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Erotica Done Right 18+!!!         REDUX

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Bluevelvete
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adagio said:Beneath dark wimple of moon
tonguing her night vesper
as a visceral rosary drips
sweet decay of menses
from her cunt's crucifix
before chanting of lauds
praying homage to the devil
giving birth to death
beneath dark wimple of moon


"sweet decay of menses
from her cunt's crucifix"
~^^I mean C'MON!!.... ~^^

I know I'm repeating myself...
however stressing the whole point is needed..
Lmao...
menses mentioning??
fucking hell people?!!!
Can I get an AMEN from da ladies..??
They'll be along at some point, I'm certain.
Keep on keeping on...
Please don't dumb anything down for the masses. I write enough "one fish two fish red fish blue fish" ... for them... derp.
(not dissing the Dr, only myself)
Your distinct brand, your dark 'flavor' reminds me of a NIN video... not all liked it, or even got it... but dammit they all watched it
food for thought
🖤



adagio
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Perhaps my mind is falling into decay!

Kinkpoet
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Bluevelvete said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/394937-5-star-review/


Maybe I need an intervention...
oki, I swears no mas...
🚿 🚿 🚿🚿🚿🚿
(one last good pummel...)


Got me slip slid in’
🤠

Bluevelvete
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Kinkpoet said:

Got me slip slid in’
🤠



tee hee hee
just what I needed.
more mental fuckery
my water bill....
not really complaining
A girl has got to do what she's got to do in the time of covid-19.
🤷🏻‍♀️
sorry NOT sorry
Ty for my mental sex candy
*giggles

adagio
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With entrails strings on cellos
and whispering bassoons
a sound of sorrow's melancholia  
so sweet the willows weep

Of viscera's dark's swoon
on a rumpus of stones
in dusk's Arcadia
of the raven's crooked nose

Flying over earth's ground
cloaking a shadow of death    
with a stench of pudding
draining into cisterns

With entrails strings on cellos  
of cloistered monks
grinding souls to cumin
so sweet the willows weep









Bluevelvete
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Anonymous said:<< post removed >>


pussy flowers make me soo happy
glad you're diggin'it

Kinkpoet
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Bluevelvete said:


tee hee hee
just what I needed.
more mental fuckery
my water bill....
not really complaining
A girl has got to do what she's got to do in the time of covid-19.
🤷🏻‍♀️
sorry NOT sorry
Ty for my mental sex candy
*giggles


mental fuckery seems like a pretty effective way to socially isolate.
😈

Bluevelvete
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I mean.....

Kinkpoet
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adagio said:With entrails strings on cellos
and whispering bassoons
a sound of sorrow's melancholia  
so sweet the willows weep

Of viscera's dark's swoon
on a rumpus of stones
in dusk's Arcadia
of the raven's crooked nose

Flying over earth's ground
cloaking a shadow of death    
with a stench of pudding
draining into cisterns

With entrails strings on cellos  
of cloistered monks
grinding souls to cumin
so sweet the willows weep

Great imagery!
🙏

Valeriyabeyond
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WHERE IS DIRE
, a legion
of his  own  
Blonde maidens he commands  
His legend is well known
 
Pull alongside him, tell  
me what you see  
The image of a warrior
a long braided goatee  
 
To catch him in your sights,
makes Motherfuckers turn  
for within every woman the need
for him burns  
 
Ladies hide your daughters  
from this beast and his  
loaded gun  
His behavior will ruin them  
Or whoevers next to cum  
 
His skill left the bedroom
it seems long ago  
His seed is his ammo from here
to Glasgow  
 
He's watched behind walls
through fences and vines  
To see why they scream his name through the night  
 
This warriors flogging of maidens  
in heat  
Should  leave him depleted  
and wear down his meat  
 
No
 
dire is strength he's one of a kind  
Forever he will be  
a legion of mankind

Kinkpoet
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Lubed
touch gets her lubed up
copious emanations
moist warm and viscous

Bluevelvete
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Kinkpoet said:Lubed
touch gets her lubed up
copious emanations
moist warm and viscous


viscous.
It's one of those 'bestest' words.
lol
(makes up for the uncomfortability factor of 'moist'... which I like because most do not.)
making someone slightly off-kilter.... yes please
*wee evil grin*
Ty for this nugget
🌙🌠
B

Kinkpoet
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Bluevelvete said:

viscous.
It's one of those 'bestest' words.
lol
(makes up for the uncomfortability factor of 'moist'... which I like because most do not.)
making someone slightly off-kilter.... yes please
*wee evil grin*
Ty for this nugget
🌙🌠
B


Yes, vicious is on my favorite words list.
🙏

adagio
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My mind bellows a litany of dark verse
Deep abyss of arid pale blue eyes
With a ganglion cyst of my curse
Luring the darkness of sins
Bleeding pox, mummies of my kind
As my lips defind your glory
Leaving prints on the papyrus
With antiquity of my prowess
Wandering in my own hell
Cold, the night, with infinite craving  
Sucking blood of all faiths and infidels
In shadows of tomorrow
My mind bellows a litany of dark verse
Deep abyss of arid pale blue eyes

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