I want metaphors...

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rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
32
Joined 4th Dec 2009
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Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words


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< the sugar in this water >
who are you anyway?
i was just trying to mail this letter
and naturally
mistook you for a post office
please
stamp me with
whatever you have
please
i was dreaming again
they made us strip
showed us to everyone
in our wrinkles
and our fat
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< the sugar in this water >
who are you anyway?
i was just trying to mail this letter
and naturally
mistook you for a post office
please
stamp me with
whatever you have
please
i was dreaming again
they made us strip
showed us to everyone
in our wrinkles
and our fat
- - -
dahlusion
Joined 10th July 2011
Forum Posts: 106
Twisted Dreamer

Forum Posts: 106
Metaphors meander through the moss of my mind:
I AM the distance light travels
where the edge of darkness
is like a meaningless moon
or a cloud in a dense uniform,
where the whole meaning of God
is as if a dead romance of forlorn debris.
I AM the distance light travels
where the edge of darkness
is like a meaningless moon
or a cloud in a dense uniform,
where the whole meaning of God
is as if a dead romance of forlorn debris.
mbass33
matthew bass
7
Joined 22nd Nov 2010
Forum Posts: 334
matthew bass
Fire of Insight


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The people are more stifling than the heat
and they pierce through the back of your skull,
not looking at you.
Eye gouges
nose hooks
bloody knees,
there are a few more homeless than yesterday.
It takes a special person
to scam their way to the top.
And,
when they walk through the revolving door,
there is always another
half-way up the escalator
and they pierce through the back of your skull,
not looking at you.
Eye gouges
nose hooks
bloody knees,
there are a few more homeless than yesterday.
It takes a special person
to scam their way to the top.
And,
when they walk through the revolving door,
there is always another
half-way up the escalator
beautiful_accident
20
Joined 21st June 2011
Forum Posts: 330
Fire of Insight


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constantelectric
Joined 11th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 3
Strange Creature

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An ambient thunder smooth enough to cater to even the smallest of life forms who care to indulge in it.
And strong enough to crumble the granite of all giants who oppose it
And strong enough to crumble the granite of all giants who oppose it
skinnyjean
Llamaliscious
6
Joined 23rd May 2010
Forum Posts: 311
Llamaliscious
Thought Provoker


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The first poem I ever posted on here:
Broken Bottle
I'm a broken bottle
Sharp to the edges
Shattered and cracked
All over the concrete
Intoxicated with the beverage
That it holds deep with in it
Drops with the spilling
Into the gutter
Mixed in with vomit
Like a broken bottle
I lie here
Unwanted
Got no where to go
No reason to live
So take this broken bottle
Sweep it up in with the rubbish
Cos that’s all I deserve
All that I’m worth
Like glass in the dirt
I’m the ground
Of which no one wishes to tread..
Broken Bottle
I'm a broken bottle
Sharp to the edges
Shattered and cracked
All over the concrete
Intoxicated with the beverage
That it holds deep with in it
Drops with the spilling
Into the gutter
Mixed in with vomit
Like a broken bottle
I lie here
Unwanted
Got no where to go
No reason to live
So take this broken bottle
Sweep it up in with the rubbish
Cos that’s all I deserve
All that I’m worth
Like glass in the dirt
I’m the ground
Of which no one wishes to tread..
ShadowsandWind
1
Joined 10th Aug 2010
Forum Posts: 86
Twisted Dreamer


Forum Posts: 86
how disappointing is it when the sound system cant keep up with your tune? i mean the vocals sound fine but the bass is lacking, i can feel it in my chest... but i NEED MORE!!!
naijapoeteket
Idiong Divine
1
Joined 17th Sep 2010
Forum Posts: 837
Idiong Divine
Fire of Insight


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I am the burning sun
that warms your hearts
and the quiet moonlight
that percolates the dark night...
that warms your hearts
and the quiet moonlight
that percolates the dark night...

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Astyanax
Ceejay
9
Joined 23rd Feb 2010
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Ceejay
Fire of Insight


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First Aid
With my love
I tried to bind the finger of your indifference
And stem the flow of your loneliness.
With my love
I tried to bind the finger of your indifference
And stem the flow of your loneliness.
Kameron
4
Joined 8th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 165
Thought Provoker


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I left her dead, barely had
any breathe left. She was grey
or blue, or both. Beaten to
a strand of existence. Only a
little of her left to stand
atop the world. I promote you,
Good Sir, to save her. For I've
done all the saving.
any breathe left. She was grey
or blue, or both. Beaten to
a strand of existence. Only a
little of her left to stand
atop the world. I promote you,
Good Sir, to save her. For I've
done all the saving.
naijapoeteket
Idiong Divine
1
Joined 17th Sep 2010
Forum Posts: 837
Idiong Divine
Fire of Insight


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I am the words falling
From your lip
Be careful with me please.
From your lip
Be careful with me please.