Poetry competition CLOSED 29th December 2022 2:36pm
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Darkness and fright?
robert43041
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Poetry Contest Description
You (and your friend-s) are on a hike in the woods. It's getting late, you come upon what looks like a deserted cabin. You like the idea of staying there for the night. Until you see the chopped-up human head on the kitchen counter....
This might be more suitable for a short story to around 1,000 words but could be more. But poems not excluded. Up to you.
PS: no porn, please.
PS: no porn, please.
Sapphirewolf
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No One Is Home
In these woods we dared to be
Though tales were told of tragedy
Of monsters hiding deep in woods
We shan't believe them no one should
Though we don't believe these tales
Could there be more beyond the trails?
Each tree we pass we trek deeper in woods
Down comes the rain and up go our hoods
With thunder and lightning our minds start to wander
Could there really be monsters way out yonder?
Now we're lost cant see our way back
We're frightened we may be under attack
Now running and leaping through trees and vines
We both felt a tingle go straight up our spines
To a halt we both came as we peer through the rain
A cabin we spy and now feel the strain
We have no other choice, no shelter in place
Now we see the fear in each others face
Slowly we creep to the cabin below
No one we see only a light a glow
It's now or never maybe they won't mind
All we care is hopefully their kind
No one is home we both started sying
Once inside we then started drying
Do you smell that I ask? Smells like blood
Don't be silly she said, its probably just mud
Lurking around where I shouldn't be
I slipped and fell down straight on my knees
I don't want to look, to see what is there
It's probably just rain that's dripping in here
I cut on the light and to my surprise
There on the table was a head? but what size?
Shocked I walked backwards away
Surely a trick someone has played
You have to see this I said!
I've found a mangled human head!
We packed up to leave we should have kept walking
Little did we know the monster had been stalking
We rush to the door were almost out
But on the other side there came a shout
What really happened to the girls? no one knows
Only one made it out so the story goes
Shes in the assylum where she hides herself away
Smells like blood she says every day
Though tales were told of tragedy
Of monsters hiding deep in woods
We shan't believe them no one should
Though we don't believe these tales
Could there be more beyond the trails?
Each tree we pass we trek deeper in woods
Down comes the rain and up go our hoods
With thunder and lightning our minds start to wander
Could there really be monsters way out yonder?
Now we're lost cant see our way back
We're frightened we may be under attack
Now running and leaping through trees and vines
We both felt a tingle go straight up our spines
To a halt we both came as we peer through the rain
A cabin we spy and now feel the strain
We have no other choice, no shelter in place
Now we see the fear in each others face
Slowly we creep to the cabin below
No one we see only a light a glow
It's now or never maybe they won't mind
All we care is hopefully their kind
No one is home we both started sying
Once inside we then started drying
Do you smell that I ask? Smells like blood
Don't be silly she said, its probably just mud
Lurking around where I shouldn't be
I slipped and fell down straight on my knees
I don't want to look, to see what is there
It's probably just rain that's dripping in here
I cut on the light and to my surprise
There on the table was a head? but what size?
Shocked I walked backwards away
Surely a trick someone has played
You have to see this I said!
I've found a mangled human head!
We packed up to leave we should have kept walking
Little did we know the monster had been stalking
We rush to the door were almost out
But on the other side there came a shout
What really happened to the girls? no one knows
Only one made it out so the story goes
Shes in the assylum where she hides herself away
Smells like blood she says every day
Written by Sapphirewolf
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Rew
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The Bisto-Kid.
It's dark and damp in Georgia, near
this Cahulawassee river,
a jungle like Borneo, it's clear
as I break another nail, and shiver.
On the Appalachian trail
a visit to the primitive past,
" I must be outta my tree," I wail
but mostly I need food and fast.
" Dinner's ready " a ghostly moan
dies away in the falling night,
a rattle of pans make me groan
coz I ain't dined since early light.
The smell of smoke awakes my plight
as does the aroma of roast pork,
I've already pulled my belt in tight
as my hike starts to feel, like work.
No campfire flame, as yet, is shown
no track pointing to campsite,
just torturing smells, these are blown
up my nose becoming my sight.
And my tracking skills track it right
Ah! a Bisto-Kid... in the gloomy murk
but still slavering for a bite
but no welcoming campfire spark.
But my nose leads me to a hut,
a stone stove, a G.I dixie,
my belly thinks my throat's been cut
but the smell of long-cooked-piggy,
turns my hands to tearing claws
all is silent, not a sound,
but slurping lips, my chomp of jaws
filling belly, now heaven bound.
I poke the fire up to a blaze
and see the roasted leg is, kinda small,
no crackling but hell I'm ready to praise
the cook an' clean an' wash an' all.
In the gloom I kick a boot
and my delight is changed to fright,
coz horror of horrors in it, a foot
as I bang outta there into the night,
I knock a table, something rolls to the floor,
a chopped up head with accusing eyes
watched me chase my vomit, out the door...
this Cahulawassee river,
a jungle like Borneo, it's clear
as I break another nail, and shiver.
On the Appalachian trail
a visit to the primitive past,
" I must be outta my tree," I wail
but mostly I need food and fast.
" Dinner's ready " a ghostly moan
dies away in the falling night,
a rattle of pans make me groan
coz I ain't dined since early light.
The smell of smoke awakes my plight
as does the aroma of roast pork,
I've already pulled my belt in tight
as my hike starts to feel, like work.
No campfire flame, as yet, is shown
no track pointing to campsite,
just torturing smells, these are blown
up my nose becoming my sight.
And my tracking skills track it right
Ah! a Bisto-Kid... in the gloomy murk
but still slavering for a bite
but no welcoming campfire spark.
But my nose leads me to a hut,
a stone stove, a G.I dixie,
my belly thinks my throat's been cut
but the smell of long-cooked-piggy,
turns my hands to tearing claws
all is silent, not a sound,
but slurping lips, my chomp of jaws
filling belly, now heaven bound.
I poke the fire up to a blaze
and see the roasted leg is, kinda small,
no crackling but hell I'm ready to praise
the cook an' clean an' wash an' all.
In the gloom I kick a boot
and my delight is changed to fright,
coz horror of horrors in it, a foot
as I bang outta there into the night,
I knock a table, something rolls to the floor,
a chopped up head with accusing eyes
watched me chase my vomit, out the door...
Written by Rew
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Nicely done. Please go for Spellcheck: were and we're and each others each other's.........Regards, Robert
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Superbly scary. Regards, Robert.
vladitan
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A poem for Dantè`s inferno
In the depths of hell, a man abandoned his home
walking slowly, his journey has come.
Dante, the pilgrim, on a quest he desire,
to save his love, and to set her soul on fire.
Through the gates of hell, he did descend,
Into the darkness, his fate started to tend.
He faced the horrors while on defend,
and jumping against them in a offend.
At the first circle, the lustful he saw,
whose sins were great, so fearsome and awful,
In the second circle, the gluttonous layed,
their punishment: forever to be tossed and decayed.
In the third circle, the greedy did dwell,
Their fate, to be forever trapped in a well.
In the fourth circle, the wrathful got their rage,
for punishment, to be forever trapped in a cage.
In the fifth circle, the heretics did burn,
Their fate, to be forever in flames, so stern.
In the sixth circle, the violent did suffer,
their punishment, to be forever in the mud and to rougher.
In the seventh circle, the fraudulent did dwell,
Their fate, to be forever in a river of boiling blood, so swell.
In the eighth circle, the treacherous did lie,
Their punishment, to be forever in ice, so high.
In the ninth circle, the traitors did lie,
Their fate, to be forever stuck in the frozen lake, so dry,
And in the center of hell, sat Lucifer,
The embodiment of evil, like a minister.
But Dante, the pilgrim, did not falter,
He faced his fears, and did not alter,
And in the end, he emerged victorious,
His soul was saved, and his love, propitious.
Thus ends the tale of Dante's Inferno,
A story of fear, love, and courage so fair,
A tale that will live on, besides the despair.
12.09.2022
walking slowly, his journey has come.
Dante, the pilgrim, on a quest he desire,
to save his love, and to set her soul on fire.
Through the gates of hell, he did descend,
Into the darkness, his fate started to tend.
He faced the horrors while on defend,
and jumping against them in a offend.
At the first circle, the lustful he saw,
whose sins were great, so fearsome and awful,
In the second circle, the gluttonous layed,
their punishment: forever to be tossed and decayed.
In the third circle, the greedy did dwell,
Their fate, to be forever trapped in a well.
In the fourth circle, the wrathful got their rage,
for punishment, to be forever trapped in a cage.
In the fifth circle, the heretics did burn,
Their fate, to be forever in flames, so stern.
In the sixth circle, the violent did suffer,
their punishment, to be forever in the mud and to rougher.
In the seventh circle, the fraudulent did dwell,
Their fate, to be forever in a river of boiling blood, so swell.
In the eighth circle, the treacherous did lie,
Their punishment, to be forever in ice, so high.
In the ninth circle, the traitors did lie,
Their fate, to be forever stuck in the frozen lake, so dry,
And in the center of hell, sat Lucifer,
The embodiment of evil, like a minister.
But Dante, the pilgrim, did not falter,
He faced his fears, and did not alter,
And in the end, he emerged victorious,
His soul was saved, and his love, propitious.
Thus ends the tale of Dante's Inferno,
A story of fear, love, and courage so fair,
A tale that will live on, besides the despair.
12.09.2022
Written by vladitan
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Woodswomen
They'd gone on the trip because of Sophie, who fancied herself a survivalist and had her own blog on the theme, called Woodswoman.
That one of their group was overweight and another more used to surviving the Black Friday crushes at London department stores was irrelevant. They went to a small town near the Welsh border. To one side of the town were deep woods, which the group set out to explore. Some years ago a nightclub bouncer had gone on a killing spree and hid in those woods for more than a month before dying in a shootout with police.
'It'll be just like when we were kids!' said Sophie as they clambered out of the land rover that Simone had driven them in. Simone hefted her bulk out of the vehicle and started taking down their rucksacks. She shouldered the heaviest one, which was stuffed with their cooking equipment and food supplies, so that when she moved she clattered like a walking kitchen.
Children of the "Essex missions", outreach programmes by churches, the women had met when they were nine or so. The day of their hike through the woods was wet and windy, as tends to be expected on the Welsh border. They wore rain ponchos and slogged towards the line of trees. Bethany, who'd needed to be told that you don't wear expensive outfits for hiking, glanced back at the car park and the town before crossing into the woods.
Sophie walked up to an immense tree and took out her smartphone. 'Come on, girls, let's take one for Twitter!'
The women all wore rain ponchos in different primary colours. 'We look just like the Powerpuff Girls!'
'Yeah,' snorted Simone. 'She-Bear Grylls, Carrie Bradshaw, and a fat lesbian.' Bethany, standing to the other side of Sophie, swatted the back of Simone's head. 'I keep telling you not to call me that,' she said. 'For one thing, I don't look like a horse.'
'I dunno, I like Carrie.'
'You'd break the poor thing' said Sophie. 'Anyway, smile!' The picture was taken and posted on social media before they'd re-shouldered their backpacks.
They were hiking towards a cabin that had been maintained as a sort of tourist attraction since it had been there since the 1790s. When they reached the cabin, which stood at the crest of a rise with a line of trees behind it, the women were exhausted and sat about on the floor. The cabin had one large room that the front door opened onto as well as a short corridor to either side of which were separate rooms.
The large room contained a small kitchen area, including a rusted but still operational stove that looked like it had been bought by a 1950s housewife. 'How is this place even hooked up to receive gas, and where are we supposed to go to the loo?' asked Bethany.
'She-Bear shits in the woods,' said Simone.
'Ignore her,' said Sophie, gesturing at the corridor, 'there's a working lav down...' Her sentence was cut short by a scream from Simone, who'd moved to the stove and opened it before slamming it shut again. The colour had drained from her face.
'What, what is it?!' said Sophie as she and Bethany ran to her. Simone took her hands from her mouth. 'The oven,' she whispered. 'There's a fucking human head in it!'
Sophie confirmed this hypothesis for herself while Bethany comforted Simone. 'Oh Jesus,' she muttered. 'It's that guy, Douglas Coleman.'
'Who?' said Bethany.
'That bouncer. The one who killed all those people about five years ago after he caught his girlfriend with another man.'
'Listen to yourself, Sophie! That doesn't make ANY fucking sense. Firstly, who would have decapitated him and left his head in the oven? Secondly, it's been five years! The flesh would have rotted off the skull by now!'
'...well, maybe it just looks like him. At any rate, I can't get any reception this far in, so we need to get back to town and report this. Are you able to walk, or do you need a minute?'
Simone indicated that she was fine and the three of them braced themselves for another several-hour trek, back the way they'd come. An hour in, the sun started to descend and spread a shroud across the woods. The cold air sharpened and a light drizzle spattered their plastic ponchos.
A couple of hours later they were descending another rise when Bethany finally said: 'how much longer is it? Shouldn't we be there by now?'
'Oh God...' Sophie was a little way ahead, staring down at something in the dark. There was a full moon above them and it lit her up in her red poncho like a Christmas bauble. Neither Bethany nor Simone spoke, perhaps knowing in their guts what Sophie was looking at.
They walked up beside and followed her gaze to a square of light between two trees, bisected by a black bar. They were looking at a window, and as their eyes focused they took in the contours of a cabin. 'How did you know his name?' asked Simone of Sophie. 'Why didn't you just say "that guy"? We were here, weren't we?'
Sophie's face had frozen into a death mask of pained realisation and regret. Regret that she'd bullied her friends into joining her for this trip. Regret that she was destined to feel again and again and again and again, always anew each time, until whatever strange intelligence ruled the universe decided to stop replaying the same footage. 'We're STILL here,' was all that she said.
That one of their group was overweight and another more used to surviving the Black Friday crushes at London department stores was irrelevant. They went to a small town near the Welsh border. To one side of the town were deep woods, which the group set out to explore. Some years ago a nightclub bouncer had gone on a killing spree and hid in those woods for more than a month before dying in a shootout with police.
'It'll be just like when we were kids!' said Sophie as they clambered out of the land rover that Simone had driven them in. Simone hefted her bulk out of the vehicle and started taking down their rucksacks. She shouldered the heaviest one, which was stuffed with their cooking equipment and food supplies, so that when she moved she clattered like a walking kitchen.
Children of the "Essex missions", outreach programmes by churches, the women had met when they were nine or so. The day of their hike through the woods was wet and windy, as tends to be expected on the Welsh border. They wore rain ponchos and slogged towards the line of trees. Bethany, who'd needed to be told that you don't wear expensive outfits for hiking, glanced back at the car park and the town before crossing into the woods.
Sophie walked up to an immense tree and took out her smartphone. 'Come on, girls, let's take one for Twitter!'
The women all wore rain ponchos in different primary colours. 'We look just like the Powerpuff Girls!'
'Yeah,' snorted Simone. 'She-Bear Grylls, Carrie Bradshaw, and a fat lesbian.' Bethany, standing to the other side of Sophie, swatted the back of Simone's head. 'I keep telling you not to call me that,' she said. 'For one thing, I don't look like a horse.'
'I dunno, I like Carrie.'
'You'd break the poor thing' said Sophie. 'Anyway, smile!' The picture was taken and posted on social media before they'd re-shouldered their backpacks.
They were hiking towards a cabin that had been maintained as a sort of tourist attraction since it had been there since the 1790s. When they reached the cabin, which stood at the crest of a rise with a line of trees behind it, the women were exhausted and sat about on the floor. The cabin had one large room that the front door opened onto as well as a short corridor to either side of which were separate rooms.
The large room contained a small kitchen area, including a rusted but still operational stove that looked like it had been bought by a 1950s housewife. 'How is this place even hooked up to receive gas, and where are we supposed to go to the loo?' asked Bethany.
'She-Bear shits in the woods,' said Simone.
'Ignore her,' said Sophie, gesturing at the corridor, 'there's a working lav down...' Her sentence was cut short by a scream from Simone, who'd moved to the stove and opened it before slamming it shut again. The colour had drained from her face.
'What, what is it?!' said Sophie as she and Bethany ran to her. Simone took her hands from her mouth. 'The oven,' she whispered. 'There's a fucking human head in it!'
Sophie confirmed this hypothesis for herself while Bethany comforted Simone. 'Oh Jesus,' she muttered. 'It's that guy, Douglas Coleman.'
'Who?' said Bethany.
'That bouncer. The one who killed all those people about five years ago after he caught his girlfriend with another man.'
'Listen to yourself, Sophie! That doesn't make ANY fucking sense. Firstly, who would have decapitated him and left his head in the oven? Secondly, it's been five years! The flesh would have rotted off the skull by now!'
'...well, maybe it just looks like him. At any rate, I can't get any reception this far in, so we need to get back to town and report this. Are you able to walk, or do you need a minute?'
Simone indicated that she was fine and the three of them braced themselves for another several-hour trek, back the way they'd come. An hour in, the sun started to descend and spread a shroud across the woods. The cold air sharpened and a light drizzle spattered their plastic ponchos.
A couple of hours later they were descending another rise when Bethany finally said: 'how much longer is it? Shouldn't we be there by now?'
'Oh God...' Sophie was a little way ahead, staring down at something in the dark. There was a full moon above them and it lit her up in her red poncho like a Christmas bauble. Neither Bethany nor Simone spoke, perhaps knowing in their guts what Sophie was looking at.
They walked up beside and followed her gaze to a square of light between two trees, bisected by a black bar. They were looking at a window, and as their eyes focused they took in the contours of a cabin. 'How did you know his name?' asked Simone of Sophie. 'Why didn't you just say "that guy"? We were here, weren't we?'
Sophie's face had frozen into a death mask of pained realisation and regret. Regret that she'd bullied her friends into joining her for this trip. Regret that she was destined to feel again and again and again and again, always anew each time, until whatever strange intelligence ruled the universe decided to stop replaying the same footage. 'We're STILL here,' was all that she said.
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Wrong place, wrong time (22)
Josée and I are city folks.
We see Wild Life at the zoo.
Bored with the usual of
Sunday brunch at La Crêpe Dorée
We decided to plan on a hike in the woods
Something we'd never done before
We planned everything
Went to a sports equipment store
Bought the best from clothes to shoes
Planned as best we could using Google Maps
Early on the next Saturday we were set to go.
Backpacks, walking sticks and all.
We took the bus, exited two hours later and started walking
It was a lovely day - at first
Then whitish clouds turned to pale grey
Then to ever darker ones
There was hardly time for us to put on our rain gear
The sky valves burst open
Luckily we spotted a cabin not far off and decided to run for it
I knocked on the door, got no answer
Tried the handle and the door opened
As we entered we noticed the table set for two,
The plates filled with delicious smelling chili-con-carne
But there seemed to be nobody around
No sign of life
But of death
As I noticed the cut-off head on the stove
And I puked all over the chili
As Josée screamed and fainted.
We see Wild Life at the zoo.
Bored with the usual of
Sunday brunch at La Crêpe Dorée
We decided to plan on a hike in the woods
Something we'd never done before
We planned everything
Went to a sports equipment store
Bought the best from clothes to shoes
Planned as best we could using Google Maps
Early on the next Saturday we were set to go.
Backpacks, walking sticks and all.
We took the bus, exited two hours later and started walking
It was a lovely day - at first
Then whitish clouds turned to pale grey
Then to ever darker ones
There was hardly time for us to put on our rain gear
The sky valves burst open
Luckily we spotted a cabin not far off and decided to run for it
I knocked on the door, got no answer
Tried the handle and the door opened
As we entered we noticed the table set for two,
The plates filled with delicious smelling chili-con-carne
But there seemed to be nobody around
No sign of life
But of death
As I noticed the cut-off head on the stove
And I puked all over the chili
As Josée screamed and fainted.
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Anonymous
Parallel Universe
Madness is the bridge to cross
to enter the parallel world
stupefied by calmness of serenity
I look back and see
the molecules of nerve endings
in blue and red pulling me back
like snakes of Medusa
hypnotizing me as a cold stone
into oblivion
of realm.
There I am;
a speck of light in blackest black
dancing with my broken doll
with no arm
weightless and soundless
twirling in my white nightgown
with one torn shoulder strap
whipping against the raw skin
reminding me
of the pain on the other side.
This non-existence
stagnates all thoughts
the rendering flesh of my heart
trapped in a cage of bones
brittle and fragile
soon turning to dust
blown over bridge of madness
unto the other side
illusion of pollution
diseased imagination.
In the midst of my grey cells
a ruined dwelling:
Members Only
Admit One
No vacancy!
Madness is the bridge to cross
to enter the parallel world
stupefied by calmness of serenity
I look back and see
the molecules of nerve endings
in blue and red pulling me back
like snakes of Medusa
hypnotizing me as a cold stone
into oblivion
of realm.
There I am;
a speck of light in blackest black
dancing with my broken doll
with no arm
weightless and soundless
twirling in my white nightgown
with one torn shoulder strap
whipping against the raw skin
reminding me
of the pain on the other side.
This non-existence
stagnates all thoughts
the rendering flesh of my heart
trapped in a cage of bones
brittle and fragile
soon turning to dust
blown over bridge of madness
unto the other side
illusion of pollution
diseased imagination.
In the midst of my grey cells
a ruined dwelling:
Members Only
Admit One
No vacancy!
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
Strangeways_Rob, Wafflenose, nutbuster, lepperochan, James_A_Knight, robert43041, ReggiePoet, PAR, Honoria, Phantom2426, Grace, monovox128, Tallen, Marks, olivia
Thank you to the following members for voting:
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Hey Everyone, thanks for the votes.
It's good to be back and good to see some familiar faces again.
It's good to be back and good to see some familiar faces again.