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DUP Inbox Confessional 1-Wine
And the wine
Poured
Open
My senses
Words
Tolerating
My inbox
With too much
Wine
With too much
Emotion
With too much
Of me
Escaping
#drunk writing
Poured
Open
My senses
Words
Tolerating
My inbox
With too much
Wine
With too much
Emotion
With too much
Of me
Escaping
#drunk writing
Written by Nari
(Laura Jean)
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'100x more potent than morphine'
byDKzk.onThurJanua12,2012at 9:53am
~MORE IMPORTANT THAN
MORPHINE (x100)~
f'eelin'round in side me pockets fffor
thee safe'ty what me put'way
ffor safe
keepins some time ago that time agone
fo r
i knew wee'd
n eed it now[ that now
is mani fest ], &you
youyou, y're
n ot
e ven
h ere
any
more-- --- ----ha-- -- -- ----thee truth
is in th'trickery o f
yOur
Great Truth trick ! th'at
works so well unnoticed [in]
as
took4granted - - -
okay,yes,weedloveachother/&yr4getting was
an act of strict necessity-safety1st-t'keep [yr]self safe fr'om self's
ram'fcations'o them olde-tyme daddy'traumas/
o th'cock&bottle, th'bottle+th'cock...would were th'cock was in th'bottle
&stayed there like besotted
mezcal worm, stead'a dyin
dia'betic alcohol death just months b4 my siege of hearty at'tacks ---
all thee timings were perfect to save me my heart &
bust both our
heartminds
after just one more doping doctor chok'd his
heart fulla fentanyl (patch!),
gurglin dead on his
big'time kitchen floor --
who'knows what woulda been / had it [not] been otherwise...........
______dKzK12jnry2012_____this patent'copyrit pro'tects us-all___
~MORE IMPORTANT THAN
MORPHINE (x100)~
f'eelin'round in side me pockets fffor
thee safe'ty what me put'way
ffor safe
keepins some time ago that time agone
fo r
i knew wee'd
n eed it now[ that now
is mani fest ], &you
youyou, y're
n ot
e ven
h ere
any
more-- --- ----ha-- -- -- ----thee truth
is in th'trickery o f
yOur
Great Truth trick ! th'at
works so well unnoticed [in]
as
took4granted - - -
okay,yes,weedloveachother/&yr4getting was
an act of strict necessity-safety1st-t'keep [yr]self safe fr'om self's
ram'fcations'o them olde-tyme daddy'traumas/
o th'cock&bottle, th'bottle+th'cock...would were th'cock was in th'bottle
&stayed there like besotted
mezcal worm, stead'a dyin
dia'betic alcohol death just months b4 my siege of hearty at'tacks ---
all thee timings were perfect to save me my heart &
bust both our
heartminds
after just one more doping doctor chok'd his
heart fulla fentanyl (patch!),
gurglin dead on his
big'time kitchen floor --
who'knows what woulda been / had it [not] been otherwise...........
______dKzK12jnry2012_____this patent'copyrit pro'tects us-all___
Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX
(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
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Mstrmnd1923 said:I would add my 5 part "Melting" series but fortunately for everyone I don't know how to attach them to this thread..so sorry I'm not contributing but what a fun thread to read regardless
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then enter and walla
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PANDORAS BOX (pt 1/5)
Beginning this new adventure
Waiting for time to stand still
Created by my mind's inventor
Hoping tonight will be a thrill
I arrived early at the party place
With my best friend of mine
Pyramid stamps we now taste
This night all happens by design
No one else is at my birthday yet
So we sit and wait to see and feel
Still not seeing any silohettes
Wondering if these are even real
Thirty minutes now pass us by
And we still feel exactly the same
About to give a second hit a try
But then our vision became insane
The room started quickly shrinking
And the ceiling slowly caving in
I started laughing at my thinking
This confusion would never begin
And then there was pandoras box
Sitting innocently in the corner
My birthday present full of shocks
Starting off my night of disorder
The box vibrating and bouncing
With the rhythm of music thumping
I think I may need some counseling
Shadows wall to wall are jumping
A spectrum of colors dance around
Exploding in the dark quiet room
We were now ready to go to town
And escape this mental tomb of doom
Time was frozen and vaporized
Right in front of my very own eyes
And my thoughts became crystallized
This night full of unleashed surprises
So what happens next
You'll have to wait and see
Because there's a lot more left
To this whole melting story
Beginning this new adventure
Waiting for time to stand still
Created by my mind's inventor
Hoping tonight will be a thrill
I arrived early at the party place
With my best friend of mine
Pyramid stamps we now taste
This night all happens by design
No one else is at my birthday yet
So we sit and wait to see and feel
Still not seeing any silohettes
Wondering if these are even real
Thirty minutes now pass us by
And we still feel exactly the same
About to give a second hit a try
But then our vision became insane
The room started quickly shrinking
And the ceiling slowly caving in
I started laughing at my thinking
This confusion would never begin
And then there was pandoras box
Sitting innocently in the corner
My birthday present full of shocks
Starting off my night of disorder
The box vibrating and bouncing
With the rhythm of music thumping
I think I may need some counseling
Shadows wall to wall are jumping
A spectrum of colors dance around
Exploding in the dark quiet room
We were now ready to go to town
And escape this mental tomb of doom
Time was frozen and vaporized
Right in front of my very own eyes
And my thoughts became crystallized
This night full of unleashed surprises
So what happens next
You'll have to wait and see
Because there's a lot more left
To this whole melting story
CHECKPOINT (pt 2/5)
We decided to kill some time
Before the real party started
After shivers ran down my spine
We got in his car and departed
Even though we weren't going far
I'm glad he volunteered to drive
Seeing so many shooting stars
We both were feeling super alive
Now up ahead in the near distance
We saw all these flashing lights
Its the cops was my paranoid insistence
And there's no way in hell I can act right
As my mind was racing with demise
The cars started slowing down ahead
And what to our miserable surprise
Not an accident but a checkpoint instead
But Dave looked over at me
And said don't worry I got this
I trusted how so confidently
He prepared for the upcoming word blitz
The cop approached our car now parked
And asked if we knew what was going on here
A moment of brilliance from Dave had sparked
Which calmed my ultra paranoia and fears
"yes it's a checkpoint for sobriety
Just went through one last week"
I could not believe this was reality
And Dave grabbed the information sheet
Before the cop could respond his jaw dropped
As Dave quickly accelerated away
We escaped the police and sobriety stop
And lived to tell this story another day
We finally got into the local town
And arrived at the early summer fair
With energy in my body now all around
There's still more to this story soon to share
We decided to kill some time
Before the real party started
After shivers ran down my spine
We got in his car and departed
Even though we weren't going far
I'm glad he volunteered to drive
Seeing so many shooting stars
We both were feeling super alive
Now up ahead in the near distance
We saw all these flashing lights
Its the cops was my paranoid insistence
And there's no way in hell I can act right
As my mind was racing with demise
The cars started slowing down ahead
And what to our miserable surprise
Not an accident but a checkpoint instead
But Dave looked over at me
And said don't worry I got this
I trusted how so confidently
He prepared for the upcoming word blitz
The cop approached our car now parked
And asked if we knew what was going on here
A moment of brilliance from Dave had sparked
Which calmed my ultra paranoia and fears
"yes it's a checkpoint for sobriety
Just went through one last week"
I could not believe this was reality
And Dave grabbed the information sheet
Before the cop could respond his jaw dropped
As Dave quickly accelerated away
We escaped the police and sobriety stop
And lived to tell this story another day
We finally got into the local town
And arrived at the early summer fair
With energy in my body now all around
There's still more to this story soon to share
THE CARNIVAL (pt 3/5)
Two hours have passed if I'm not mistaken
Since this trip of a lifetime started
Hallucinations have completely overtaken
And my common sense has departed
The bright lights of the carnival
Are streaking through my head
Reflections of the smallest particles
Refract through this maze I unthread
Looking for a girl to party with
As I try to keep my composure
This story is real its not a myth
Escaping from this enclosure
The lights flashing everywhere
And the people around me unaware
The trail of echoes haunting stare
Laughing at me in this melting air
My minds experience is so intense
This vibrant amazing sensory overload
The secrets awaiting my next suspense
I feel like I'm going to explode
But I found my level of calming peace
As I met this girl and started talking
The effects though continued to increase
Around the rides we started walking
Then out of nowhere all of a sudden
I was approached by six angry guys
With my vision it felt like a dozen
And I asked them the reason why
They said I was in their territory
As the girl quickly ran out of sight
With strychine coursing through my body
I was ready for this outnumbered fight
All I saw were chattering teeth
As I quickly prepared my fist
They didn't know my rage beneath
Or the hidden world where I exist
But my brain suddenly kicked in
And this truth I must admit
It was a fight I could never win
So somehow I talked my way out of it
After experiencing this sudden rush
I thought it was finally time to go
My minds vaporizing and feeling crushed
So I found Dave amongst all the glow
The girl was lost but my party was on
So we headed back to our house of fun
This is where the story moves along
And when the next chapter has begun
Two hours have passed if I'm not mistaken
Since this trip of a lifetime started
Hallucinations have completely overtaken
And my common sense has departed
The bright lights of the carnival
Are streaking through my head
Reflections of the smallest particles
Refract through this maze I unthread
Looking for a girl to party with
As I try to keep my composure
This story is real its not a myth
Escaping from this enclosure
The lights flashing everywhere
And the people around me unaware
The trail of echoes haunting stare
Laughing at me in this melting air
My minds experience is so intense
This vibrant amazing sensory overload
The secrets awaiting my next suspense
I feel like I'm going to explode
But I found my level of calming peace
As I met this girl and started talking
The effects though continued to increase
Around the rides we started walking
Then out of nowhere all of a sudden
I was approached by six angry guys
With my vision it felt like a dozen
And I asked them the reason why
They said I was in their territory
As the girl quickly ran out of sight
With strychine coursing through my body
I was ready for this outnumbered fight
All I saw were chattering teeth
As I quickly prepared my fist
They didn't know my rage beneath
Or the hidden world where I exist
But my brain suddenly kicked in
And this truth I must admit
It was a fight I could never win
So somehow I talked my way out of it
After experiencing this sudden rush
I thought it was finally time to go
My minds vaporizing and feeling crushed
So I found Dave amongst all the glow
The girl was lost but my party was on
So we headed back to our house of fun
This is where the story moves along
And when the next chapter has begun
THE PARTY (pt 4/5)
It's now around 11 at night
I'm lost in this four hour shuffle
We arrived back at the party sight
Unable to piece together my puzzle
My mind is revving at full speed
So many people here to celebrate
Time crawling like a centipede
But still no chance to recalibrate
I found Andrea my go to party girl
Amongst the sea of the drunken crowd
She saw my worlds were in a whirl
She too wanted lost in the clouds
Adventurously she wanted to try it
And join me on this amazing trip
So with her hit I took a second
Daring my mind to further slip
As time hid in the desolate shadows
I voyaged on the edge of my brain
Confusion burned by creations allowed
Crossing the threshold of my insane
Relentless waves of delirium
I'm decimated and completely leveled
Imbalanced with my equilibrium
In its wake my mind disheveled
I quickly became the spectacle
The center of this crazy show
My mind causing the susceptible
Creating the chaos that would grow
The pagans and the warlocks
Circling me like rabid vultures
They too wanted pandoras box
We froze like paranoid sculptures
Escape we needed you understand
So we journeyed down to the river
A mystical place called hobbit land
Memories fragmented in this sliver
Now lost in this new amazement
Away from the chaos of the scene
Our bodies suffering displacement
Traveling through this vivid dream
The river flowing rather gently
Under the rainbows of the moonlight
The sounds we feel so intently
Tasting the colors of this exotic night
Lost in this place consumed for hours
We can feel our warm bodies melting
Fulfilling my illuminated powers
We feel the summer air pelting
Touching sensations of our fingertips
I'm awaiting her next sign
The sound of gunfire violently whips
Sending shivers down our spines
So we walk back up to the house
To see what was happening there
Through the path shadows bounce
There's still more to melting I swear
It's now around 11 at night
I'm lost in this four hour shuffle
We arrived back at the party sight
Unable to piece together my puzzle
My mind is revving at full speed
So many people here to celebrate
Time crawling like a centipede
But still no chance to recalibrate
I found Andrea my go to party girl
Amongst the sea of the drunken crowd
She saw my worlds were in a whirl
She too wanted lost in the clouds
Adventurously she wanted to try it
And join me on this amazing trip
So with her hit I took a second
Daring my mind to further slip
As time hid in the desolate shadows
I voyaged on the edge of my brain
Confusion burned by creations allowed
Crossing the threshold of my insane
Relentless waves of delirium
I'm decimated and completely leveled
Imbalanced with my equilibrium
In its wake my mind disheveled
I quickly became the spectacle
The center of this crazy show
My mind causing the susceptible
Creating the chaos that would grow
The pagans and the warlocks
Circling me like rabid vultures
They too wanted pandoras box
We froze like paranoid sculptures
Escape we needed you understand
So we journeyed down to the river
A mystical place called hobbit land
Memories fragmented in this sliver
Now lost in this new amazement
Away from the chaos of the scene
Our bodies suffering displacement
Traveling through this vivid dream
The river flowing rather gently
Under the rainbows of the moonlight
The sounds we feel so intently
Tasting the colors of this exotic night
Lost in this place consumed for hours
We can feel our warm bodies melting
Fulfilling my illuminated powers
We feel the summer air pelting
Touching sensations of our fingertips
I'm awaiting her next sign
The sound of gunfire violently whips
Sending shivers down our spines
So we walk back up to the house
To see what was happening there
Through the path shadows bounce
There's still more to melting I swear
