Front Rhyme Feature
cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 783
The Memory Book
I sat down on a chair and began to take a look,
I finally found my father’s memory book.
I found it while I was cleaning the attic,
A book of love, but also dramatic.
As I flip through the pages, my life comes to me
Like a fishing ship coming back from the sea.
I opened the book and lost my frown,
I had found the time when I first went downtown.
I grew up in the country, my childhood was calm,
I grew up with my family, a loving dad and mom.
Then I went to college, my surrounding became new
Tall skyscrapers surround my brand new home, NYU.
There I met Jenny, the love of my life,
A beautiful, smart person, my soon to be wife.
Pictures of her standing there with me,
Pictures of us having fun near the sea.
There, at that spot, my life began new,
I met someone who loved me, and who I loved back too.
That was a story that’s fresh in my mind,
The story that made me believe in mankind.
But as I flip the pages, moving further back in the past,
I saw my girlfriend from highschool, a relationship I thought would last.
Not everything about our connection was bad,
In fact, something about it was the best thing I’ve had.
We met at church, the home of the Lord,
I went to the bathroom, I was getting bored.
As I left the restroom, I saw her by the door,
My mouth was agape, she was more beautiful than ever before.
Her name was Ava, a goddess at heart,
A woman of passion for music and art.
I asked for her number, we went on a date,
I made sure to bring her home before it was too late.
The dinner was incredible, our conversations were great,
I knew I needed a way to celebrate.
I was driving home, then saw a woman out the door,
She was in a dark alley, and looked like a whore.
Though I was tempted, I knew what to do,
Something about this scenario felt like deja vu.
I went back to my home, I said hi to my dad,
For the first time he was proud of me, and he wasn’t mad.
He said, “Son, I love you” and a tear went down my eye,
He’d never said that to me since my mom said “goodbye.”
We embraced each other, a hug like no other,
A new love had grown, even without my mother.
This was a memory deep in my heart,
This made me realize that wholeness comes from part.
As I flipped through my book, memories flooded to my head,
The type of memories that make me feel dead.
I flipped to the end, saw the latest memory,
One that would bring an end to my family.
I met my father in a place of sorrow,
He had nothing to live for, he would have no tomorrow.
He had reached a new low, he felt unknown,
He had a lot of money, but he lived all alone.
His will said that I would get every last penny,
Something that I really needed with Jenny.
He went on the ground and gave this final plea,
“John, how could you do this to me?”
“I needed the money,” I said in return,
“Besides, Mom died, now it’s your turn.”
So I grabbed my gun, put it right to his head,
And I shot at his temple, he laid there dead.
So I cleaned up the scene, no prints or DNA,
And I received his inheritance the very next day.
I lived the rest of my life happy, rich as can be,
And made this book to hold this memory.
I finally found my father’s memory book.
I found it while I was cleaning the attic,
A book of love, but also dramatic.
As I flip through the pages, my life comes to me
Like a fishing ship coming back from the sea.
I opened the book and lost my frown,
I had found the time when I first went downtown.
I grew up in the country, my childhood was calm,
I grew up with my family, a loving dad and mom.
Then I went to college, my surrounding became new
Tall skyscrapers surround my brand new home, NYU.
There I met Jenny, the love of my life,
A beautiful, smart person, my soon to be wife.
Pictures of her standing there with me,
Pictures of us having fun near the sea.
There, at that spot, my life began new,
I met someone who loved me, and who I loved back too.
That was a story that’s fresh in my mind,
The story that made me believe in mankind.
But as I flip the pages, moving further back in the past,
I saw my girlfriend from highschool, a relationship I thought would last.
Not everything about our connection was bad,
In fact, something about it was the best thing I’ve had.
We met at church, the home of the Lord,
I went to the bathroom, I was getting bored.
As I left the restroom, I saw her by the door,
My mouth was agape, she was more beautiful than ever before.
Her name was Ava, a goddess at heart,
A woman of passion for music and art.
I asked for her number, we went on a date,
I made sure to bring her home before it was too late.
The dinner was incredible, our conversations were great,
I knew I needed a way to celebrate.
I was driving home, then saw a woman out the door,
She was in a dark alley, and looked like a whore.
Though I was tempted, I knew what to do,
Something about this scenario felt like deja vu.
I went back to my home, I said hi to my dad,
For the first time he was proud of me, and he wasn’t mad.
He said, “Son, I love you” and a tear went down my eye,
He’d never said that to me since my mom said “goodbye.”
We embraced each other, a hug like no other,
A new love had grown, even without my mother.
This was a memory deep in my heart,
This made me realize that wholeness comes from part.
As I flipped through my book, memories flooded to my head,
The type of memories that make me feel dead.
I flipped to the end, saw the latest memory,
One that would bring an end to my family.
I met my father in a place of sorrow,
He had nothing to live for, he would have no tomorrow.
He had reached a new low, he felt unknown,
He had a lot of money, but he lived all alone.
His will said that I would get every last penny,
Something that I really needed with Jenny.
He went on the ground and gave this final plea,
“John, how could you do this to me?”
“I needed the money,” I said in return,
“Besides, Mom died, now it’s your turn.”
So I grabbed my gun, put it right to his head,
And I shot at his temple, he laid there dead.
So I cleaned up the scene, no prints or DNA,
And I received his inheritance the very next day.
I lived the rest of my life happy, rich as can be,
And made this book to hold this memory.
Written by JohnWilksLincoln
(John Wilkes Lincoln)
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said:
Thanks for your attempt, JohnWilksLincoln. You have quite some content here!
I recommend that you go back to the cover page and read the rules again. Two important ones are: (a) you must use front rhyme; (b) you must abide by the maximum word count of 50.
Sincerely
Thanks for your attempt, JohnWilksLincoln. You have quite some content here!
I recommend that you go back to the cover page and read the rules again. Two important ones are: (a) you must use front rhyme; (b) you must abide by the maximum word count of 50.
Sincerely
TIG
Joined 28th Mar 2018
Forum Posts: 43
Fire of Insight
Forum Posts: 43
Save Christmas
Christ the focus for the season
Heist the Holyday, dollars the reason
Revival, occasion, remember His birth
Idol of money ,see how much its worth
Sacred this day, let it be joyous
Tasted greed, retail annoyance
Manger where, the King Baby lay
Arranger store windows, selling the day
Save Christmas
Heist the Holyday, dollars the reason
Revival, occasion, remember His birth
Idol of money ,see how much its worth
Sacred this day, let it be joyous
Tasted greed, retail annoyance
Manger where, the King Baby lay
Arranger store windows, selling the day
Save Christmas
Written by TIG
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slipalong
Forum Posts: 858
Dangerous Mind
43
Joined 1st Jan 2018Forum Posts: 858
Shangri la
Folded in the arms of bliss
larks that sang
sold was I, in the express
dark beauty was the charm
Moulded like a passions stamp
hidden parts of fairyland
embolden on the notes that sprang
ramparts, in genders golden hand
Stolen dreams, the loss profound
bargain in the busy market
tokens where fairy rings surround
organ's song so now departed
larks that sang
sold was I, in the express
dark beauty was the charm
Moulded like a passions stamp
hidden parts of fairyland
embolden on the notes that sprang
ramparts, in genders golden hand
Stolen dreams, the loss profound
bargain in the busy market
tokens where fairy rings surround
organ's song so now departed
Written by slipalong
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wallyroo92
Forum Posts: 1874
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1874
Thoughts Escaping
I’ll try to write and make this quick
While the words swell up and spill
Surging like waves smooth and slick
Purging these thoughts with my quill
There goes my pen flying off wildly
Where the lyric strays into a dream
Chasing the thought almost childly
Racing to catch it like a moonbeam
So in this verse I caress the emotion
Slow to undress the meaning of it all
Touching the lines of creative notion
Clutching it close because it’s so small
Yet it won’t stay still it wants to soar
Set to tread the fabric of the fantasy
Spreading the idiom and ready to pour
Heading into a bliss that’s fun to see
No matter how hard I try to keep it
Lo and behold it slips through my fingers
What I wanted to write I can’t reap it
But the core of the idea achingly lingers
Written by wallyroo92
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cabcool
Forum Posts: 783
Guardian of Shadows
14
Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 783
Save Christmas
Christ the focus for the season
Heist the Holyday, dollars the reason
Revival, occasion, remember His birth
Idol of money ,see how much its worth
Sacred this day, let it be joyous
Tasted greed, retail annoyance
Manger where, the King Baby lay
Arranger store windows, selling the day
Save Christmas
Heist the Holyday, dollars the reason
Revival, occasion, remember His birth
Idol of money ,see how much its worth
Sacred this day, let it be joyous
Tasted greed, retail annoyance
Manger where, the King Baby lay
Arranger store windows, selling the day
Save Christmas
Written by TIG
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TIG said:
Hi, TIG!
Long time no see. Thanks for your participation.
How apt your entry for the season! Your front rhyme and word count are spot-on -- excellent; I hope you will do well in the runnings.
Sincerely
cab
Hi, TIG!
Long time no see. Thanks for your participation.
How apt your entry for the season! Your front rhyme and word count are spot-on -- excellent; I hope you will do well in the runnings.
Sincerely
cab
cabcool
Forum Posts: 783
Guardian of Shadows
14
Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 783
Shangri la
Folded in the arms of bliss
larks that sang
sold was I, in the express
dark beauty was the charm
Moulded like a passions stamp
hidden parts of fairyland
embolden on the notes that sprang
ramparts, in genders golden hand
Stolen dreams, the loss profound
bargain in the busy market
tokens where fairy rings surround
organ's song so now departed
larks that sang
sold was I, in the express
dark beauty was the charm
Moulded like a passions stamp
hidden parts of fairyland
embolden on the notes that sprang
ramparts, in genders golden hand
Stolen dreams, the loss profound
bargain in the busy market
tokens where fairy rings surround
organ's song so now departed
Written by slipalong
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slipalong said:
Lovely, slipalong!
Thanks for entering the competition. Your word count is fine and your structure (rhyme and linear) evidence some thought and intention.
Best regards.
Sincerely
cab
Lovely, slipalong!
Thanks for entering the competition. Your word count is fine and your structure (rhyme and linear) evidence some thought and intention.
Best regards.
Sincerely
cab
cabcool
Forum Posts: 783
Guardian of Shadows
14
Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 783
Related submission no longer exists.
Anonymous said:<< post removed >>
I see you have done a swap here, Rew. That's fine. I like the new relevance to the festive season.
NB I have asked Webmistress to remove Ray Ortiz [arortiz73 (MTP)] from the competition forum, since he has come just to upset the proceedings. I have also blocked him from interacting with me because he has spammed my private mailbox over the past two days.
Sincerely
I see you have done a swap here, Rew. That's fine. I like the new relevance to the festive season.
NB I have asked Webmistress to remove Ray Ortiz [arortiz73 (MTP)] from the competition forum, since he has come just to upset the proceedings. I have also blocked him from interacting with me because he has spammed my private mailbox over the past two days.
Sincerely
cabcool
Forum Posts: 783
Guardian of Shadows
14
Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 783
Shangri la
Folded in the arms of bliss
larks that sang
sold was I, in the express
dark beauty was the charm
Moulded like a passions stamp
hidden parts of fairyland
embolden on the notes that sprang
ramparts, in genders golden hand
Stolen dreams, the loss profound
bargain in the busy market
tokens where fairy rings surround
organ's song so now departed
larks that sang
sold was I, in the express
dark beauty was the charm
Moulded like a passions stamp
hidden parts of fairyland
embolden on the notes that sprang
ramparts, in genders golden hand
Stolen dreams, the loss profound
bargain in the busy market
tokens where fairy rings surround
organ's song so now departed
Written by slipalong
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slipalong said:
Thanks for this second entry, sliipalong -- just in time for the competition close! Now you have doubled your chances of a good outcome.
Sincerely
Thanks for this second entry, sliipalong -- just in time for the competition close! Now you have doubled your chances of a good outcome.
Sincerely
arortiz73
MTP
Forum Posts: 298
MTP
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 24th Sep 2013 Forum Posts: 298
(Removed due to consolidation of relevance.)
arortiz73
MTP
Forum Posts: 298
MTP
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 24th Sep 2013 Forum Posts: 298
(No longer relevant.)
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
nutbuster, arortiz73, wilberfloss, SatInUGal, marwen, AspergerPoet56, cold_fusion, Ahavati, lepperochan, Phantom2426, Marks, OG-Poetry, Ricky-Journals, Insiderew, Poems4me, Tallen, LunaGreyhawk, anna_grin, TCLilly, runaway-mindtrain, SweetKittyCat5, wallyroo92, archie23
Thank you to the following members for voting:
nutbuster, arortiz73, wilberfloss, SatInUGal, marwen, AspergerPoet56, cold_fusion, Ahavati, lepperochan, Phantom2426, Marks, OG-Poetry, Ricky-Journals, Insiderew, Poems4me, Tallen, LunaGreyhawk, anna_grin, TCLilly, runaway-mindtrain, SweetKittyCat5, wallyroo92, archie23
wallyroo92
Forum Posts: 1874
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1874
I want to thank cabcool for hosting such a cool competition and to all those who voted. I'm humbled to be nominated amidst many wonderful entries.
I hope you are all doing well and that you are enjoying the holidays.
Be safe and stay healthy.
Thank you very much.
I hope you are all doing well and that you are enjoying the holidays.
Be safe and stay healthy.
Thank you very much.
cabcool
Forum Posts: 783
Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 783
admin said:The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
nutbuster,
arortiz73,
wilberfloss,
SatInUGal,
marwen,
AspergerPoet56,
cold_fusion,
Ahavati,
lepperochan,
Phantom2426,
Marks,
OG-Poetry,
Ricky-Journals,
Insiderew,
Poems4me,
Tallen,
LunaGreyhawk,
anna_grin,
TCLilly,
runaway-mindtrain,
SweetKittyCat5,
wallyroo92,
archie23
Congratulations to you, wallyroo, for capturing the superior vote count in this competition. It is probably an extra drumroll for your Poet of the Week feature, which is still running live!
Well done, poet participants in general, for posting some rather interesting entries, showing differing levels of mastery over the rhyming feature. If you hadn't all bought into the idea, it would hardly have been successful.
Thank you, Admin, for organising the vote in this competition. And hats off to you, voters, who robbed some time from somewhere else to support this effort.
Let's find new and interesting competition ideas for 2021, even as you brace yourselves for the journey ahead.
Sincerely
Thank you to the following members for voting:
nutbuster,
arortiz73,
wilberfloss,
SatInUGal,
marwen,
AspergerPoet56,
cold_fusion,
Ahavati,
lepperochan,
Phantom2426,
Marks,
OG-Poetry,
Ricky-Journals,
Insiderew,
Poems4me,
Tallen,
LunaGreyhawk,
anna_grin,
TCLilly,
runaway-mindtrain,
SweetKittyCat5,
wallyroo92,
archie23
Congratulations to you, wallyroo, for capturing the superior vote count in this competition. It is probably an extra drumroll for your Poet of the Week feature, which is still running live!
Well done, poet participants in general, for posting some rather interesting entries, showing differing levels of mastery over the rhyming feature. If you hadn't all bought into the idea, it would hardly have been successful.
Thank you, Admin, for organising the vote in this competition. And hats off to you, voters, who robbed some time from somewhere else to support this effort.
Let's find new and interesting competition ideas for 2021, even as you brace yourselves for the journey ahead.
Sincerely
cabcool
Forum Posts: 783
Guardian of Shadows
14
Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 783
wallyroo92 said:I want to thank cabcool for hosting such a cool competition and to all those who voted. I'm humbled to be nominated amidst many wonderful entries.
I hope you are all doing well and that you are enjoying the holidays.
Be safe and stay healthy.
Thank you very much.
You are welcome, wallyroo!
I had fun organising the competition and was delighted in seeing the interesting entries that came in.
Best regards for the new year.
Sincerely
I hope you are all doing well and that you are enjoying the holidays.
Be safe and stay healthy.
Thank you very much.
You are welcome, wallyroo!
I had fun organising the competition and was delighted in seeing the interesting entries that came in.
Best regards for the new year.
Sincerely