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Old Writes Made New
Poetry Contest Description
Take an old write(or a new write I have no way of telling so if you really want to do more work be my guest) and remove half of the words to make it into a completely different poem. Preference to opposite poems (ex love/ hate; dark/light)
Rules and Guidelines:
-post the original work in the comment and post the new work as a contest entry.
- original work must be at least 80 words
-new poem must be at least 40 words
- light erotica is allowed but only one of the poems can be about sex
- 2 weeks
-Public judging
- As many submissions per person as you please
- Have fun!
Also, this is my first competition so please be gentle with me if I did something wrong. Suggestions and calling me out on technical errors will be appreciated
Thanks!!! Good Luck
-post the original work in the comment and post the new work as a contest entry.
- original work must be at least 80 words
-new poem must be at least 40 words
- light erotica is allowed but only one of the poems can be about sex
- 2 weeks
-Public judging
- As many submissions per person as you please
- Have fun!
Also, this is my first competition so please be gentle with me if I did something wrong. Suggestions and calling me out on technical errors will be appreciated
Thanks!!! Good Luck
Creampie Lies
"From the get go to him women are that leftover meal
So, there is no misunderstanding or a catch 22 about the deal,
"Forever the side biscuit and never the chicken
A candidate for cervix destruction and her nasty ass lickin,
"Not even on the level of Church's, KFC or Popeyes
Because the only nourishment given is hard dick and bullshit lies,
"Some say that's fucked up, evil and cruel
But he refuses to be another woman's fool,
"Never again he will be that simp ass motherfucker
His ex-wife fucked that up when he caught her with his mother,
"Caught the ho's pussy lip-locked on his lunch break
Trust and love in all women that day, became goddamn fake,
"The relationship he's in now just isn't gonna last
Before Easter roll around, she'll be packing her bags,
"Calling him all kinds of motherfuckas and screaming he ain't shit
But the wet memory will always remain of her pussy washing his dick,
"If she keeps his number and decides to call
The conversation will only be about getting her panties to fall,
"Or pulling them musty motherfuckas to the side
Making that back arch as he gives her the slow slide,
"If she gets emotional-fuck it, he will always feel fine
Because the bitch would be dropped like a snitch dropping a dime,
"Later it will not be no talking about getting back together
Just time for the heartbroken pussy bitch to disappear like bad weather,
"His friends say he acts this way because of the hurt
That's why the forcefield around his heart is putting in lifetime work,
"Electrified with pain inflicting 'I don't give a fuck' shock
The same as a dog bumper tied and dragged around the block,
"So, to all cheating ho's he doesn't care if they have a man at home
It's they're shit show while she pushes out his cum on that porcelain throne,
"Afterwards fold that toilet paper and wipe between those thighs
Pull that handle and flush away her creampie lies".
So, there is no misunderstanding or a catch 22 about the deal,
"Forever the side biscuit and never the chicken
A candidate for cervix destruction and her nasty ass lickin,
"Not even on the level of Church's, KFC or Popeyes
Because the only nourishment given is hard dick and bullshit lies,
"Some say that's fucked up, evil and cruel
But he refuses to be another woman's fool,
"Never again he will be that simp ass motherfucker
His ex-wife fucked that up when he caught her with his mother,
"Caught the ho's pussy lip-locked on his lunch break
Trust and love in all women that day, became goddamn fake,
"The relationship he's in now just isn't gonna last
Before Easter roll around, she'll be packing her bags,
"Calling him all kinds of motherfuckas and screaming he ain't shit
But the wet memory will always remain of her pussy washing his dick,
"If she keeps his number and decides to call
The conversation will only be about getting her panties to fall,
"Or pulling them musty motherfuckas to the side
Making that back arch as he gives her the slow slide,
"If she gets emotional-fuck it, he will always feel fine
Because the bitch would be dropped like a snitch dropping a dime,
"Later it will not be no talking about getting back together
Just time for the heartbroken pussy bitch to disappear like bad weather,
"His friends say he acts this way because of the hurt
That's why the forcefield around his heart is putting in lifetime work,
"Electrified with pain inflicting 'I don't give a fuck' shock
The same as a dog bumper tied and dragged around the block,
"So, to all cheating ho's he doesn't care if they have a man at home
It's they're shit show while she pushes out his cum on that porcelain throne,
"Afterwards fold that toilet paper and wipe between those thighs
Pull that handle and flush away her creampie lies".
Written by CasketSharpe
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