Infierno

Aguanta, hay luz al final del túnel

Espero que si. Gracias por tu comentario.

de nada

A citação atinge o prego na cabeça. Um poema agradável. Como Lyrically Inclined diz, há sempre luz no fim do túnel.

Obrigada, Josh. Gravias por tu comentario. Es dificil tener esperanza, pero sigo tratando de buscar la luz.

This so makes me wish I took Spanish in school ... ugh ...

Haha, I would have added the English translation, but it wouldn't flow the same way. There's always Google Translate.

I know that happens ... have your read Pablo Neruda in his native Spanish ... I bet it is heavenly ...  

I haven't, but I'll definitely check them out.

Please do ... I love the English translations of his poetry ... but I have heard the original Spanish is so so much better ...

Hi LilDragonFly, my comment's in Portuguese (much harder than Spanish :))   )

Hi LDF. I've finally written the English translation, if you're interested in reading it.


I've been submitted through a torture these past 5 years
My own "protector" sent me to hell
They say that religion is for people who are afraid of going to hell
But I have spirituality because I've already been through this torment.

I can't count on even my own protector
This betrayal left an irreparable trauma in my soul
I don't know how I can overcome this
It's difficult moving on with my life knowing that everything's changed.

"What do I do?" I ask myself
Do I have a future even though I'm in deep shit?
Is there a place for light and love in my life?
I long for the day when I can feel my own heartbeat again.

¡Amo este poema! Siento profundamente tu dolor y tu decepción cuando tu protector te traiciona. Creo que, debido a que tu protector te deja espiritualmente, confías más en ti mismo. Winston Churchill ha dicho: "Si estás pasando por el infierno sigue adelante". Siempre hay espacio en nuestros corazones para la luz y el amor. Y a través de tu poesía digo que no estás en la mierda, la sabiduría no te permite estar allí, sino en lugares de belleza.
Me gusta esta frase: "Deseo que el día pueda sentir los latidos de mi corazón otra vez". El ritmo de tu corazón está en tu poesía. Se que la vida es dificil y los hombres nos abandonan vacios pero yo se que tu tienes el poder de llenar tu vida con gozo, paz, y belleza...confio en tu s abilidades.

Muchas gracias por tus lindas palabras, Gahddess. Hace poco me llene con una esperanza de todo saldra bien. Solo necesito tener paciencia y seguir adelante.

De nuevo, muchas gracias!