NoFap 30 Day Poetry Challenge
rabbitquest
Forum Posts: 2051
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 20th May 2012Forum Posts: 2051
Something strange has been happening to me lately
you see
awhile back, my mojo was siphoned off
due to writing some poetry
Poetry exposes your sole, and in my case,
allowed certain unknown third parties
to siphon out my mojo
via some poetic channel.
Well I am delighted to report,
that possibly
due to this competition
a fair amount of unused mojo
has been flowing back into my
account
My muscles are becoming more muscular
The length of my Panda Handle has markedly increased
And overall, I feel like I can now open a can of spinach with my teeth
Well that is just a quick FYI
I will repoirt in
as soon as there are any new developements
you see
awhile back, my mojo was siphoned off
due to writing some poetry
Poetry exposes your sole, and in my case,
allowed certain unknown third parties
to siphon out my mojo
via some poetic channel.
Well I am delighted to report,
that possibly
due to this competition
a fair amount of unused mojo
has been flowing back into my
account
My muscles are becoming more muscular
The length of my Panda Handle has markedly increased
And overall, I feel like I can now open a can of spinach with my teeth
Well that is just a quick FYI
I will repoirt in
as soon as there are any new developements
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
I’ll bite Case, I have no problem admitting I have no idea exactly what u want in a poem.
I am the last person to post erotica so I asked myself, is this comp geared more towards writers Who do? Smiles*
I am the last person to post erotica so I asked myself, is this comp geared more towards writers Who do? Smiles*
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2084
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2084
Zazzles said:I’ll bite Case, I have no problem admitting I have no idea exactly what u want in a poem.
I am the last person to post erotica so I asked myself, is this comp geared more towards writers Who do? Smiles*
I don't want erotica. I simply want poets to stop playing with themselves for 30 days and write 4 poems with a clean mind untainted by porn... am I really asking too much [especially from the men] ???
I am the last person to post erotica so I asked myself, is this comp geared more towards writers Who do? Smiles*
I don't want erotica. I simply want poets to stop playing with themselves for 30 days and write 4 poems with a clean mind untainted by porn... am I really asking too much [especially from the men] ???
Ahavati
Tams
Forum Posts: 16916
Tams
Tyrant of Words
123
Joined 11th Apr 2015Forum Posts: 16916
The Art of Fine Dining
I
A half-circled sun of yolk --
its soft liquid rolling over-easy
onto a pineappled-orange horizon
Wind scrapes the earth
as a butter knife over toast
while grape-jellied plumes
steamed from half-light
perking-a-pot of Sumatra gold
Window sheers became banners
pristine white in surrender;
caterpillar oceans reflected
light and shadowed movement
across the ochred room
Harbored candles shape-shifted
dying upon a basin of bed
and crushed cotton
damp with perspiration
Music absorbed as suds
across a Sakura’d shore
II
Our diaphanous musk became
a sybilline communiqué deciphered
only by a Baroque engraving
A flotilla of sixty questions sought
harbor amid nine answers from
strategic positions we never imagined
They didn't fall as darkness or dew
but held cataleptic in the air
until the tightening garrot
encircling our vast armada of bones collapsed --
swallowing salted breath
in a wave of white-foamed silence
Drowned were a thousand
guttural sounds situated
between two mouths full of
nothing now but teeth
tongues, and taste
~
A half-circled sun of yolk --
its soft liquid rolling over-easy
onto a pineappled-orange horizon
Wind scrapes the earth
as a butter knife over toast
while grape-jellied plumes
steamed from half-light
perking-a-pot of Sumatra gold
Window sheers became banners
pristine white in surrender;
caterpillar oceans reflected
light and shadowed movement
across the ochred room
Harbored candles shape-shifted
dying upon a basin of bed
and crushed cotton
damp with perspiration
Music absorbed as suds
across a Sakura’d shore
II
Our diaphanous musk became
a sybilline communiqué deciphered
only by a Baroque engraving
A flotilla of sixty questions sought
harbor amid nine answers from
strategic positions we never imagined
They didn't fall as darkness or dew
but held cataleptic in the air
until the tightening garrot
encircling our vast armada of bones collapsed --
swallowing salted breath
in a wave of white-foamed silence
Drowned were a thousand
guttural sounds situated
between two mouths full of
nothing now but teeth
tongues, and taste
~
Written by Ahavati
(Tams)
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( I'm assuming you meant 1 poem per week in our respective time zones? Can we post ahead of schedule? Or must it be within each week respectively? )
MadameLavender
Forum Posts: 5726
Guardian of Shadows
90
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5726
(week 3)
Gray Skies and Golden Earth
Crossroads never meant much
until
I stood in their desolation
anticipating
yet tempting storms.
Devils peer between scorched corn
awaiting decisions—
let them watch.
I prefer lashing winds
to encasement
in curled, heat-parched husks.
Each road runs
forever,
nothing in sight
but everything, ahead of me.
Plow in your sickle, O Lord,
harvest the Earth, and
bring me home
in the latter rains.
(inspired by my favorite piece of artwork, "Gray and Gold" by John Rogers Cox: http://www.clevelandart.org/art/1943.60 )
Gray Skies and Golden Earth
Crossroads never meant much
until
I stood in their desolation
anticipating
yet tempting storms.
Devils peer between scorched corn
awaiting decisions—
let them watch.
I prefer lashing winds
to encasement
in curled, heat-parched husks.
Each road runs
forever,
nothing in sight
but everything, ahead of me.
Plow in your sickle, O Lord,
harvest the Earth, and
bring me home
in the latter rains.
(inspired by my favorite piece of artwork, "Gray and Gold" by John Rogers Cox: http://www.clevelandart.org/art/1943.60 )
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
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Zaynab_kamoonpury
Forum Posts: 69
Fire of Insight
3
Joined 4th Dec 2017 Forum Posts: 69
Mankind in Dreamland
Pestered and pursued
by unknown foes
A topsyturvy land
where snakes can have horns
and cows can have fangs.
Night'mares' where the day's stallions
make mountains out of molehills
A chance to witness greek mythology-like creatures for real
For dreamland tis a place for the unreal and surreal.
Those hair-raising scary scary dreams
beset with horrified silent screams!
We do try to interrupt nightmares, pinching ourselves
With relief wake up to see there aren't any horrid elves.
We also try to interpret dreams filled with mystery
But gifted dream interpreters like prophet Joseph
Are now part of biblical human history
All in all, dreamland's fascination
for extra-ordinary exaggeration
and tall-tale imagination
Where myth and legend come to life
An amalgam of fiction or real strife
Where assorted monsters of the mind
reign supreme in that REM sleep of our kind.
Yet on the other hand the wishful, wistful sweet sweet dreams
where fantasies form mirages bordered by fanciful seams.
Where castles in the air that humans build, float gently down to earth
only to shoot back up unto nowhere from the awakened one's berth.
In dreamland a pauper girl can be a princess or fairy fair
for daydreams extend into the night and linger on there.
A quote I took to heart and it to console all and sundry
'that if your sweet dreams don't come true, don't you fret
for atleast your nightmares didn't come true either,
so just heave a sigh, by and by.
Every night let us all just fly away and escape
And lo behold the extraordinary world of Dreamscape.
Written by Zaynab_kamoonpury
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Ahavati
Tams
Forum Posts: 16916
Tams
Tyrant of Words
123
Joined 11th Apr 2015Forum Posts: 16916
Mountaintop
We celebrate distance as a summit -
release potential embrace
for a future moment to create
Letting go of anxiety, absence
envelopes Us, our fetal dreams
gestating, fluidly forming;
the curvature of their spines
unfurling in gelatinous forests
of vesseled bone and pulp
Calcifiying cartilage into stems
they extend the furrowed depth -
their pods now fodder for earth
From ashes to ashes, dust to dust
we depart to return, alternating choice
until our roots are terra firma
Yesterday we turned too-soon left
today, too-late right . . .
tomorrow, dead-straight ahead
toward millenniums of Love and Life;
Sometimes it isn't wrong to ask Death
to kindly stop for tea and scones;
Shall you have one lump or two?
It gifts its sickle as a walking stick:
a means to reach that mountaintop
~
💜
release potential embrace
for a future moment to create
Letting go of anxiety, absence
envelopes Us, our fetal dreams
gestating, fluidly forming;
the curvature of their spines
unfurling in gelatinous forests
of vesseled bone and pulp
Calcifiying cartilage into stems
they extend the furrowed depth -
their pods now fodder for earth
From ashes to ashes, dust to dust
we depart to return, alternating choice
until our roots are terra firma
Yesterday we turned too-soon left
today, too-late right . . .
tomorrow, dead-straight ahead
toward millenniums of Love and Life;
Sometimes it isn't wrong to ask Death
to kindly stop for tea and scones;
Shall you have one lump or two?
It gifts its sickle as a walking stick:
a means to reach that mountaintop
~
💜
Written by Ahavati
(Tams)
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No 2
rabbitquest
Forum Posts: 2051
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 20th May 2012Forum Posts: 2051
inside the safety
of cars
they could not stand
being alone
zooming by, i slowed
maintaining the appropriate distance
we etablished a relationship.
She slowed a little
giving me a polite way to say goodbye
i slowed too
surely she had others
who let her fade away
in their rear view mirror
between me and her though,
this was real
after a minute i gradually sped up
she did likewise
i felt the joy of commitment
watching her smile
in my rear view
suddenly
i chose to test her out
how much did she truly care
rapidly i passed the car in front of me
she wavered, confused
but in a burst of speed
she passed that car between us
i felt her stare in the mirror
it was sort of puzzled
up ahead was the McDonalds
I slowly turned in
into the drive thru lane
burning with anticipation
then heavy with despair
as i saw her drive on by
where did i go wrong?
maybe this was a little harsh
my tyres squeeled out of line,
jumping the curb
i passed several cars on that two lane road going 90 miles an hour
i caught up with her
slowed myself up behind her
not too close
tailing to suit her speed
but something wasnt quite right
slowing ever so slightly
she sped up to keep pace with the
1976 Corvette ahead
aah well
there are more fish in the sea
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
Forum Posts: 297
E.A.Rothwell
Dangerous Mind
6
Joined 20th May 2018Forum Posts: 297
Very nice, Rabbitquest..
good story...
got good road feelings
reading
down
the page.
Got my attention.... and kept it.
Righteous finish. Kudos... Write On! Ely
good story...
got good road feelings
reading
down
the page.
Got my attention.... and kept it.
Righteous finish. Kudos... Write On! Ely
MadameLavender
Forum Posts: 5726
Guardian of Shadows
90
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5726
Entry #4:
Fever
Blood rush and skin flush, make
flesh
melt like Dali’s clocks, exacerbating
humid dog-days.
I know why you burn, and
it’s not in lust for me.
Hypothalmic heatings, attempt
to incinerate
parasites, gnawing
from within, yet
to no avail—
I know where you walked, through
fields of wildflowers,
places that call to me, before
summer storms
challenge our existence.
They broke your skin, and
regurgitated their demons inside, eating
and feeding
upon your cells.
I know why you burn.
Tick, tick, tock
goes the time bomb clock;
tick, tick, tick—
it was you, they picked,
and I saw them on slides
under my microscope—
tick spit Babesia.
I know why you burn, and
the doctors will cure the fever
as I close down another day
in the lab.
Fever
Blood rush and skin flush, make
flesh
melt like Dali’s clocks, exacerbating
humid dog-days.
I know why you burn, and
it’s not in lust for me.
Hypothalmic heatings, attempt
to incinerate
parasites, gnawing
from within, yet
to no avail—
I know where you walked, through
fields of wildflowers,
places that call to me, before
summer storms
challenge our existence.
They broke your skin, and
regurgitated their demons inside, eating
and feeding
upon your cells.
I know why you burn.
Tick, tick, tock
goes the time bomb clock;
tick, tick, tick—
it was you, they picked,
and I saw them on slides
under my microscope—
tick spit Babesia.
I know why you burn, and
the doctors will cure the fever
as I close down another day
in the lab.
Ahavati
Tams
Forum Posts: 16916
Tams
Tyrant of Words
123
Joined 11th Apr 2015Forum Posts: 16916
Flashback: Acid 101
Vietnam: American soil
maroon(ed) southern roots
twisted around a civil war;
Nixon and tin soldiers
lay four dead in Ohio.
John F Kennedy: membrane
sliding down the limousine
shattering the American dream;
a souvenir of pavement
by way of conspiracy.
Martin Luther King, Jr: jawbone
disjointed, hanging by a tendon
cupped in the hand of a friend;
its severed skull conjuring
Injustice on the balcony.
Woodstock: retaliation's skin
stretched naked as a drum
nude as the day it was born;
its rebellion-beat vibrating
dense rhythms of Love.
Religion: exclusivity
crusading in judgment toward
pearly gates of heaven, Hallelujah;
Everyone else will burn!
epitaphs disgracefully soiled.
Politics: pandering parties
selective memory befitting interests
elephants, donkeys, independents;
lies and broken promises
lining their own pockets.
History: re-rep-repetition
"How can you run when you know"
it'll be waiting wherever you go;
despite any finger we point
the reflection is always our own.
~
maroon(ed) southern roots
twisted around a civil war;
Nixon and tin soldiers
lay four dead in Ohio.
John F Kennedy: membrane
sliding down the limousine
shattering the American dream;
a souvenir of pavement
by way of conspiracy.
Martin Luther King, Jr: jawbone
disjointed, hanging by a tendon
cupped in the hand of a friend;
its severed skull conjuring
Injustice on the balcony.
Woodstock: retaliation's skin
stretched naked as a drum
nude as the day it was born;
its rebellion-beat vibrating
dense rhythms of Love.
Religion: exclusivity
crusading in judgment toward
pearly gates of heaven, Hallelujah;
Everyone else will burn!
epitaphs disgracefully soiled.
Politics: pandering parties
selective memory befitting interests
elephants, donkeys, independents;
lies and broken promises
lining their own pockets.
History: re-rep-repetition
"How can you run when you know"
it'll be waiting wherever you go;
despite any finger we point
the reflection is always our own.
~
Written by Ahavati
(Tams)
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Ahavati
Tams
Forum Posts: 16916
Tams
Tyrant of Words
123
Joined 11th Apr 2015Forum Posts: 16916
)O( Totality
Lunar plum, umbra'd poppy
sunset's bloodshot eye;
port wine features beckon
our sleeping inner child
God of War advances –
blazing lesser distance
shields our solar plexus
defensively resistant
Mercurius stations --
courting retrograde;
consort Larunda flushes
orange to marigold red
This isolated collective
such combative energy
merges now with Creation --
One Blood-born totality
Reveling in completion
until veins bleed luminesce
stiffling childlike play
within its anchored flesh
~
💜
sunset's bloodshot eye;
port wine features beckon
our sleeping inner child
God of War advances –
blazing lesser distance
shields our solar plexus
defensively resistant
Mercurius stations --
courting retrograde;
consort Larunda flushes
orange to marigold red
This isolated collective
such combative energy
merges now with Creation --
One Blood-born totality
Reveling in completion
until veins bleed luminesce
stiffling childlike play
within its anchored flesh
~
💜
Written by Ahavati
(Tams)
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Week 4