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Just want to say that I really enjoyed this and really feel like setting  it to music would be a lot of fun, I love the chorus line..17 going on gone..so true for so many it would seem, I feel a kind of R&B Classic-Rock groove coming through, thanks so much.

Indie Song 2

All this time
I was
waiting to sacrifice
all the thing's I've known
thing's that I was shown



Cursed by this decision
to live by intuition
I'm casting a doubt
and living without



 Chorus
I gently touched her cheek
and felt the tear rolling down (it)
but you don't notice
you don't know



Time goes by
these walls are built on lies
that we hide behind
that we can't deny


Peace of mind
is something you can find
if you look into yourself
you'll know theres noone else



 Chorus



This world was not made
in only seven days
nothing can change
in such an instant way


Chorus

Drums are in space-
time to let go..
let someone take over
near the end of the show.
Feeling too spacey
for re-integration-
Falling haphazardly
I love this sensation
They're clapping and shouting-
Not Fade Away..
Savoring the moment..
We lived for this day!
We all sing along..
like we'll make strange alright
Not once ever thinking-
It was Jerry's last night

Angel of Hope

gazing through her empty lifeless eyes
upon the crimson sun before it dies

her shadow wanes so ever softly now
leaving her alone inside her mind
crying to the sky, conjure darkness light
wailing in her sorrow, failing might

the night is relentless here
maddening silence, it endears
never will she be, alive or free
trapped forever in her frozen life

pleading death she writhes
broken soul she hides

immortal are her fears
knowing no hate no sin

she hails from a land of fairytales
an angel of the river of hope
held against her will, how ironic still
endlessly she wanders this world

memories of her past tease her still
a need for belonging she craves
amongst the horrors now, blinded by desire
merciless she kills to fulfill

pleading death she writhes
tainted soul now rise

awaken from hell
purest soul now stained whole
the angel of death
rise to life, to god defy

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/36996-angel-of-hope/

A   LETTER  TO  TUPAC   SHAKUR

Its now 16 years since u left
Why did they pull the trigger to see u dead?
These other rappers cant even reach close to your name
Yet u left with only 25 years of age.

Im a die hard fan thats why I wrote this letter
LIFE GOES ON but not like the way u left us
We try to SMILE KEEP OUR HEADS UP but never
Have we found a replacement like u never.

Good news LL SNOOPY and DRE still in the game
DMX took control in the mid 90s but now its LIL WAYNE
Im sure v u heard of PAUL WALL,WALE and EMINEM
They are a witness of RAP spreading to every place and race.

The game hasnt changed much its corrupted and dirty
These fake rappers cant do it without ILLUMINATI
Hip Hop has gone commercial big in every country
But the spirit of rappers is weaker I say that loudly.

The WEST COAST EAST COAST feud is no longer strong
I wish u see the video of DIDDY and SNOOP DOGG
East Coast rappers believe BIGGIE SMALL is the king of hip hop
But the rest of the world still know u own the crown.

Send my greetings to SCARFACE and NATE DOGG greatly
Marven Gaye BIG L and all of them MAKAVELI
We miss u ask the OUTLAWS TI and SLIM SHADY
Goodbye PAC this is the end of my letter MAKAVELI.

This started out as a song and has become a mini-opera..lol

Our Story told...



I awoke this morning
regret stuck in my throat
feeling old and lonely
close to out of hope
Thought about you briefly
felt getting high..
remembered how we loved our life
and then I sat and cried...

[CHORUS[

[We sang with the Mariachi
drank margaritas on the beach
We flew around those mountains
danced on moons beyond all reach
We lived amid the sideshows
lived in mansions- young and fine
Nothing has been that fun again
since you said goodbye.]

Remember that time we hitchhiked
cause you wouldnt take a bus?
I wonder if you think of me
Then, I know you must-
I know that just like I do
You tell the story of us

((CHORUS))

[We sang with the Mariachi
drank margaritas on the beach
We flew around those mountains
danced on moons beyond all reach
We lived amid the sideshows
lived in mansions- young and fine
Nothing has been that fun again
since you said goodbye.]
 
Where did those good days go?
and where did they take you?
Remember how we sat and laughed
at the things we were gonna do?
You said "Hey, when we're 30,
we're gonna take a cruise-
and If we're like our mothers
you kill me and I'll kill you"

(CHORUS))

[We sang with the Mariachi
drank margaritas on the beach
We flew around those mountains
danced on moons beyond all reach
We lived amid the sideshows
lived in mansions- young and fine
Nothing has been that fun again
since you said goodbye.]



((CHORUS))

I'll probably never see you again,
I've moved so far away!
You said even then you could never leave-
We knew I could never stay.
Hey remember that time we stole Stuarts truck-
Spent the night in jail- kept them all up!
That was so crazy and we sang all night-
"The world has gone mental-but we are alright"

((CHORUS))

The time we saw Meatloaf-that was a riot!
Then you got drunk-puked in the pool-
got us permanently banned from the Hyatt!
I wonder if you're happy
Did you ever find the one?
Did you find peace? start writing?
stop smoking? Have fun?

((CHORUS))

How many state lines did we cross?
How many times did we end up just lost!
What about the night
we fell in love with Elvis
danced naked on the love-seat
made everyone jealous!
That was the night I
first saw you cry-so
we drank a fifth of vodka
and talked all about why.
Remember how we met?
Dating the same guy-
the look on his face as we
pull up and said HI!
Or that night in Atlanta
lost on the train-
we said just fuck it-
got drunk in the rain!
Remember I said I was going to school
and you said you thought that would be cool?
I spent 15 years learning
got papers galore but
want nothing more than
your self at my door.

((CHORUS))

So I hope you are well
and I go on with my day..
If you saw me now-
what would you say?
I put in a song-
turn it up loud-
remember we loved to
dance Salsa in a crowd!
So maybe one day-
then again, maybe not
Sometimes it feels
like memory's all I've got
End of my day
Im headed home-
remembering the show where
I passed out at the phone-
you said we should go
coz the concert was over
then said, screw it
scoot your ass over!
It feels Im just lost
not sure where to head-
last time I saw you-
there was no world wide web!
It's bed time at last
another day over
wonder what your like
since your probably sober.
No matter what
I know what I know
You taught me Seuss
and I'll decide where to go.

((CHORUS)))

Do I post my piece by replying?

Hypocrites

~Verse~

What do we mean by hypocrisy?
We don't take half the time to listen or open our hearts to see
She's human with feelings just like you
She wants her freedom to voice and live her opinions just as you
Hypocrisy's thick-tented lenses, we're straining to see better and though our circumstances maybe different, we shouldn't have a problem walking together
Nothing should constitute hatred
Not in living the way that I choose live
Just as expectation shouldn't be placed when the feeling is in your heart to give
I swear

~Chorus~
What do we mean by hypocrisy?
Why do you hate what you don't understand about me?
Though my soul maybe different
And I've chosen to love a woman
Doesn't mean that I don't cry the same tears
Silently shredding through a hypocrite's fear

I can't pick between any of these for just one. I know they're re-posts but they're all good.

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/17965-was-it-worth-it/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/17890-blood-against-god-death-metal-deathcore/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/17306-prepare-for-the-nightmare/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/19991-darkness-breaks-free/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/20139-why/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/31133-blood-cravings/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/20986-christ-is-dead/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/40790-wars-of-the-frozen-age/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/39939-bloodthirsty-vengeance-a-sortve/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/36042-your-bloodstained-cross/

Cry

As you stand staring in the mirror
The tears fall light rain, just like a river
but no body can hear them
Yah...
Your heart is shattered
you mend it with wire, tie it up tight but it still spills like lava from a fire oh oh
But how long, how long  how long can this go on, hoow long
corus
I can feel your pain
I can hear your cries
I can see darkened circles under your eyes, your tear stained checks, baby you can't hide
But baby, you have to know the reasons the reasons why
Why do you cry

You sleep the day away
Hoping that it won’t follow
You dream in color and yet there is always that sorrow
Again and again today is just like tomorrow
corus
Cause baby I can feel your pain
I can hear your cries
I can see darkened circles under your eyes, your tear stained checks, baby you can't hide
I can't take them away
Cause baby you got to know the reason why why why baby why

The road your on, has no light at the end of the tunnel
You breath in air
But there’s no oxygen left to swallow
You pray to god. You pray that this life will have something better to follow yahhhh

corus
Cause baby I can feel your pain
I can hear you crying
I can see darkened circles under your eyes, your tear stained checks, baby you can't hide
But you have to find your way
The way to make you feel less hollow

Standin here I close my eyes
Hoping for something
Something that will take away all my troubles
But I open my eyes, and I still wonder why, yah I still wonder why
All I can do is cry

Yay cry
Cry in the mirror
Tears on my pillow
I cry in silence
Cause baby you know why
Baby you know why
Why I cry

Maybe someday there will be some sort of potential
But as for now you just seem so damn judgmental

So until that day
Yah until that day
All I'm gonna do is cry
Cry on my pillow, cry inside, fill up my empty body with bitter tears hard to swallow.
Just cry
Yah yah cry