Poetry competition CLOSED 26th June 2023 1:59am
WINNER
Betty
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RUNNER-UP: wallyroo92

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Concrete Creations

cabcool
Guardian of Shadows
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Poetry Contest

Create a concrete or shape poem on any shape or theme of your choice. The words must define the shape or object.

You may submit the final product as a photo (jpg, png, or pdf), to prevent the words from shifting out of line during submission.  You must first submit the poem under your regular profile (New Submission), then add it to the comp from there, after which you may change it out for a Visual Poem with the + image feature.

RULES
1 entry per human being (multiple aliases not allowed)
50 words max
NO linguistic, metaphoric, or (porno)graphic obscenities
NEW and ORIGINAL poems only

ADJUDICATION
Entries will be judged on visual impact as well as message content, by a panel of adjudicators.

ENTRY DEADLINE
Competition closes June 25

PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
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Mountains

Mountains
PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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cabcool
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You are a brave soul. Paulo, for jumping in headfirst to identify with this shapely adventure!
Thanks for setting the pace for all who will follow.
All the best in the comp.
-cab

PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
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Thank you!!! Poetry is life!

Betty
Tyrant of Words
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hangman's scaffold

 
neurodivergent people can  
be tall, thin, brilliant,        O
and work a pair               C
of fuck-me                       D
heels                                
so
very
well  
that normative thinkers  
forget that we can't actually  
deal with breaks in the patterns.
I’m in the audience cheering this time.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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cabcool
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Hi, Betty
Thanks for your entry, so effortlessly clever.
Best regards.

Jordan
D.O.C.
Thought Provoker
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The Law of Right Angles, Not Angels, Compels You!

The
three
di-
men-
sions
still
in
eve-
ry
cor-
ner
of
your
room   the   multitude   of   strange   dimensions   cryptic   sadly   doom
  and
    in
      a
       crypt
         of
           three
             di-
               men-
                 sions
                   all --
                     a-
                       lack --
                         en-
                           tomb.
Written by Jordan (D.O.C.)
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cabcool
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Thanks for your entry, Jordan.
Just when things were getting too quiet around here, here you come to stir the waters!

wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
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Rainbows

Rainbows
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cabcool
Guardian of Shadows
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Thank you for your entry, wallyroo; and how apt for the concurrent celebration!
You are one word over the limit, but we ca work with that.
Best regards to you.

cabcool
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I appreciate the effort, Gentle. You still have several hours to rectify the word-count disarray.  You are way over the 50-word limit.
Looking forward to your adjustment.

cabcool
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kitesong

kitesong
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cabcool
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Please note:  "the saddle of the wind" and "kitesong" are non-entries included here merely as samples for illustration purposes.

cabcool
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CONGRATULATIONS to the winner, Betty, for Hangman's Scaffold.  Well done, Wallyroo, for chalking up a close 2nd place with Rainbows.  Thanks to all participants for making this so diverse in creative thought.
Big thank you to our judges, Ahavati, lepperochan, and MadameLavender.  Let's do another interesting one sometime soon again.

Betty
Tyrant of Words
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Thank you for hosting Cabcool! I totally dug this. It was a different layer of challenge.

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