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No sympathy for the living, and the dead
Atropabelladonna
Atro
Forum Posts: 187
Atro
Fire of Insight
8
Joined 30th Oct 2011 Forum Posts: 187
Poetry Contest Description
Write anything your want about the bullshit sympathy for self pity people, and never ending closure of the dead
No reposts
Sympathy must be for the weak
Dead without grieving
Let it all hang out and leaving nothing untouched.
Good luck
Sympathy must be for the weak
Dead without grieving
Let it all hang out and leaving nothing untouched.
Good luck
braggman
Steve Bragg
Forum Posts: 1850
Steve Bragg
Dangerous Mind
14
Joined 27th Dec 2011Forum Posts: 1850
Sorry, just editing out stuff that was not so good. It could only have won due to a lack of participation. Thank you Atropabelladonna for your vote of confidence. I do appreciate it.
UnleashedHeathen
Forum Posts: 578
Fire of Insight
3
Joined 6th Dec 2011Forum Posts: 578
Pity Fuck
When I die, don't feel sorry for me
Don't give me your unsettling pitty
I didn't want it when I was I was alive, which by the way I never got
So, don't put it off on me now when you want my fucking money, or any other shit deal
When I'm old, and nobody gives a damn about me and my drying shit-pile life, I'm going to be an asshole to all the people that take care of me;
Just because I can
As they watch me whither away, and my libs get as saggy as my dick, I'm going to be the one who has the last laugh
And when I finally die off, like everybody secretly wants me to, but won't admit; I won't have all kinds of motherfuckers looking at me in my final peace
And yet, The cunts still decide to bring cheap flowers as they put me into the ground, what a fucking joke
The morgues painting me up to be some kind of beautiful image in my now non-existing life
Only so people can stare at me one last time, and take another disgusting look at my all but wanted death
When I die, don't feel sorry for me
Don't give me your unsettling pitty
I didn't want it when I was I was alive, which by the way I never got
So, don't put it off on me now when you want my fucking money, or any other shit deal
When I'm old, and nobody gives a damn about me and my drying shit-pile life, I'm going to be an asshole to all the people that take care of me;
Just because I can
As they watch me whither away, and my libs get as saggy as my dick, I'm going to be the one who has the last laugh
And when I finally die off, like everybody secretly wants me to, but won't admit; I won't have all kinds of motherfuckers looking at me in my final peace
And yet, The cunts still decide to bring cheap flowers as they put me into the ground, what a fucking joke
The morgues painting me up to be some kind of beautiful image in my now non-existing life
Only so people can stare at me one last time, and take another disgusting look at my all but wanted death
Anonymous
THE DRAMA QUEEN
You pathetic envious person
Who thinks everybody had it easier than you
When will you stop thinking of yourself?
When will you stop complaining?
You envied people who were married
That was when you were single!
You envied other women's husbands
You thought you could have done better
You nag your husband and your children
In their light you want to shine
You have been riding everyone's tailcoats
You have lied and cheated your way up
You got to where you are by luck
So fortune has been good to you
Yet you do not see
Most of the world
Have only ten percent
Of what they need!
You pathetic envious person
Who thinks everybody had it easier than you
When will you stop thinking of yourself?
When will you stop complaining?
You envied people who were married
That was when you were single!
You envied other women's husbands
You thought you could have done better
You nag your husband and your children
In their light you want to shine
You have been riding everyone's tailcoats
You have lied and cheated your way up
You got to where you are by luck
So fortune has been good to you
Yet you do not see
Most of the world
Have only ten percent
Of what they need!
Atropabelladonna
Atro
Forum Posts: 187
Atro
Fire of Insight
8
Joined 30th Oct 2011 Forum Posts: 187
Great start at them theme behind it. More more more
Devilish
Forum Posts: 1744
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 24th July 2011 Forum Posts: 1744
Look so good in red..
Remember when there were
white turtle doves?..
Remember when poetry.
Just wasn't this tough..
And the vomit I wrote..
Just wansn't eough?
To get me through times..
when someone else came up?
How do I live on?. What do I do?..
Tell me oh faithfuls that you love me too!!!
I need to be recognized!
Instead i'm left to just fantasize..
On old times..
And homemade ryhmes...
Back alley story for all the glory.
Can't you see me? I'm up here..
Deaf dumb and blind..
Dare I say queer...
Don't get me wrong i'm gay myself..
But let you tell it..
It's bad for my health..
Bitch you look so good in red..
Resting your head..
It's the greatest news..
Your finally DeaD!!!!
Remember when there were
white turtle doves?..
Remember when poetry.
Just wasn't this tough..
And the vomit I wrote..
Just wansn't eough?
To get me through times..
when someone else came up?
How do I live on?. What do I do?..
Tell me oh faithfuls that you love me too!!!
I need to be recognized!
Instead i'm left to just fantasize..
On old times..
And homemade ryhmes...
Back alley story for all the glory.
Can't you see me? I'm up here..
Deaf dumb and blind..
Dare I say queer...
Don't get me wrong i'm gay myself..
But let you tell it..
It's bad for my health..
Bitch you look so good in red..
Resting your head..
It's the greatest news..
Your finally DeaD!!!!
Anonymous
All the scared (est) people-
Are on the same old path-
Used to make me angry
I now sit back and laugh-
can't help it
I resent their shit-
Always putting others down
To climb on top-
attempting a death that's free
Cause your Jesus love's you
better than me-
Well good, okay
You patriarchal shit
So he died
for your mysogyny,
Bigotry-
I trip!!!!
I am Hip-
To your shit-
Apathetic luck-
Is the only thing saving you-
from a dooming hellish existence
You source his sense on your lips.
I see how much you've missed it-
Truth. Truth. and yet-
You!! I see you
all hanging out in your little box now-
All tucked in-I wonder if you hear it loud..
But, I detest this
You lived in a box-
and rest eternal in these digs?
Are on the same old path-
Used to make me angry
I now sit back and laugh-
can't help it
I resent their shit-
Always putting others down
To climb on top-
attempting a death that's free
Cause your Jesus love's you
better than me-
Well good, okay
You patriarchal shit
So he died
for your mysogyny,
Bigotry-
I trip!!!!
I am Hip-
To your shit-
Apathetic luck-
Is the only thing saving you-
from a dooming hellish existence
You source his sense on your lips.
I see how much you've missed it-
Truth. Truth. and yet-
You!! I see you
all hanging out in your little box now-
All tucked in-I wonder if you hear it loud..
But, I detest this
You lived in a box-
and rest eternal in these digs?