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What are your favourite poems on DUP?
case28
Alexander Case
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Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 2145
The question is simple... what are your favourite poems on DUP?
Post a link to the poem and tell us why the poem is one of your favourites.
Post a link to the poem and tell us why the poem is one of your favourites.
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2145
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 2145
Because I Can
It's hard to wake each day
fighting to stay king
of my proverbial jungle,
hard to have reputation
of any kind
and as I fade
from the faces present
from the page
and even from memory,
do not assume from my silence
that I'll relinquish rule
and fall without a fight.
Do not trust my words.
Fading is a bitter business.
I will write you into a corner
and having put you there
grope and molest your sentiment.
I am the snake
lying in ambush
with no need to hunt,
who carefully marks your paths
knows your failings,
who can wait as long as it takes.
Welcome to the world where I am king
where I punish you for trusting
with each line
with you
still reading like it's leading somewhere
like the ending will pull you through
and then you'll pat my poetic back
and say this one is better than the last
or at least it didn't make you sick,
still throwing those hurt glances
that search for reasons
as if written upon my surface.
I rape the reader because I can
in ten minute increments of anger.
The act itself is a warning
that comes too late
comes after the fact.
Reading this line causes cancer.
Reading this line soils your innocence.
Your well-worn paths, your pauses for breath
your earnest anticipation
all lead to an untimely ending.
fighting to stay king
of my proverbial jungle,
hard to have reputation
of any kind
and as I fade
from the faces present
from the page
and even from memory,
do not assume from my silence
that I'll relinquish rule
and fall without a fight.
Do not trust my words.
Fading is a bitter business.
I will write you into a corner
and having put you there
grope and molest your sentiment.
I am the snake
lying in ambush
with no need to hunt,
who carefully marks your paths
knows your failings,
who can wait as long as it takes.
Welcome to the world where I am king
where I punish you for trusting
with each line
with you
still reading like it's leading somewhere
like the ending will pull you through
and then you'll pat my poetic back
and say this one is better than the last
or at least it didn't make you sick,
still throwing those hurt glances
that search for reasons
as if written upon my surface.
I rape the reader because I can
in ten minute increments of anger.
The act itself is a warning
that comes too late
comes after the fact.
Reading this line causes cancer.
Reading this line soils your innocence.
Your well-worn paths, your pauses for breath
your earnest anticipation
all lead to an untimely ending.
Written by braggman
(Steve Bragg)
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When I first joined DUP, I looked up to poets like Braggman, CruelHandedWriter, and LobodeSanPedro. They showed me a side of poetry I hadn’t seen before... it was gritty, real, and unapologetically raw.
Poetry has always been personal to me, but where I grew up in the 80s and 90s, it wasn’t something you shared with your mates. We were too busy just being teenage boys... acting tough and surviving. Poetry was considered feminine and weak. But I felt the urge to create, so I’d write in my bedroom, keeping it to myself.
Then I found DU later in life... still acting tough and surviving. I found contemporary poetry about the real world, written by men who weren’t afraid to express themselves. I found a place that celebrated creativity, where poetry wasn’t just something hidden away… on DUP I could reveal my creative side… because poetry made me fucking pretty.
I think this poem, “from my morning bed” captured the essence of a male writer feeling empowered by his creativity... and acting tough.