Poetry competition CLOSED 27th March 2012 10:53pm
WINNER
raorrick (Rachel O.)
raorrick (Rachel O.)
RUNNERS-UP:
skinnyjean
and MrAlptraum
"Imagery" challenge
LittleChaoChao said:My ankles
Sleen soft skin
A soft gold
Guiding my steps
Through praries
Silk green grass grazing them
Bright colors
Dancing in the wind
Beautiful flowers
Blossoming around your feet
Kissing your skin
As you pass
The view is stunning
Just lush life or beautiful feilds
Greens with patches of bright colors
Exploding with vibrant life
The wind cools your body and soul
Giving you fresh life
Washing off all pains
Freshness
The sun's hugs
Warming you gently
So perfect outside
Your ankles dance
The ground is soft
Life is beautiful
Perfect weather to dance
Ankles are beautiful
The first line is the topic I presume.(I think you should edit and separate it from the body of the poem if it is)
Soft and tender upbeat poetry this! Nice job!
Thank you littlechaochao!
Sleen soft skin
A soft gold
Guiding my steps
Through praries
Silk green grass grazing them
Bright colors
Dancing in the wind
Beautiful flowers
Blossoming around your feet
Kissing your skin
As you pass
The view is stunning
Just lush life or beautiful feilds
Greens with patches of bright colors
Exploding with vibrant life
The wind cools your body and soul
Giving you fresh life
Washing off all pains
Freshness
The sun's hugs
Warming you gently
So perfect outside
Your ankles dance
The ground is soft
Life is beautiful
Perfect weather to dance
Ankles are beautiful
The first line is the topic I presume.(I think you should edit and separate it from the body of the poem if it is)
Soft and tender upbeat poetry this! Nice job!
Thank you littlechaochao!
IMAGO said:eyes grew on the wall
the bedroom mirror reflected no images
my electric heater turned into a snowman
just as the doormat wiped his feet full of toe-jam
the sweat from my blankets punched my sketchpad
whispering shadows left me for dead
Haha! Brilliant imagery. Short yet vivid.
Thank you very much!
the bedroom mirror reflected no images
my electric heater turned into a snowman
just as the doormat wiped his feet full of toe-jam
the sweat from my blankets punched my sketchpad
whispering shadows left me for dead
Haha! Brilliant imagery. Short yet vivid.
Thank you very much!
LOST world
this is the story of an unknown girl
keeping her lost in an forgotten world
skys always gray and sun never shins
sometimes iv forgotten what is mine
Shinu sumori desu
Shinu sumori desu
tasukete!
tasukete!
this is a story that can never be told
hearing her scream and watch it unfold
never was lost time cant tell
of this forgotten world lost in hell...
-Kumiko Yamamoto
this is the story of an unknown girl
keeping her lost in an forgotten world
skys always gray and sun never shins
sometimes iv forgotten what is mine
Shinu sumori desu
Shinu sumori desu
tasukete!
tasukete!
this is a story that can never be told
hearing her scream and watch it unfold
never was lost time cant tell
of this forgotten world lost in hell...
-Kumiko Yamamoto
Anonymous
Don't Let Life Pass You By
As I walk in silence along the sandy shores.
I hold a prayer in my heart.
My tears mix with the soft falling rain.
I ask the Lord to open my eyes and heart.
To show me His will and His way for me.
As I lift my hanging head and my tears dry.
I realize the rain has stopped.
I feel the warmth of the sun deep in my soul.
Hear the laughter of children splashing in the waves.
As the water glides across the sand, it touches my feet as a kiss would touch my cheek.
In a far away distance I see the beautiful tail of a whale diving to the deep.
Children building sand castle's with smiles on their sweet faces.
Young lovers drawing hearts with their names in them.
As I pass a stranger I receive a warm smile and friendly "Hello".
Don't let life pass you by.
Look up, life is everywhere.
So is the Lord,.
He made it all to remind us.
Oct. 26, 2011
As I walk in silence along the sandy shores.
I hold a prayer in my heart.
My tears mix with the soft falling rain.
I ask the Lord to open my eyes and heart.
To show me His will and His way for me.
As I lift my hanging head and my tears dry.
I realize the rain has stopped.
I feel the warmth of the sun deep in my soul.
Hear the laughter of children splashing in the waves.
As the water glides across the sand, it touches my feet as a kiss would touch my cheek.
In a far away distance I see the beautiful tail of a whale diving to the deep.
Children building sand castle's with smiles on their sweet faces.
Young lovers drawing hearts with their names in them.
As I pass a stranger I receive a warm smile and friendly "Hello".
Don't let life pass you by.
Look up, life is everywhere.
So is the Lord,.
He made it all to remind us.
Oct. 26, 2011
::GREEN WOES ::
Delicately caressing my
senses so sharp,
yet green and supple!
Kissed it to laceration
and sucked in
my passionate juices!
Oh dear! All my offer
from this virgin green solitaire,
still a buffer!
Same spree and glee,
you are in the
next door !
Grass Hopper …
Delicately caressing my
senses so sharp,
yet green and supple!
Kissed it to laceration
and sucked in
my passionate juices!
Oh dear! All my offer
from this virgin green solitaire,
still a buffer!
Same spree and glee,
you are in the
next door !
Grass Hopper …
Yo Wanderer! loved tis comp a lot...gr8 entries here n I liked tem all 
Hope ter are no limits in entries here n i would post one more here.
::COMA::
Forgot all near and dear
contacts..
Cannot recall all those lovely
blessing messages..
No chance to regain all
well-framed passwords..
Erased all intimately captured
moments..
Grey matter in a magnified
mind block..
Senses all crashed down
in action..
Heart seems to be Suspended
In Motion..
Loss of SIM card!
Hope ter are no limits in entries here n i would post one more here.
::COMA::
Forgot all near and dear
contacts..
Cannot recall all those lovely
blessing messages..
No chance to regain all
well-framed passwords..
Erased all intimately captured
moments..
Grey matter in a magnified
mind block..
Senses all crashed down
in action..
Heart seems to be Suspended
In Motion..
Loss of SIM card!
Bloodtest time!
Patience,
Silence watch and learn!
Diverse waters disperse,
As you churn at every drone.
Time falling it's way through,
An hour glass of bone.
Can't find a vein,
To steal the stains.
Patience young one, patience!
Patience,
Silence watch and learn!
Diverse waters disperse,
As you churn at every drone.
Time falling it's way through,
An hour glass of bone.
Can't find a vein,
To steal the stains.
Patience young one, patience!
AlexnEmoLand said:LOST world
this is the story of an unknown girl
keeping her lost in an forgotten world
skys always gray and sun never shins
sometimes iv forgotten what is mine
Shinu sumori desu
Shinu sumori desu
tasukete!
tasukete!
this is a story that can never be told
hearing her scream and watch it unfold
never was lost time cant tell
of this forgotten world lost in hell...
-Kumiko Yamamoto
("Intention to die is clear" and "Help now"
In japanese. I think)
That adds a natural touch to it(like reading a scroll). Strong emotions come across. Beautiful piece! Thank you!
this is the story of an unknown girl
keeping her lost in an forgotten world
skys always gray and sun never shins
sometimes iv forgotten what is mine
Shinu sumori desu
Shinu sumori desu
tasukete!
tasukete!
this is a story that can never be told
hearing her scream and watch it unfold
never was lost time cant tell
of this forgotten world lost in hell...
-Kumiko Yamamoto
("Intention to die is clear" and "Help now"
In japanese. I think)
That adds a natural touch to it(like reading a scroll). Strong emotions come across. Beautiful piece! Thank you!
flowergirl said:Don't Let Life Pass You By
As I walk in silence along the sandy shores.
I hold a prayer in my heart.
My tears mix with the soft falling rain.
I ask the Lord to open my eyes and heart.
To show me His will and His way for me.
As I lift my hanging head and my tears dry.
I realize the rain has stopped.
I feel the warmth of the sun deep in my soul.
Hear the laughter of children splashing in the waves.
As the water glides across the sand, it touches my feet as a kiss would touch my cheek.
In a far away distance I see the beautiful tail of a whale diving to the deep.
Children building sand castle's with smiles on their sweet faces.
Young lovers drawing hearts with their names in them.
As I pass a stranger I receive a warm smile and friendly "Hello".
Don't let life pass you by.
Look up, life is everywhere.
So is the Lord,.
He made it all to remind us.
Oct. 26, 2011
Nice piece! It is unto a story and unto an upbeat poem. Enjoyed it! Beautiful poem! Thank you flowergirl!
As I walk in silence along the sandy shores.
I hold a prayer in my heart.
My tears mix with the soft falling rain.
I ask the Lord to open my eyes and heart.
To show me His will and His way for me.
As I lift my hanging head and my tears dry.
I realize the rain has stopped.
I feel the warmth of the sun deep in my soul.
Hear the laughter of children splashing in the waves.
As the water glides across the sand, it touches my feet as a kiss would touch my cheek.
In a far away distance I see the beautiful tail of a whale diving to the deep.
Children building sand castle's with smiles on their sweet faces.
Young lovers drawing hearts with their names in them.
As I pass a stranger I receive a warm smile and friendly "Hello".
Don't let life pass you by.
Look up, life is everywhere.
So is the Lord,.
He made it all to remind us.
Oct. 26, 2011
Nice piece! It is unto a story and unto an upbeat poem. Enjoyed it! Beautiful poem! Thank you flowergirl!
summultima said:Yo Wanderer! loved tis comp a lot...gr8 entries here n I liked tem all
Hope ter are no limits in entries here n i would post one more here.
::COMA::
Forgot all near and dear
contacts..
Cannot recall all those lovely
blessing messages..
No chance to regain all
well-framed passwords..
Erased all intimately captured
moments..
Grey matter in a magnified
mind block..
Senses all crashed down
in action..
Heart seems to be Suspended
In Motion..
Loss of SIM card!
Haha! Thanx you. I think so too!(It would have helped if you liked one more...
Yeah, got more?? I read in earnest. Do post them.(Closing date is tomorrow)
All three entries are great! But I enjoyed this one most. Brilliant pieces LOL!. Thank you Summultima!
Hope ter are no limits in entries here n i would post one more here.
::COMA::
Forgot all near and dear
contacts..
Cannot recall all those lovely
blessing messages..
No chance to regain all
well-framed passwords..
Erased all intimately captured
moments..
Grey matter in a magnified
mind block..
Senses all crashed down
in action..
Heart seems to be Suspended
In Motion..
Loss of SIM card!
Haha! Thanx you. I think so too!(It would have helped if you liked one more...
Yeah, got more?? I read in earnest. Do post them.(Closing date is tomorrow)
All three entries are great! But I enjoyed this one most. Brilliant pieces LOL!. Thank you Summultima!
skinnyjean said:Bloodtest time!
Patience,
Silence watch and learn!
Diverse waters disperse,
As you churn at every drone.
Time falling it's way through,
An hour glass of bone.
Can't find a vein,
To steal the stains.
Patience young one, patience!
"Patience"
I really do adore the word!
Brilliant piece skinnyjean! Beautiful "Imagery"!
Thank you very much!
Patience,
Silence watch and learn!
Diverse waters disperse,
As you churn at every drone.
Time falling it's way through,
An hour glass of bone.
Can't find a vein,
To steal the stains.
Patience young one, patience!
"Patience"
I really do adore the word!
Brilliant piece skinnyjean! Beautiful "Imagery"!
Thank you very much!
Anonymous
wanderer said:[quote-71247-flowergirl]Don't Let Life Pass You By
As I walk in silence along the sandy shores.
I hold a prayer in my heart.
My tears mix with the soft falling rain.
I ask the Lord to open my eyes and heart.
To show me His will and His way for me.
As I lift my hanging head and my tears dry.
I realize the rain has stopped.
I feel the warmth of the sun deep in my soul.
Hear the laughter of children splashing in the waves.
As the water glides across the sand, it touches my feet as a kiss would touch my cheek.
In a far away distance I see the beautiful tail of a whale diving to the deep.
Children building sand castle's with smiles on their sweet faces.
Young lovers drawing hearts with their names in them.
As I pass a stranger I receive a warm smile and friendly "Hello".
Don't let life pass you by.
Look up, life is everywhere.
So is the Lord,.
He made it all to remind us.
Oct. 26, 2011
Nice piece! It is unto a story and unto an upbeat poem. Enjoyed it! Beautiful poem! Thank you flowergirl![/quote]
As I walk in silence along the sandy shores.
I hold a prayer in my heart.
My tears mix with the soft falling rain.
I ask the Lord to open my eyes and heart.
To show me His will and His way for me.
As I lift my hanging head and my tears dry.
I realize the rain has stopped.
I feel the warmth of the sun deep in my soul.
Hear the laughter of children splashing in the waves.
As the water glides across the sand, it touches my feet as a kiss would touch my cheek.
In a far away distance I see the beautiful tail of a whale diving to the deep.
Children building sand castle's with smiles on their sweet faces.
Young lovers drawing hearts with their names in them.
As I pass a stranger I receive a warm smile and friendly "Hello".
Don't let life pass you by.
Look up, life is everywhere.
So is the Lord,.
He made it all to remind us.
Oct. 26, 2011
Nice piece! It is unto a story and unto an upbeat poem. Enjoyed it! Beautiful poem! Thank you flowergirl!
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