of just being noticed.
But ending up only pushing yourself too hard and too far
and end up burning up in the atmosphere,
when all you have to do is shine.
A fool you're burning for feeling a yearning
to be a shooting star,
to race across the sky only to die,
to strike something bigger than yourself and cease.
Unfolding the map 'til you get lost in the crease.
A map to show you which star is yours in that sparkling night sky.
The selfsame star that feels a yearning to race
all the others to the goal of just being noticed.
But ending up only pushing yourself too hard and too far
and end up burning up in the atmosphere,
when all you have to do is shine.
TriTaoWisp
Joined 23rd Jan 2012
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Lee Invoking, Miki cool n catchy, Paige Sweet and lovely, Autumn embracing and Pierre stylish thank you all of you, for participating.
braggman
Steve Bragg
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Well I wrote it for another contest but the girl who ran the contest forgot to ever come back, so I guess this is where it was supposed to go all along.
Gravity
Attraction is
a provability
the tether
the strange force at a distance
that holds all together
as it falls disparate
and tangent
to the ground
to the moon
to the sun.
Strangely attracted children
hear and infer
the ice cream truck
by its song and its route
because space is curved
by desire.
We sit at the edge
of a tree line
within the faint arc of porch light
watching cold blacknight warped
into warm galactic flows.
Though we each began as separate stars
our paths at last approached and circled
as they have since countless times
and yet they never wed.
I have known you
since you were lightning and I the air you parted,
since we were water and the wind drew us in,
since you were sunlight and I sealed in amber,
you were jasmine and I the fallen dew.
We teased, we courted, we played unhurried.
We seeped among the leaves.
We rose to our adjacent clouds.
We lay in wait in the abyssal hills.
We died and bloomed and crystallized
but were always released anew from the fire.
I cannot watch you pass again this time
cannot release you back to the flow that washed us
finally here
cannot stay silent, cannot stop shaking, cannot find words or thoughts for anyone but you and yet you make it clear
I cannot have you.
You have no memory of this passionate force
that binds me
close but never reaching.
My petitions carry no such weight
in your center
trapped here by the burden
of my own gravity.
Though worlds may pass
and new be built ten thousand times
before we get this chance again
each alive with voice and passion,
still you and I will rise from here
and as I’ve always known
you’ll return to that perpetual path
out
away from my side.
Gravity
Attraction is
a provability
the tether
the strange force at a distance
that holds all together
as it falls disparate
and tangent
to the ground
to the moon
to the sun.
Strangely attracted children
hear and infer
the ice cream truck
by its song and its route
because space is curved
by desire.
We sit at the edge
of a tree line
within the faint arc of porch light
watching cold blacknight warped
into warm galactic flows.
Though we each began as separate stars
our paths at last approached and circled
as they have since countless times
and yet they never wed.
I have known you
since you were lightning and I the air you parted,
since we were water and the wind drew us in,
since you were sunlight and I sealed in amber,
you were jasmine and I the fallen dew.
We teased, we courted, we played unhurried.
We seeped among the leaves.
We rose to our adjacent clouds.
We lay in wait in the abyssal hills.
We died and bloomed and crystallized
but were always released anew from the fire.
I cannot watch you pass again this time
cannot release you back to the flow that washed us
finally here
cannot stay silent, cannot stop shaking, cannot find words or thoughts for anyone but you and yet you make it clear
I cannot have you.
You have no memory of this passionate force
that binds me
close but never reaching.
My petitions carry no such weight
in your center
trapped here by the burden
of my own gravity.
Though worlds may pass
and new be built ten thousand times
before we get this chance again
each alive with voice and passion,
still you and I will rise from here
and as I’ve always known
you’ll return to that perpetual path
out
away from my side.
Grace
IDryad
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The Stars
The stars they shine tonight
twinkling bright
they shine their light
in the shades of twilight.
They twinkle on
over friends and foe
over believers
and animists
They twinkle for all
the good the bad
the earthy and the wild
Stars are fair that way
Under the stars
I do so long
to hold you and kiss
our lips sealing our promises.
Starlight, star bright
let me hold my love tonight
let me feel his embrace tight
under the shining stars of twilight.
The stars they shine tonight
twinkling bright
they shine their light
in the shades of twilight.
They twinkle on
over friends and foe
over believers
and animists
They twinkle for all
the good the bad
the earthy and the wild
Stars are fair that way
Under the stars
I do so long
to hold you and kiss
our lips sealing our promises.
Starlight, star bright
let me hold my love tonight
let me feel his embrace tight
under the shining stars of twilight.

THE ENDLESS SKY
My lover and I
Embracing under the endless sky
Hidden cove, no lights
Sandy shore
Midnight
Constellations we point out
The stars twinkle
As if to say
Lovers, love while you may
For you are but a speck of sand
In GOD and NATURE'S grand plan
When you love
The love between you
Ignites a spark of love on the run
Thus cupid's arrow may be charged
And lovers find each other
Which is so hard
So gentle lover
Make love to me
Under the skies
Near the sea
The love we make
Will reach the stars
The stars in turn
Will touch other pairs
To fall in love
To really care
My lover and I
Embracing under the endless sky
Hidden cove, no lights
Sandy shore
Midnight
Constellations we point out
The stars twinkle
As if to say
Lovers, love while you may
For you are but a speck of sand
In GOD and NATURE'S grand plan
When you love
The love between you
Ignites a spark of love on the run
Thus cupid's arrow may be charged
And lovers find each other
Which is so hard
So gentle lover
Make love to me
Under the skies
Near the sea
The love we make
Will reach the stars
The stars in turn
Will touch other pairs
To fall in love
To really care