Poetry competition CLOSED 20th March 2019 3:13pm
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Anonymous
Anonymous
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Miss_Swan
Joined 8th Jan 2018
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Strange Creature
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Blackbird Caged
There's blood dripping
From the cut on your wing
Where the cold wire tore it
As you pulled and screamed
Stop moving, stay still
Silk feathers everywhere
Ink drops of red blood
Scattered on an iron snare
The struggle has stopped
Free from the searing pain
The torment and anguish
Now just a bloodstain
From the cut on your wing
Where the cold wire tore it
As you pulled and screamed
Stop moving, stay still
Silk feathers everywhere
Ink drops of red blood
Scattered on an iron snare
The struggle has stopped
Free from the searing pain
The torment and anguish
Now just a bloodstain
Written by Miss_Swan
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wallyroo92
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Joined 11th July 2012
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Tyrant of Words
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Dark Dreams
She breaks his heart,
For each night they spend apart,
Feeling the weight of loss and despair,
Sobbing in the pages,
That now seem lost in ages,
The lovely dream seems like a nightmare.
Now he writes in vain,
Sitting and writhing in pain,
Thinking his letters somehow will get to her,
But the ache is so deep,
As each night he loses sleep,
The sight of his beloved is becoming a blur.
He takes all the blame,
As the ink bleeds her name,
Pouring all his emotion on every leaf,
With each tear he drops,
He sighs and briefly stops,
Trying to breathe unable to find relief.
He cries out for mercy,
Feeling drawn and unworthy,
Of the love he has but cannot get back,
So he sits there sleepless,
In total and utter bleakness,
Wide awake as the night goes pitch black.
His poor tortured soul
Has been left out in the cold,
Creeping in the gloom with stark screams,
But he does not care,
As long as her spirit is there,
Weeping in the room of his dark dreams.
For each night they spend apart,
Feeling the weight of loss and despair,
Sobbing in the pages,
That now seem lost in ages,
The lovely dream seems like a nightmare.
Now he writes in vain,
Sitting and writhing in pain,
Thinking his letters somehow will get to her,
But the ache is so deep,
As each night he loses sleep,
The sight of his beloved is becoming a blur.
He takes all the blame,
As the ink bleeds her name,
Pouring all his emotion on every leaf,
With each tear he drops,
He sighs and briefly stops,
Trying to breathe unable to find relief.
He cries out for mercy,
Feeling drawn and unworthy,
Of the love he has but cannot get back,
So he sits there sleepless,
In total and utter bleakness,
Wide awake as the night goes pitch black.
His poor tortured soul
Has been left out in the cold,
Creeping in the gloom with stark screams,
But he does not care,
As long as her spirit is there,
Weeping in the room of his dark dreams.
Written by wallyroo92
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Thanks to everyone who voted! Lots of great entries & cool Comp !