Poetry competition CLOSED 4th February 2023 8:01pm
WINNER
Anonymous
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Fiftysevenhours
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The falling of life's leaves
It is,
A walk through the glacial strength of the deepest greys,
And the scattered breath of pure sunlight.
The endless touch of rain,
Falling ceaseless and on fire.
The circled rise and fall,
The plaintive,
Buzzards,
Call.
It is what is left upon breeze
And what remains,
From the falling of life's leaves.
It is,
What is,
And something common amongst the breath,
Of those,
Remaining.
A passing right to life and it's living.
Those days,
Are but days amongst the many
If we're lucky.
Singular and far reaching,
Different in the calm of each eye,
A restless storm in the passing of a mind.
And standing from afar,
From that day,
And those days,
Both and all,
Fresh or however,
Old,
Each lays a layer of colour upon the sky,
And that,
Above the massing of the standing mist,
From the falling of life's leaves,
That,
Is what I hold.
A walk through the glacial strength of the deepest greys,
And the scattered breath of pure sunlight.
The endless touch of rain,
Falling ceaseless and on fire.
The circled rise and fall,
The plaintive,
Buzzards,
Call.
It is what is left upon breeze
And what remains,
From the falling of life's leaves.
It is,
What is,
And something common amongst the breath,
Of those,
Remaining.
A passing right to life and it's living.
Those days,
Are but days amongst the many
If we're lucky.
Singular and far reaching,
Different in the calm of each eye,
A restless storm in the passing of a mind.
And standing from afar,
From that day,
And those days,
Both and all,
Fresh or however,
Old,
Each lays a layer of colour upon the sky,
And that,
Above the massing of the standing mist,
From the falling of life's leaves,
That,
Is what I hold.
Written by Fiftysevenhours
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mysteriouslady
Forum Posts: 2647
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th Aug 2012Forum Posts: 2647
Eternally
The lights are dimmed to that of candle light
The scent of raw emotion mingles through the air
Sadness stains my smile, stabbing my soul
weeping, wishing, wanting, letting go is hard
Your life left its footprints all over my heart
Some were painful, yet soft and feather like
Memories of you flow, ink~like
tattooed scars of lust and loss forever in my thoughts
Love unbound, wounded on this day
your voice will forever carry me until we meet eternally...
The lights are dimmed to that of candle light
The scent of raw emotion mingles through the air
Sadness stains my smile, stabbing my soul
weeping, wishing, wanting, letting go is hard
Your life left its footprints all over my heart
Some were painful, yet soft and feather like
Memories of you flow, ink~like
tattooed scars of lust and loss forever in my thoughts
Love unbound, wounded on this day
your voice will forever carry me until we meet eternally...
DanielChristensen
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The Fire Elemental
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Joined 27th Feb 2016 Forum Posts: 239
I'd never hosted a competition before and I couldn't have asked for a better result than so many people having posted such amazing perspectives. Competition should be coming to a close soon so if you're on the fence or still editing a piece for submission, I hope you'll join soon.
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
Phantom2426, MidnightSonneteer, monovox128, Grace, PAR, Fiftysevenhours, Everavalon, APissPoorShaman, Healed, gothicsurrealism, olivia, LunaGreyhawk, Morbs, James_A_Knight, nikkimoe, Daevileyes, Razzerleaf, Her, wallyroo92, case28, PoetsRevenge, Ted_Nashe, SonderNinja, Idontknowhowtofeel, Betty, robert43041, DanielChristensen, admin, Bluevelvete, dimpy, skg373, GypsyLove, luddep, Ownly_Human, OG-Poetry, Nizana, nutbuster, Louisamay, NightGoddess, magichearts, ajay, Tallen, mcjay, Zombie_B
Thank you to the following members for voting:
Phantom2426, MidnightSonneteer, monovox128, Grace, PAR, Fiftysevenhours, Everavalon, APissPoorShaman, Healed, gothicsurrealism, olivia, LunaGreyhawk, Morbs, James_A_Knight, nikkimoe, Daevileyes, Razzerleaf, Her, wallyroo92, case28, PoetsRevenge, Ted_Nashe, SonderNinja, Idontknowhowtofeel, Betty, robert43041, DanielChristensen, admin, Bluevelvete, dimpy, skg373, GypsyLove, luddep, Ownly_Human, OG-Poetry, Nizana, nutbuster, Louisamay, NightGoddess, magichearts, ajay, Tallen, mcjay, Zombie_B
DanielChristensen
The Fire Elemental
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The Fire Elemental
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Congratulations Vee! Thanks to everyone whom participated, it was a valuable and enjoyable experience hosting the competition.
Anonymous
Wow. Thank you to all who voted.
I didn't expect anything knowing it was such a big competition and all the poems were outstanding. I'm honored and humbled.
Daniel, you hosted a great comp and hopefully there will be more.
Thanks again everyone 🥰
I didn't expect anything knowing it was such a big competition and all the poems were outstanding. I'm honored and humbled.
Daniel, you hosted a great comp and hopefully there will be more.
Thanks again everyone 🥰