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Beer or Alcohol Senryu/Haiku
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 22nd Apr 2023Forum Posts: 35
Poetry Contest Description
Write a senryu/haiku poem based on beer or alcohol
Write a senryu/haiku poem about beer or alcohol. It can be about the aesthetics of the involvement in lifestyle in general, simply about pouring up a drink, perhaps celebratory tradition or experience involving alcohol, or about inebriation and/or intoxication. You can also write on the topic of alcoholism/addiction. It must be 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the 2nd line, and 5 syllables in the 3rd line. Here is a simple example:
Over-Flowing:
Another cold beer
Pouring inside of the glass
Outwardly cascades
This poem could be taken as pouring up a literal glass of beer, and the carbonation overflowing to the outside of the glass. If you examine the particular language, it could also be about how emotion flows when drinking, in an "outward cascade", like opening up, and talking, and being inebriated, etc. Idk, maybe it could be worded better, but I think this suffices as an example.
Try to be creative and capture the essence of alcoholic consumption in a well-spirited manner. Perhaps an ode to drinking with friends, or even a battle with addiction. Limit one entry per person.
Over-Flowing:
Another cold beer
Pouring inside of the glass
Outwardly cascades
This poem could be taken as pouring up a literal glass of beer, and the carbonation overflowing to the outside of the glass. If you examine the particular language, it could also be about how emotion flows when drinking, in an "outward cascade", like opening up, and talking, and being inebriated, etc. Idk, maybe it could be worded better, but I think this suffices as an example.
Try to be creative and capture the essence of alcoholic consumption in a well-spirited manner. Perhaps an ode to drinking with friends, or even a battle with addiction. Limit one entry per person.
Naajir
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 20th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 48
What's the occasion?...
Lost your job? Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
Written by Naajir
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PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
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PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Fire of Insight
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Joined 26th May 2022Forum Posts: 289
Alcoholic Haiku
two shots of vodka
from underneath the iceberg
love's freezing my friend
from underneath the iceberg
love's freezing my friend
Written by PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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James_A_Knight
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Thought Provoker
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Joined 24th Feb 2021 Forum Posts: 101
Beer
Drink the bottle down
Feel the warming numbing rush
Diluting the soul
Written by James_A_Knight
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ThePalestRider
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Thought Provoker
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Joined 14th Sep 2018 Forum Posts: 35
"A Balkan Burn"
Golden warmth descends
fire and fruit in perfect burn
summer on the tongue
Golden warmth descends
fire and fruit in perfect burn
summer on the tongue