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I Am The Sky

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

Write a self poem based on the quote given below.
I saw this quote and loved it, so I thought I would start a comp about it. I had many interpretations in my own mind when I read it, so I wanted to see how others interpreted it.

”You are the sky - everything else is just the weather”.

Write a “self” poem based on your personal interpretation of this quote.

Rules

* New writes only
* Should be a poem in the “self” category
* No collabs
* Audio entries allowed
* Please title your entries
* One entry only

Any questions please ask me!

poet Anonymous

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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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My one entry is "Cumulus and Stratus" which I posted just before closing.  Thank you! :)

poet Anonymous

Thanks for kicking things off with a great entry Cloventongue89! Just what I was looking for.

poet Anonymous

Jade-Pandora said:.        .

... huh?

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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Ah, apologies...
I was trying to put something up via my iPhone and it wasn't working.  So I switched to my computer and got things up & running as I'd hoped.  

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
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Stay Blue

      
     
i.      
     
Pyrotechnics spark      
anger in    
bright light      
firing bolts    
of electricity      
roaring through      
tennor and    
bass voices;      
thundering  
between thick    
mammatus      
cotton-wool      
stuffed in the    
blackest hate      
     
just weather
much like humanity      
     
ii.      
     
nursery rhymes      
keeping beat to    
skipping ropes      
hopscotch, and marbles;      
after the swing      
laughs tears of joy      
in summer's    
ultra violet rays      
of pure, happy
energy    
Drifting to a    
milky dreamworld      
in galaxies of fairy-lights    
and gloworms    
spinning circles      
like innocent games     
of ring-a-rosies      
-just before bed time      
     
I am the sky
much like a playground      
     
     
[x]     
 
Written by RevolutionAL (Alistair Plint)
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poet Anonymous

Thank you Jade and Al for your entries!

eswaller
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Dec 2015
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Within The Sky

I am just as magnificent as the sky that is above my head.
My hands that are running through the blades of grass
Just as something like complete contentment is running
Through my pulsing veins. The feelings that once bled
Out no longer matter. Every one of those stained glass
Windows are just as beautiful, breathless, and stunning
Even with the rain that is always splattering against their
Window panes, but all that really matters is the blue sky.
All that matters is the fresh air to breathe in every day.
I am free once I feel the wind blowing through my hair
And I no longer have to hide once the tears that I cry
Are dried up. I am the sky and it is a place I can stay.
Written by eswaller
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NightingaleTears
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 22nd Jan 2018
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What if I were the sky?


What would it be like, if I were the sky?
A question I now ask myself, I know not why.
If I were the sky, I would watch all below,
I would see things familiar, and that I know.
I would see people passing by,
Greeting each other, then saying goodbye.
Summer would come,
Bringing with it the sun.
Next would come Autumn,
Changing the leaves' colors as days go by,
Watching the leaves as they fall and dry.
In comes Winter, a cold yet warm season,
Children romp around in the snow, without a care nor reason.
Finally Spring comes, hugging the Earth, thawing it out,
Flowers bloom, and animals start to stir about.
I would watch the wind,
I would watch the rain,
None of them really call my name.
For I would just be the sky, watching over what goes on below.
Written by NightingaleTears
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poet Anonymous

Greenblack


It was perfect, the
paint, named
“greenblack.”

I wanted to touch it
without my gloved hands, and
become the sky
in the split seconds before
a tornado.

I wanted to be the clouds, roiling
severe grays
absorbing the spectrum
of light, leaving
only ominous waves
of glowing greens, illuminating
the land, as if
animated.

But instead
I brushed it on a weather-worn
bench, making
it new again, and
I shall wait for the heavens
to darken on their own, ozone
electrically charged air
calling—

my name
as I step into the winds
and become one, with
the pulse-inducing
green.

Blackwolf
I.M.Blackwolf
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You Are The Firmanent

You Are The Firmament ,

The Constant Above Us , Stretched Like Some Nuit ,

Arched , Yet Touching The Ground , As Stars Fallen To Earth ;

I , Whether Or Not , Or Weather Or Naught ,

Like All Else The Changing , By Spin , Charge , And Momentum ,

And The Momentoes Of Memory ;

And Vast As Your Body I Could Never Know In It's Full Self

The Boundary Between The Heavens And The Earths

I May Be A Storm , Yet I But Skim Your Surface

While You Are Laying Down Some Rapture ;

You , Infinite In Your Viewing , All Else , Microcosms

And Random Climates Of Perception , Many Gods

Playing Under Your Form Of One Goddess , Sky Mother ;

And Your Daughter Of The Rainbow , Taking After You ,

Arching Above The World , A Dancing Palette Of Iridescence ,

A Sign Of Your Promise To Watch Over Us , Your Children ,

We Who See , And Feel , And Experience , The Shifting

Tides , The Emoticons Of Natural Forces , As Some Call Them ,

In Their Lack Of Wordmanship , For All You Are ;

You , Under Which All Is Motion , And You Are Memory ;

Remember Us In Your Meteorological Prayers , As We

Petition You , Weather Or Naught !
Written by Blackwolf (I.M.Blackwolf)
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poet Anonymous

Thank you Eswaller, NightingaleTears, MadameLavender & Blackwolf for your entries! Wowzers. The comp just got real.


LunasChild8
Dangerous Mind
Canada 21awards
Joined 27th Dec 2017
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I Am the Sky

“You are the sky- everything else is just the weather”
Is what I’d always hear from my loving parents
“Don’t take no for an answer; the sky is your only limit”
Just like the gentle wind, life is a constant movement.
-
Up in the heavens is where I want to be
Have my life-story shared among the stars
I want to be a hero, just like Hercules
Yet my parents always said: “We love you just the way you are.”
-
I want to become as mighty as Zeus
Throw down my obstacles with lightning bolts
Push back all oppression and rise above the smoke
Fly among the thunderstorms and feed off their volts.
-
Yet here I am, stuck down on Earth
If I don’t focus enough, life passes by me in a blur
I still can’t help but daydream of adventure
“You are the sky- everything else is just the weather.”
Written by LunasChild8
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