Poetry competition CLOSED 28th August 2017 5:59pm
WINNER
gazellemon (Bradley J)
gazellemon (Bradley J)
RUNNER-UP:
wallyroo92
Rapping about how hard core you are.
I Aristotle full throttle debacle philosophical,
mind bender to pretender I'll have you pulling your own trigger,
finger action reaction transactions Bullet holes embedded in the heads of the deaded,
you talking but been beheaded by the dreaded,
one sun obi wan-kenobi son,
to know me it's shinobi dun,
giving overdone frantic radicals sabbaticals,
they comical to this phenomenal astronomical mythological beast,
feast on those that try exist in my co existence, absurd,
reserve superb resistance,
persistence usually key,
I disagree Pedigree a different degree stay omnipotent weather its point blank or from a distance range,
I rearrange making the deranged estranged..
I'm in the same position, supreme ops of opposition, No brigade with aide,
what's a crusade to a Christian? we all murder but I'm on a different mission....
mind bender to pretender I'll have you pulling your own trigger,
finger action reaction transactions Bullet holes embedded in the heads of the deaded,
you talking but been beheaded by the dreaded,
one sun obi wan-kenobi son,
to know me it's shinobi dun,
giving overdone frantic radicals sabbaticals,
they comical to this phenomenal astronomical mythological beast,
feast on those that try exist in my co existence, absurd,
reserve superb resistance,
persistence usually key,
I disagree Pedigree a different degree stay omnipotent weather its point blank or from a distance range,
I rearrange making the deranged estranged..
I'm in the same position, supreme ops of opposition, No brigade with aide,
what's a crusade to a Christian? we all murder but I'm on a different mission....
(Awooooooooooooooooooooooh)
Y' think your the big bad wolf,
bwouy am the fucking lion
M' the hunter who shot an arrow
straight through Orion
…..Am on fire and
I’m here behalf of the starving artists undermined by the liars
I tell you, bwouy,… get a little smart,
and be strong to fight your demons in your heart
Be a part , be the change in your c o m m u n i t y
Be the one to fly against the gra - v i t y
Reach for the high, from down below
Just don’t step on any of your bros
‘fore you lend your hands you better stand tall
and strong against when the fame wind blows
art has many definitions
some still look for inspiration
when you have no appreciation
break yourself from your own prison
this is not a competition
it is for the ones with vision
to fuck all the disillusions
of the rulers of the nation
take this fucking mic and scream for change
take your color cans and spray your name
in this fucking grey wall of fame
never hide yourself in shame
(in shame)
(in shame)
(in shame)
(in shame)
(in shame)
Y' think your the big bad wolf,
bwouy am the fucking lion
M' the hunter who shot an arrow
straight through Orion
…..Am on fire and
I’m here behalf of the starving artists undermined by the liars
I tell you, bwouy,… get a little smart,
and be strong to fight your demons in your heart
Be a part , be the change in your c o m m u n i t y
Be the one to fly against the gra - v i t y
Reach for the high, from down below
Just don’t step on any of your bros
‘fore you lend your hands you better stand tall
and strong against when the fame wind blows
art has many definitions
some still look for inspiration
when you have no appreciation
break yourself from your own prison
this is not a competition
it is for the ones with vision
to fuck all the disillusions
of the rulers of the nation
take this fucking mic and scream for change
take your color cans and spray your name
in this fucking grey wall of fame
never hide yourself in shame
(in shame)
(in shame)
(in shame)
(in shame)
(in shame)
Brainstorm The Bright Gentleman
The dark the part of the void
I am by gradually I expected something else
colors happen fast
there's not the bright light I expected to see here
Maxed out intravenous doses induce,
this state of in between each time I use
I sit in this space and there are columns all around
they support the thing I thought of when I was on real ground
I'm not earth
I'm not life after death
death may have torn things apart
but I will remain in the same body
I want was this body that has now departed.
I am part of everything that we've been able to coalesce
into it a snowball effect type of situation
that we will always respect
as if the representation of ending
is going to be something to defer my intentions
to become what I was going to think of as a new beginning
when the end was actually just the start of something that's repeating
Think of it as many mountains lined up into the same space that we occupy
I climb up the claim of you
climb up a peek just to drop down and other side
was gonna be the other place that I reside
I am inside this mountain
I am on top of everything
I am universe
and not just our thing
I never was able to realize that the bridge across the animosity
was going to the evening into this void like situation
I just figured out how to bridge the gap from one existence
into other parts of the world that we call the universe
universe is multiple of the plural
I am by gradually I expected something else
colors happen fast
there's not the bright light I expected to see here
Maxed out intravenous doses induce,
this state of in between each time I use
I sit in this space and there are columns all around
they support the thing I thought of when I was on real ground
I'm not earth
I'm not life after death
death may have torn things apart
but I will remain in the same body
I want was this body that has now departed.
I am part of everything that we've been able to coalesce
into it a snowball effect type of situation
that we will always respect
as if the representation of ending
is going to be something to defer my intentions
to become what I was going to think of as a new beginning
when the end was actually just the start of something that's repeating
Think of it as many mountains lined up into the same space that we occupy
I climb up the claim of you
climb up a peek just to drop down and other side
was gonna be the other place that I reside
I am inside this mountain
I am on top of everything
I am universe
and not just our thing
I never was able to realize that the bridge across the animosity
was going to the evening into this void like situation
I just figured out how to bridge the gap from one existence
into other parts of the world that we call the universe
universe is multiple of the plural
Written by VormStrom
(V0RMSTR0M)
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*Crown* Re to RTJ
Hand me your crown
Pass me it down
lend me what’s your’s and I’ll pay you with pounds
Purchase the throne with reverb and effects that we create and gave it all back to the crowd
steal from the rich
give back to me
lend me your shoulder and your ears of apathy
Show me the ways of the righteous
Hold up your flame to ignite us
burn away misery, frozen in mystery
give me everything that you can give to me
Make it worthwhile, the use of money never was versatile
Spend it on objects from foreign lands and fancy textiles
Charge them the best price and keep the world buying
advertisements continue the lying
Selling you everything that is irrelevant
Sell it to anyone you think you’re better than
Give them a world of technology
Ignore how it’s bothering the ordering of the following
Sanity is rapidly vanishing damaging the planet
Imagining life with no empathy for it’s own only for the battery
Worry no more, I’ll take the lead
Bury it in another man’s head
Send them away from here to a new place
promise they’ll never mislead you again
They become dead, I become death
You play with our air, we’ll take your breath
Remove the fallacy in all you’re imagining
replace the characters with people instead
Watch each person you just created make their way up from the degraded
onto the A-list, the top of the pyramid
Amidst the noise and drama
cleanse the big cats with accurate karma
send them to places they’ve never been to and getting back’s only made harder
the harder they try
The harder it is to reply
Send them a message to not mess with the village
we stand strong alone with the tribe
Rip the whole system apart from inside
Generalise, lead an army of stereotypes you pushed to one side
But didn’t disarm them of fight
Couldn’t disarm them of life
it’s written on parchment, the deal has been sparked, and signed in my blood on the line
Pass me it down
lend me what’s your’s and I’ll pay you with pounds
Purchase the throne with reverb and effects that we create and gave it all back to the crowd
steal from the rich
give back to me
lend me your shoulder and your ears of apathy
Show me the ways of the righteous
Hold up your flame to ignite us
burn away misery, frozen in mystery
give me everything that you can give to me
Make it worthwhile, the use of money never was versatile
Spend it on objects from foreign lands and fancy textiles
Charge them the best price and keep the world buying
advertisements continue the lying
Selling you everything that is irrelevant
Sell it to anyone you think you’re better than
Give them a world of technology
Ignore how it’s bothering the ordering of the following
Sanity is rapidly vanishing damaging the planet
Imagining life with no empathy for it’s own only for the battery
Worry no more, I’ll take the lead
Bury it in another man’s head
Send them away from here to a new place
promise they’ll never mislead you again
They become dead, I become death
You play with our air, we’ll take your breath
Remove the fallacy in all you’re imagining
replace the characters with people instead
Watch each person you just created make their way up from the degraded
onto the A-list, the top of the pyramid
Amidst the noise and drama
cleanse the big cats with accurate karma
send them to places they’ve never been to and getting back’s only made harder
the harder they try
The harder it is to reply
Send them a message to not mess with the village
we stand strong alone with the tribe
Rip the whole system apart from inside
Generalise, lead an army of stereotypes you pushed to one side
But didn’t disarm them of fight
Couldn’t disarm them of life
it’s written on parchment, the deal has been sparked, and signed in my blood on the line
Written by Benzy_420
(BTheW)
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Anonymous
As far as I`m concerned Gazellemon ...
here's my trophy to you
Damn, you killed it!
I`ve listened to a lot of rap/free style rap/rap battles
[Nothing to Say & Snow White, my faves]
all over the net, even from some of those thug life gangsters
living up and down my street,
and you`re right up there with them.
Great beat
Great lyrical flow for a Poet.
Look forward to your next entry
. 
