Poetry competition CLOSED 30th May 2018 4:35am
WINNER
Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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RUNNERS-UP: Grace and Heart_symphony

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AOKIGAHARA

Heart_symphony
Twisted Dreamer
Canada 3awards
Joined 17th Jan 2018
Forum Posts: 60

The Suicide Forest

I’ve decided to end it
In the Sea of trees
With a noose tied firmly around my neck
My corpse, softly swaying in the breeze

These terrible thoughts haunt me
Day and night, there’s no respite
So now I stand staring up
At a hemlock fir in awe of it’s height

Around me the souls of the deceased
Interwind between the trees
You can feel them pass by
As a gentle light breeze

This serene scene makes this
The perfect place to die
Mother Nature will be cradling me
Holding me while I cry

My body will hang with the rest
In the eerie graveyard scattered with trees
When my corpse turns black and blue
Sweet Mother Nature will kiss my lips with her breeze

I’ll place my note at the base of the tree
This is my goodbye
Because today is the day
I will die

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1625

The results are in. Thank you, everyone, for the masterful ink. Great poems, my fellow poets.

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

I came back after having lunch, and I saw on the forum list that our host, Hades sir, had posted something so I knew it had to be the results.  Once I arrived and it was confirmed, I sucked in my breath and forgot to exhale.  You see, ever since this comp first opened, I felt imbued with its subject as it became part of myself.  And now, the wait is over, and I still can hardly breathe, and I’m terribly grateful & honored.  

Grateful thanks to our host, HadesRising, for the opportunity & the cup.  I also extend my congratulations to the talented Grace, and a member who has joined us here at the Deep a few months ago, Heart_symphony, now also winners for their entries,

To all, I wish you well.., we shall meet again,

~Jade🐾

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 17015

Thank you my esteemed host, for the recognition. Congratulations Jade for winning and Heart symphony for runner up.

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