AOKIGAHARA
Heart_symphony
Forum Posts: 60
Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 17th Jan 2018Forum Posts: 60
The Suicide Forest
I’ve decided to end it
In the Sea of trees
With a noose tied firmly around my neck
My corpse, softly swaying in the breeze
These terrible thoughts haunt me
Day and night, there’s no respite
So now I stand staring up
At a hemlock fir in awe of it’s height
Around me the souls of the deceased
Interwind between the trees
You can feel them pass by
As a gentle light breeze
This serene scene makes this
The perfect place to die
Mother Nature will be cradling me
Holding me while I cry
My body will hang with the rest
In the eerie graveyard scattered with trees
When my corpse turns black and blue
Sweet Mother Nature will kiss my lips with her breeze
I’ll place my note at the base of the tree
This is my goodbye
Because today is the day
I will die
I’ve decided to end it
In the Sea of trees
With a noose tied firmly around my neck
My corpse, softly swaying in the breeze
These terrible thoughts haunt me
Day and night, there’s no respite
So now I stand staring up
At a hemlock fir in awe of it’s height
Around me the souls of the deceased
Interwind between the trees
You can feel them pass by
As a gentle light breeze
This serene scene makes this
The perfect place to die
Mother Nature will be cradling me
Holding me while I cry
My body will hang with the rest
In the eerie graveyard scattered with trees
When my corpse turns black and blue
Sweet Mother Nature will kiss my lips with her breeze
I’ll place my note at the base of the tree
This is my goodbye
Because today is the day
I will die
HadesRising
Forum Posts: 1625
Tyrant of Words
34
Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1625
The results are in. Thank you, everyone, for the masterful ink. Great poems, my fellow poets.
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Forum Posts: 5134
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
I came back after having lunch, and I saw on the forum list that our host, Hades sir, had posted something so I knew it had to be the results. Once I arrived and it was confirmed, I sucked in my breath and forgot to exhale. You see, ever since this comp first opened, I felt imbued with its subject as it became part of myself. And now, the wait is over, and I still can hardly breathe, and I’m terribly grateful & honored.
Grateful thanks to our host, HadesRising, for the opportunity & the cup. I also extend my congratulations to the talented Grace, and a member who has joined us here at the Deep a few months ago, Heart_symphony, now also winners for their entries,
To all, I wish you well.., we shall meet again,
~Jade🐾
Grateful thanks to our host, HadesRising, for the opportunity & the cup. I also extend my congratulations to the talented Grace, and a member who has joined us here at the Deep a few months ago, Heart_symphony, now also winners for their entries,
To all, I wish you well.., we shall meet again,
~Jade🐾
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 17015
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 17015
Thank you my esteemed host, for the recognition. Congratulations Jade for winning and Heart symphony for runner up.