Poetry competition CLOSED 8th November 2018 7:55am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
eswaller
and Sex_on_the_Joe
Hatred
Heart_symphony
Forum Posts: 60
Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 17th Jan 2018Forum Posts: 60
Poetry Contest Description
Write a poem about your intense feelings of hatred.
The poem can be about people, things, or experiences. Let your raw intense emotions rein free
2 poems per person max
2 poems per person max
Sex_on_the_Joe
Joe-D
Forum Posts: 274
Joe-D
Fire of Insight
13
Joined 18th Sep 2018Forum Posts: 274
Falling
Falling.....
The letter she left was read
Falling.....
Purposely left on the bed
Falling.....
My soul mourned over what was said
Falling.....
My casket envisioned, my life is dead
Falling.....
Her lustful affairs swim around my head
Falling.....
Tear ducts run swollen as they bled
Falling.....
Why she didn't just tell me instead
Falling.....
My heart torn out, with shrieks to shred
Falling.....
She coerced me straight to her thread
Falling.....
A pot full of false utopia was fed
Falling.....
My flesh cinders her memories with dread
Falling.....
How could I have been so misled
Falling.....
My blouse now dripping wet with red
Falling.....
The keeper's scythe, my shell was lead
Falling.....
Falling.....
Falling..............................................
Written by Sex_on_the_Joe
(Joe-D)
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Anonymous
Anonymous
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FreeLove87
SamuraiEde
Forum Posts: 43
SamuraiEde
Fire of Insight
1
Joined 24th Sep 2013Forum Posts: 43
Financial Frustration
Bills Bills Bills
More like mountains instead of hills
Think I’ll end it all with a bottle of pills
Well that’s jus nonsense on the page
But these bills have me caged
Barely making more than minimum wage
Surely you understand my rage
Paid one and then half of the other two
Swear that was all that I could do
And then came a fourth like a blizzard from the north
Freezing cold…like rolled steal
Will someone put these bills on chill…
Phone and lights, water and heat
Damn…guess tonight ill have to eat cheap
Life, home and car are so subpar
I thought insurance was supposed to give reassurance
And don’t let me get started on the taxes
Cause late payments got sums at their maxes
Current balance is becoming so hard to see
My time might be up…lets jus call it bankruptcy
More like mountains instead of hills
Think I’ll end it all with a bottle of pills
Well that’s jus nonsense on the page
But these bills have me caged
Barely making more than minimum wage
Surely you understand my rage
Paid one and then half of the other two
Swear that was all that I could do
And then came a fourth like a blizzard from the north
Freezing cold…like rolled steal
Will someone put these bills on chill…
Phone and lights, water and heat
Damn…guess tonight ill have to eat cheap
Life, home and car are so subpar
I thought insurance was supposed to give reassurance
And don’t let me get started on the taxes
Cause late payments got sums at their maxes
Current balance is becoming so hard to see
My time might be up…lets jus call it bankruptcy
Written by FreeLove87
(SamuraiEde)
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Anonymous
SatInUGal
Kumar
Forum Posts: 941
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
25
Joined 31st Dec 2015Forum Posts: 941
STALL
"gas the kikes"
Carved into the wall
Probably by a Jew because
We hate ourselves™
Carved into the wall
Probably by a Jew because
We hate ourselves™
Written by SatInUGal
(Kumar)
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SatInUGal
Kumar
Forum Posts: 941
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
25
Joined 31st Dec 2015Forum Posts: 941
*JUST TO BE SURE
Make love
And poison
The wars
Come together
Slip and slide
In milky venom
Tonight we feast
On the carcass of hate
And then make love again*
And poison
The wars
Come together
Slip and slide
In milky venom
Tonight we feast
On the carcass of hate
And then make love again*
Written by SatInUGal
(Kumar)
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eswaller
Forum Posts: 763
Dangerous Mind
31
Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 763
No Longer
I want to be watching as those sheets are burning into ash where we once made
Love in between them and were talking about everything there was to talk about.
You loved and cared about me? That is complete bullshit and I know it. That suede
And soft covering feels rough like calloused, overworked hands. I want to shout
Out until my voice gives out, being completely dead and gone like all the flowers
You once gave me. I should have left you out in the bone-dry dessert like drought
So you know what it feels like to be left stranded with no oxygen and rain showers
In sight. I hope you forget what it feels like to be happy when you try to smile or laugh.
I hope that the mountain that I can move within my bare palms scare and towers
Over you like the worst nightmare you could ever have. I do not believe every half
Ass apology that comes my way like a rocket ship because people do not apologize
For accidentally hurting someone’s heart they used to admire. All the photographs
Have to get burned and erased from memory. All the tears that used to fill my eyes
To the brim have no place in this raw and scrubbed body I call my own. I must walk
Away, leaving behind a blazing forest fire right at my heels and a trail of all the guys
That tried to screw or mess around with me, knowing that they are wrong, so talk
All you want to, but I will never believe another damn word that you say. You can
Say sorry for being like every other man along my path, but you are another rock
Beneath my feet. I no longer care if you are in my rearview mirror where we began
Or ahead because it is the direction you are heading, but let me make my own plan.
Love in between them and were talking about everything there was to talk about.
You loved and cared about me? That is complete bullshit and I know it. That suede
And soft covering feels rough like calloused, overworked hands. I want to shout
Out until my voice gives out, being completely dead and gone like all the flowers
You once gave me. I should have left you out in the bone-dry dessert like drought
So you know what it feels like to be left stranded with no oxygen and rain showers
In sight. I hope you forget what it feels like to be happy when you try to smile or laugh.
I hope that the mountain that I can move within my bare palms scare and towers
Over you like the worst nightmare you could ever have. I do not believe every half
Ass apology that comes my way like a rocket ship because people do not apologize
For accidentally hurting someone’s heart they used to admire. All the photographs
Have to get burned and erased from memory. All the tears that used to fill my eyes
To the brim have no place in this raw and scrubbed body I call my own. I must walk
Away, leaving behind a blazing forest fire right at my heels and a trail of all the guys
That tried to screw or mess around with me, knowing that they are wrong, so talk
All you want to, but I will never believe another damn word that you say. You can
Say sorry for being like every other man along my path, but you are another rock
Beneath my feet. I no longer care if you are in my rearview mirror where we began
Or ahead because it is the direction you are heading, but let me make my own plan.
Written by eswaller
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LunasChild8
Forum Posts: 540
Dangerous Mind
21
Joined 27th Dec 2017 Forum Posts: 540
Infierno
He pasado por una tortura estos últimos 5 años
Mi propio “protector” me dejó en el infierno
Dicen que la religion es para las personas que tienen miedo del infierno
Pero yo tengo espiritualidad porque he pasado por esta tormenta.
No puedo confiar ni en mi propio protector
Esta traición dejó un trauma irreparable en mi alma
No se lo que haré para superarla
Me cuesta continuar con mi vida sabiendo que todo ha cambiado.
“Que hago?” Me pregunto
Tengo un futuro aunque estoy en la mierda?
Hay un lugar para la luz y el amor en mi vida?
Deseo el día en que pueda sentir el látido de mi corazón otra vez.
Mi propio “protector” me dejó en el infierno
Dicen que la religion es para las personas que tienen miedo del infierno
Pero yo tengo espiritualidad porque he pasado por esta tormenta.
No puedo confiar ni en mi propio protector
Esta traición dejó un trauma irreparable en mi alma
No se lo que haré para superarla
Me cuesta continuar con mi vida sabiendo que todo ha cambiado.
“Que hago?” Me pregunto
Tengo un futuro aunque estoy en la mierda?
Hay un lugar para la luz y el amor en mi vida?
Deseo el día en que pueda sentir el látido de mi corazón otra vez.
Written by LunasChild8
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English translation:
I've been submitted through a torture these past 5 years
My own "protector" sent me to hell
They say that religion is for people who are afraid of going to hell
But I have spirituality because I've already been through this torment.
I can't count on even my own protector
This betrayal left an irreparable trauma in my soul
I don't know how I can overcome this
It's difficult moving on with my life knowing that everything's changed.
"What do I do?" I ask myself
Do I have a future even though I'm in deep shit?
Is there a place for light and love in my life?
I long for the day when I can feel my own heartbeat again.
LunasChild8
Forum Posts: 540
Dangerous Mind
21
Joined 27th Dec 2017 Forum Posts: 540
See You in Hell
It seems that morals and compassion have gone out the window
For you to consider someone like me as a role model
Your tastes have turned from bubbly warmth to freezing snow
Whereas people collect paintings, my decorations are human skulls.
-
I express my emotions best when I use my knife
I view the human body as a delicate sculpture that only I can improve
You’re stupidly naïve to believe my obvious lies
Whatever delusions you have when you stick your cock in me; I’m just fucking you.
-
Many lovers have taken their pleasure from me and enjoyed it
And despite my cringe towards the emotional throw-up, I enjoy a good fuck
But what makes sex even better is when your jugular vein gets slit
My mood’s improved, though their situation certainly sucks.
-
I’m a cold-hearted bitch with no tolerance for stupidity
I couldn’t give a shit about any emotional baggage
At least five times a week, I throw a body out to sea
If I’m not feeling lazy, I do enjoy torturing hostages.
-
I’d torture you all right now, but hey, I’m in a good mood
Instead, I’ll go easy and simply torch this auditorium down
With all of you dead, I won’t get any boos
While I’m at it, I might as well burn down this town.
-
I thought I was the one fucked up
As I take pleasure in your fear’s arousing smell
You plead for my cure even as your friends and loved ones get blown up
Someday, I’ll see you all in hell.
For you to consider someone like me as a role model
Your tastes have turned from bubbly warmth to freezing snow
Whereas people collect paintings, my decorations are human skulls.
-
I express my emotions best when I use my knife
I view the human body as a delicate sculpture that only I can improve
You’re stupidly naïve to believe my obvious lies
Whatever delusions you have when you stick your cock in me; I’m just fucking you.
-
Many lovers have taken their pleasure from me and enjoyed it
And despite my cringe towards the emotional throw-up, I enjoy a good fuck
But what makes sex even better is when your jugular vein gets slit
My mood’s improved, though their situation certainly sucks.
-
I’m a cold-hearted bitch with no tolerance for stupidity
I couldn’t give a shit about any emotional baggage
At least five times a week, I throw a body out to sea
If I’m not feeling lazy, I do enjoy torturing hostages.
-
I’d torture you all right now, but hey, I’m in a good mood
Instead, I’ll go easy and simply torch this auditorium down
With all of you dead, I won’t get any boos
While I’m at it, I might as well burn down this town.
-
I thought I was the one fucked up
As I take pleasure in your fear’s arousing smell
You plead for my cure even as your friends and loved ones get blown up
Someday, I’ll see you all in hell.
Written by LunasChild8
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wallyroo92
Forum Posts: 1871
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1871
Hatred Breeding Hatred
Hatred will only breed more hatred
Into a young heart without knowing why,
And anger will grow until it consumes you,
Living an empty existence until you die.
And as time goes by without letting go,
Of that very thing that had you wronged,
It will diminish you to a misery
To a vengeful fury that goes beyond.
It’s kind of like subjectivism,
Where one’s opinions always matters most,
But if empathy ever gets a hold of you,
Truth and reality can be a lethal dose.
Do not poison others with your despise,
Because it’s contagious disease,
For you will get nothing out of it,
But a cancer that will never appease.
Try to see the light for what it is,
Even in the darkest of corner of your soul,
Because the loathing will leave you stranded,
Leaving you with an empty hole.
Be mindful of the things you say and do,
When abhorrence drives you to no end,
Devouring the very core of you,
For one day it may be too late to make amends.
Hatred will only breed more hatred
Into a young heart without knowing why,
And anger will grow until it consumes you,
Living an empty existence until you die.
And as time goes by without letting go,
Of that very thing that had you wronged,
It will diminish you to a misery
To a vengeful fury that goes beyond.
It’s kind of like subjectivism,
Where one’s opinions always matters most,
But if empathy ever gets a hold of you,
Truth and reality can be a lethal dose.
Do not poison others with your despise,
Because it’s contagious disease,
For you will get nothing out of it,
But a cancer that will never appease.
Try to see the light for what it is,
Even in the darkest of corner of your soul,
Because the loathing will leave you stranded,
Leaving you with an empty hole.
Be mindful of the things you say and do,
When abhorrence drives you to no end,
Devouring the very core of you,
For one day it may be too late to make amends.
bigwolf
Joined 5th Nov 2018
Forum Posts: 4
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 4
snugglebuck
Forum Posts: 1873
Dangerous Mind
77
Joined 3rd Feb 2014Forum Posts: 1873
A Prayer for Forgiveness
Dear Lord,
I beseech thee
Grant unto me
The power and will
To expel this visceral hate
The poisons my soul
Boils my brain
And taints my taste
With bile and waste
Your only begotten son
Commanded that we love
One another as ourselves
Yet, I cannot escape
This infuriating hate
For a clans’ whose name
Invokes my bitter disdain
Lord, here is my sin
How I loathe those shallow
Stupid, good-for-nothing
Damn Kardashians
I beseech thee
Grant unto me
The power and will
To expel this visceral hate
The poisons my soul
Boils my brain
And taints my taste
With bile and waste
Your only begotten son
Commanded that we love
One another as ourselves
Yet, I cannot escape
This infuriating hate
For a clans’ whose name
Invokes my bitter disdain
Lord, here is my sin
How I loathe those shallow
Stupid, good-for-nothing
Damn Kardashians
Written by snugglebuck
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Sweet-Demons6
Aliss
Joined 18th Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 1
Aliss
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 1
VERSE 1: L15V5 TO H1T5 Y15U
New to to the fandom, new to twitter
Big accounts got my follow
Big accounts got my head
An old generations hate
Kept alive
An old generations scars
Carved into my arms
A hungry cycle taking the impressionable young
An angry cycle raising the new generation
Newbie to No Jam to Bête Noire
Army to Acrimony
I saw the proof, all the things done to us
I felt the pain, the phantom punches
The kicks when we were down
The spit on my face
I wanted them to hurt
Like we did
It felt right. It felt righteous.
It felt good.
No more people roam twitter
These dehumanized beings
They hate me
My shallow heart beats
To a spiteful drum
Sometimes I feel nauseous
When I'm having fun
No longer does a person roam twitter
My inhumane being
I hate them
Big accounts got my follow
Big accounts got my head
An old generations hate
Kept alive
An old generations scars
Carved into my arms
A hungry cycle taking the impressionable young
An angry cycle raising the new generation
Newbie to No Jam to Bête Noire
Army to Acrimony
I saw the proof, all the things done to us
I felt the pain, the phantom punches
The kicks when we were down
The spit on my face
I wanted them to hurt
Like we did
It felt right. It felt righteous.
It felt good.
No more people roam twitter
These dehumanized beings
They hate me
My shallow heart beats
To a spiteful drum
Sometimes I feel nauseous
When I'm having fun
No longer does a person roam twitter
My inhumane being
I hate them
Written by Sweet-Demons6
(Aliss)
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