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The-Inked-Poetess
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 27th Jan 2022
Forum Posts: 1

Awww, the art of kneeling. The ultimate act of submission. Beautiful!!

Wh1skeySwagger
Swagger
Fire of Insight
United States
Joined 10th Dec 2019
Forum Posts: 940

Thank you poetess

XiaoLong
Thought Provoker
6awards
Joined 25th Jan 2019
Forum Posts: 92

Pussy on a Prye

 
her dark brown skin so lush
brightness in her roaming eyes
fullness on her lips. most easily blush
sensuous, believe me, they tell no lies
 
desirous. men know the place,
sensuous, they surely loves the taste,
symphonic chorus, crazy voices in grace,
luscious, naturists lovers with no haste!
 
undressing, freedom from a sharp gaze
bound with the softness synthetic lace
beautiful, the pulses are off to the race
her body awaits the morning embrace
 
longing for the wild moist full lips
circling around warm high cheeks
glowing wild orchids, beauties in elipse
waiting patiently, a breakfast in bed for weeks
 
her gorgeous thin pink lips
imprinted is this lustful mind
dawn’s desire in total eclipse
trembling body stay entwined
 
throwing kisses from temple to toe,
them lips, is a delicacy down below,
silky soft touches over the rainbow,
exiting wetness, her face emits a glow,
 
“baby! you got to not talk dirty,
ohhh, If you wanna impress me,
honey! You can't be too flirty,
gosh I know how to undress me!”
 
“I want to be your fantasy,
and maybe you could be mine,
uhh, when you leave it all up to me,
baby! we could have a good time!”
 
peeling gently through the inner layer
embrace the pink beauty with a morning prayer
glistening wetness, lick it, suck it with all his desire
a slave to the grandeur, her breakfast, her pussy on prye!​
Written by XiaoLong
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AspergerPoet56
Tyrant of Words
Scotland 33awards
Joined 4th Dec 2018
Forum Posts: 1899

Fury Of Submission




submissive fury
harking of her pleas and cries
in illicit fucking

Written by AspergerPoet56
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Bluevelvete
Tyrant of Words
United States 74awards
Joined 21st July 2020
Forum Posts: 2349

Lost and (pro)found (a submissive tale of enlightenment)


It's how that time can stand still
careful choreography
a push to the teetering edge
timeless floating amid deep space
each pleasure-pain colored stroke
hues of a secret reminder
where throes of freedom
are sworn in choice exultation

It's when absent-minded fingertips wander
to retrace the evidence
Reliving. It.
Ohh such delicious recall...
tender marks speaking truth
purposeful and precise
gleaming perfect ownership
redeemed in want and welcomed worth

It's why tingles of ghostly heat infiltrate
echo-ache memories
of dense pungent writhing
misty murmuring whimpers
cutting through
filling my silence
musically muffled
as fulfillment is earned
then spent
and hard earned again

It's where permission begets faith
trusting in a veritable absolute
desires commingling with breath
taking the give,
exploring limits
attempting dual enlightenment
hammering need into required sustenance
craving mad, are we two jackals
scarlet pulse
after
scarlet pulse
in agreed absolution
given
and
gained


  —is gifted purity of submittal







Written by Bluevelvete
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AspergerPoet56
Tyrant of Words
Scotland 33awards
Joined 4th Dec 2018
Forum Posts: 1899

enlightenenment
that is found
in the knowing
that pain
can bring
pleasures pure

written
welts
on skin
poetic
maddening
strokes

body and soul
pushing through
boundaries
giving the
senses a
new universe

sectets
revealed
like braille
fingertips
read the passion
of sibmission

recalling
silence
wetted violence
of forced
euphoria
of orgasm



SweetKittyCat5
Tyrant of Words
26awards
Joined 5th Sep 2018
Forum Posts: 1956

Mmm... Tenderize Me Softly

Heart, mind, and body, fate’s beautiful discretion  
Blending your soul in the realm of my chasm perfection  
A naked canvass, uncharted and blank      
Each footstep draws me closer to your heart’s plank      
Lover’s ruminate and tender poignant recalls      
Follow my lead and just continue to softly enthrall        
   
Revelations in the constellations under your domination you sink deeper to appease      
The benediction of my soul at the crossroads, whispering in your ear, “complete me”        
My lips covered, soft melodies in the progression of harmonic sounds      
Words of love uttered in the creamy sensations of kismet karma’s pound for pound    
The pulsations of blended auras seesawing, circling, retreating winding around and around    
   
Seductive caresses to tantalize the marrow as you taste the yearns of my soul      
Marinating in the rush as lust marvelously sow      
Entwined and locked we are a glorious fairytale      
In the stupor of heightened pleasure as times sweetly curtails      
Seduce the core of my mind and my body as you go      
Therefore, in my bed, pearly currents will always continue to flow      
        
Nibbana’s silken, emotions laden... mm... and softly driven      
An awakening heart given from the vocation of the galaxy has me seduced and smitten      
Those mending sentiments has captured the ingress of ecstasy’s sacrosanct cove      
Within tossed sheets we move as passion dips, beautifully tumbling  
Your mouth sweetly tasting the dew of my lips from many moons ago  
Bodies twisting and rumpling    
   
The stars in the sky are wondrously aligned    
Making a wish to prolong the desire of your need    
Once you slip farther and farther inside  
G-spot hitting, weakening the lust of my carnal greed, for the honey pour blissing  
Oh sweet mercy, burying your lust in the silken walls of my butter rum lush  
Clenching you tighter...its gets harder to breathe  
Head denting the pillow, my back arched, opening my abyss wider as you take what  appease  
Your touches are one of a kind, tattooing kisses to your chest wall, making you mine  
Falling in the moment of splendor’s sanctification by Heavenly designs      
        
Fused as one closing my eyes      
Romancing my heart, the essence of our spirits surging before the sunrise      
Coveting the wonderous of my temple as never before      
Enrapture we sunk into of its deprivation felt amore      
Instilling the elongation, buttocks cupped.. mm... there’s the throb  
Fingernails embedding your back, with each plunder, your streams of contentment my climax it robs    
Within the covenant of my naked obsession voices in union calling in hilarity above  
Begotten of savored honeyed drips upon the landing of his lips  
Mmm... tenderize me softly as my voice on the air to you drift  
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daniel3112
Strange Creature
Joined 7th May 2022
Forum Posts: 2

Wh1skeySwagger said:Fun with Photo Edits     nice photo

AspergerPoet56
Tyrant of Words
Scotland 33awards
Joined 4th Dec 2018
Forum Posts: 1899

The Depth Of Trust

serenely
kneeling
before him
his eyes behold
the most
beautiful of things

she patiently
awaits his
approval
if given
at
all

his voice
touch
a balm
knowing
it can turn
cruel

she
rubs herself
against his leg
as purring
cat might
do

in hopes
of appeasing
his stress
nothing
more
pleases her

his power
is absolute
he takes her beyond
no other
has had her
this way

no
other
will
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SweetKittyCat5
Tyrant of Words
26awards
Joined 5th Sep 2018
Forum Posts: 1956

The Depth Of Trust

serenely
kneeling
before him
his eyes behold
the most
beautiful of things

she patiently
awaits his
approval
if given
at
all

his voice
touch
a balm
knowing
it can turn
cruel

she
rubs herself
against his leg
as purring
cat might
do

in hopes
of appeasing
his stress
nothing
more
pleases her

his power
is absolute
he takes her beyond
no other
has had her
this way

no
other
will
Written by AspergerPoet56
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AspergerPoet56 said:

"As I would they say, my handsome moonbeam, how sweet it it"..🍷

poet Anonymous

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Bluevelvete
Tyrant of Words
United States 74awards
Joined 21st July 2020
Forum Posts: 2349

AspergerPoet56 said:
/452784-the-depth-of-trust/


There's the AP from the Erotic Underground of old!! Yessss, thanks for sharing.

Whew!... now that's a piece that scorches!!
Be still my beating heart.

I think it's past high time that we get our forum back to it's former glory.

Maybe Swagger and Val will pop in and make it a real party!.. Fingers crossed 🤞🏻

x

Bluevelvete
Tyrant of Words
United States 74awards
Joined 21st July 2020
Forum Posts: 2349

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Nevermindthegaps said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/452209-fuck-you/

Love the slow deliberate pace of the audio...it is fire.
Damn, Gaps. 🔥 🔥 🔥

"A pretty picture laced in cyanide"

*gulp

---------------------------
I'm glad you penetrated deep and found we like minded lovers of all that arouses, here in the bowels of the Erotic Underground.
We're glad to see a new face infusing a bit of welcomed debauchery!!

I definitely feel reinvigorated!


Lovely to have you visit.
🌹 - 🖤

Bluevelvete
Tyrant of Words
United States 74awards
Joined 21st July 2020
Forum Posts: 2349

a kryptonite of flesh.


 
a thunder of delicacy  
as formidable as it is tender  
under my ear  
almost to neck  
but  
not quite  
 
close enough  
to distinctly hear—  
 
every.  
single.  
breath.  
taken.  
 
which is done  
intentionally,  
of course  
 
as that spot  
is where  
all my willpower  
goes to die  
 
a  
 
slow  
 
glorious  
 
death.  
 
that spot,  
 
of my most sensitive flesh  
 
wired by nerves  
directly connected  
to my innermost core  
the sanctum  
of all  
that is  
welcomed torture  
and where  
unmitigated  
willing abandon,  
gladly  
awaits to be tapped,  
forgetting  
anything and all  
 
 
only to say  
YES  
 
 
 
 
 
 
to everything.






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AspergerPoet56
Tyrant of Words
Scotland 33awards
Joined 4th Dec 2018
Forum Posts: 1899

Discoveries of exquisite torment

 
Shibari rope burrows ecstasy into skin    
Nick Cave soundtrack's flawless ache      
I know these marks    
they'll leave perfect luscious proof      
I'll hide it for days after      
     
Sad attempts disguising disgraced panic      
     
Browbeating myself      
with shame waves      
thoughts of am I masochist?      
an internal struggle      
I hate to love having      
     
Change, swift and unpredictable      
comes in tendrils of exquisite warmth    
creeping a slow lip biting build      
lightning strikes my swelling clit    
with revolutionary throes      
     
Autonomic responses flail wild      
as I watch well rewarded markings      
morph a vivid colorscape of mending      
blue- purplish- green to yellow    
every healing hue    
is an enormous gulp of freedom    
after years of caged hiding      
     
Body and spirit align in understanding      
and so much more    
clarity forms our extricable bond    
solidifying a renewed want to relinquish control

His desire is decoded by my need    
     
The last of my stubborn will    
erodes away,      
power exchange replaces self stigma      
confirming      
pride in discovery of what I am      
     
     
     
at least for today.    
     
     
     
     
     
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Bluevelvete said:

love the tje image with this

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